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VN Ren'Py Elite Garden [Ep.4] [A&K Studio]

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SpyderArachnid

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Honestly not that bad. Without it being a harem though, I don't see the reason to push the girls on the MC. It feels like everything is going to be forced, without any choices. The MC is just mindlessly flirting with every girl, and they are all swooning over him rather quickly. Even the supposed snobby angry girl is the first one to kiss him and take him to bed and almost have sex with him already.

If you're not going to have a harem, don't force girls on the MC. Keep things friendly till we actually make a choice to be with a girl or not. Otherwise, you ruin the whole point of having to pick our LI, and then force unnecessary drama on the player.

Other than that, everything else was okay. Typical run of the mill college game, though spending that experience with your brother and sister as well. Decent amount of content and choices (though missing choices where it felt like some were necessary). Didn't notice too many grammar errors, so plus on that. Renders are fine (at least, good enough for me. I'm not too much of a stickler on that).

Phone needs a lot of work though. All the messages are bunched into one. So, you have no idea who is even texting or who the messages are from, as there are no names or anything. It is all just one message window with texts from everyone all mashed together. So yeah, that needs a lot of work.

So, if you don't mind another college game, give it a go. It's not that bad. Personally, rather tired of the same college life games always coming out but will still give it a fair shot at least. Thanks for your work and best of luck with your project. ;)
 

Old Man Al

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Very good start.

Of course the setting isn't new, quite the opposite, but the characters are lively and likeable (except two jerk rich males but that is kind of their job).
Renders are very good and all kind of tastes in women are covered: the hot blondie, the sweet asian, the snooty rich and ridiciously good looking tsundere, the freckled girl, the older woman at the desk that still is hot and so on - I really think every taste is covered, unless you are into black woman. Didn't see one. And mostly talking about looks here, not necessarily the personalities. They can be surprising. But they are all well written.
Story is good (a bit worn out but well told). No one acts unbelievable. English and dialogues are spot on.
The dynamic with his siblings and mom is very lovely (no incest and I doubt there ever will be because it simply wouldn't fit) and thus believable. These guys/gals really care about one another.
Music is fitting and not that stuff you hear in nearly every VN that doesn't use something original.
Length is pretty impressive for a first release too.

MC is no push-over (unless you chose too I guess, didn't try that). Choices are there, but not THAT many - enough though for my taste. Don't know the level of impact they have.

So, as I said, very good start. Would rate 0.1 5/5. If the dev @A&K Studio can keep this level if will become one of my favorites and maybe I'll even back them later on. :)
 

Alex5280

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Preview pics look pretty good. What kind of update schedule are the devs planning for this one?
 

Saint Blackmoor

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Wonder why the dev is mum on future tags. :cautious: Possibly doesn't know the direction the games going or waiting to see what the peanut gallery is yammering for. That's not a bad plan, sorta like a focus group thing. Just guessing.

I've noticed a pattern here on F95. Typically the first page has a comment about a particular thing in the game, in this case, copied school setting and similar models, and as a lemming following the asshole in front of it, other members go over the cliff of commenting on the same thing (not in a good way) that has the effect of driving some members away. Sadly this is human nature in action, to be part of the group and not stand out. I'm not shaming anyone. Just pointing out an instinct of human nature.

Apologies to AKStudio for using the game as an example.
 

Allan Wolf

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simple solution would be for the dev to put the future tags and which ones will be discarded completely but they prefer to observe the discussions first and then make a decision... I think this is unfortunate

regrettable is also the usual sameness in some games kkk
 
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Probably won't be my cup of tea as I am really averse to forceful choosing of a single girl, but the renders look good enough to at least give it a try. If the story is above average and the releases in a timely manner that might offset it.

However, first of all I'd like to know if anal is a planned tag?
 

Bailz

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still no answer on if the sister will get dicked down by a boyfriend, so ill just wait to try it considering there is no incest planned so it technically wont be the three letters of doom if it happens :(
 
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still no answer on if the sister will get dicked down by a boyfriend, so ill just wait to try it considering there is no incest planned so it technically wont be the three letters of doom if it happens :(
As long as we aren't forced to see it OR the boyfriend, nor HEAR about it, I'll be ok. I haven't tried it yet, but, which one is the sister? If it's the redhead who kisses the MC on the cheek, then I'm out. She's the only one in the screens that I like.
 

Bailz

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As long as we aren't forced to see it OR the boyfriend, nor HEAR about it, I'll be ok. I haven't tried it yet, but, which one is the sister? If it's the redhead who kisses the MC on the cheek, then I'm out. She's the only one in the screens that I like.
not sure since i haven't tried it yet but i agree she looks the best so would be a major disappointment if she is the sister
 

bacienvu88

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Because with 30K AVN's and counting there's plenty of other stories that people actually prefer. Just NTR alone is enough to make people go berserk in posts, not just say "fuck the story". For many gay shit people don't wanna see is a dealbreaker (it's why the tag exists). Lack of incest or lolis is another (though not nearly NTR-level). Want a good story = get a Kindle and go to Amazon or watch a 8-10/10 movie suggested from IMDB. Pirate AVN porn site = most people are here to fap, and most of those prefer different things that make them need to change their underwear.
Just want to fap? Go to pornhub.

Some people want a bit of porn with their story. Other people want a bit story with their porn. Both have lots of games here.
As long as we aren't forced to see it OR the boyfriend, nor HEAR about it, I'll be ok. I haven't tried it yet, but, which one is the sister? If it's the redhead who kisses the MC on the cheek, then I'm out. She's the only one in the screens that I like.
Nope. Sis is the blurry girl in the last picture (foreground is mom).
 
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