This creation, in particular, has evolved to a point where you consume it not just for its intended pornographic elements, but for the story. That is some real talent,
Mad_Koala. However, I think in the last update (0.30V), the writing for a crucial character development of the main character at the end with the newly introduced character Ryland was a cheeky approach to the depth of the material.
Diana’s character was written with really interesting aspects of “realism” and complicated characteristics within the context of an AVN. Despite being somewhat “liberal-minded,” her character up to this point was well-disciplined in expressing personal affection. The idea that she would be remorselessly and so easily consumed by one of the main climax goals of the whole project is absurd because you would naturally be waiting for this moment with utmost wonder about how the creator would bring such an important turning point to life with a well-written project like this.
For example, the scene of Diana with her boss, Mark in a robe talking while the guy's psychology towards his “agent of hope for justice” starts to change, shows with very subtle elements that ignite the atmosphere was very impressive. Even with a past full of memories, the far Diana went with Ryland was unacceptable. And yes, you can skip it, but the relationship status was just starting to build up so if you do skip it, it would backfire in the future when you feel like it’s time for such intimate moments to blossom.
These are some personal takes on this project, and I hope the creators will take this as “constructive criticism”. I like this project and am a devotee for this project.
