VN Ren'Py Abandoned Elite Garden [Ep.4] [A&K Studio]

[dolfe67]

MC seems to have some PTSD regarding his alcoholic father. There were flashbacks, but they, and other things are quite easy to miss in this game since the dev uses timers for some slides and animations. If you are, like me, rather clicky, you can jump right over them and never know they were there.

Yeah the default transition between images (dissolve) is too slow, and some images sequences should have a small pause between them, they come one after another too fast.

Also the transition between scenes could use some work, I don't feel the time passing. The concept of time is a bit lost imo.

 

[Jace_Herondale]

School story is so over used but at least it's got likable characters and some extremely hot women. I'm okay with a slow build but if the dev keeps blue balling us not going to be playing it much longer.

This is the second update. This is not even close to being a slow-burn

 

[Miss Kobayashi's]

A very good game with potential, I will wait for the continuation, good luck with the continuation of the game to the developer

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

WTF happened to the sport in this update? It was clear in the first episode the football which MC and Carlos play is not American football, but in this episode they're wearing shoulder pads (no helmets,) throwing and holding an American football, and there are hashes on the field. While talking about playing "matches" on the "pitch" instead of "games" on the "field." It really feels like the dev sold out his non-American football to switch over to having his characters playing a sport he really doesn't know well enough. I'm an American, but I take no offense and don't get confused when non-Americans refer to a different sport than what I think of first when I hear "football." Pick the sport you know, dev. Trying to change it to a sport you don't understand part way into the game (to appease potential patrons?) is not a good idea.

Maybe next update they will have lacrosse sticks in their hands too. Anyway good update but not much lewd scenes, really want to bang that hot blonde coach and that redhead Catherine and Mason needs to be taken out

 

[ZARA-LOVE]

This is just the beginning, but I already liked the game. The plot is quite interesting, nice models of girls, GG is not a stupid teenager, and overall everything is going well. I hope the author does not abandon the game, I wish him promotion and success

 

[bardock8114]

So we had all this build up in Episode 1 and there is not even ONE Interaction with Kiara? I even dieched everyone else to talk to her.........

 

[dmico]

Is the coach a planned LI?

 

[hysepReC]

Is the coach a planned LI?

She's not in the banner and hasn't shown any interest in the MC so i doubt it. I think six LIs is more than enough for a non-harem game anyway.

 

[Ragnar]

Is the coach a planned LI?

No, the main LIs are the ones in the OP banner. The devs said there will be some more introduced later. I think it would be +1 making that a total of 7 girls with their own routes plus some side girls to fool around. The coach can have some content but we don't know yet.
4 or 5 routes like in Become a Rock Star or BaDIK would be more manageable but that's my opinion.

 

[dmico]

No, the main LIs are the ones in the OP banner. The devs said there will be some more introduced later. I think it would be +1 making that a total of 7 girls with their own routes plus some side girls to fool around. The coach can have some content but we don't know yet.
4 or 5 routes like in Become a Rock Star or BaDIK would be more manageable but that's my opinion.

Thanks! I don't even need her to be an interest. I just hope we can get to have some fun with her, based on the player's choice ofcourse. 7 LIs will be okay, though.

 

[Bucketbot89]

Not that this game needs anymore full LIs, but if the dev does add them, here's who I hope up end up making the cut:

Spoiler: Elizabeth, Jessica, or any of the other cheerleaders

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[cab18+]

...it won't be an harem. If at some point you decide to go for multiple partners, it will, sooner or later, catch up to you

I'll just end the game a bit before the 'later'...

 

[seth21ti]

A very good game with potential. I really hopping to have a harem rout. I will hate to chose between those girls

 

[kartolas]

no harem no incest peace im in and gl with ur game dev

aaaanyway, why not ask the player if he's interested in Kiara after the date? Also why the sudden decision making when we have been interacting with a lot of girls without having to decide yet?

 

[Amemester]

Damn good game

 

[onefingersalute]

cool renders look good and so does this will check it out

 

[kartolas]

Very good job. Almost forgot I was playing a porn game if it wasn't for the way all woman were drooling over the MC. I guess that's almost unavoidable even where there is an interesting story with mystery that makes you literally wait for the next episode which is rare for me. There's a bit too much of characters thinking for themselves that is not necessary, 90% of it we can guess by their faces. Fred can be funny, congrats on that.

Thank you and the best of luck.

 

[Ursus4321]

I love how careful this game is. The gestures, the small movements of the eyes that express much more than words... Dev you have all my admiration. Congratulations on the great job you are doing. It shows that you put a lot of love into your game

 

[Exanadae]

Maybe there's something sneaky going on, but there's a couple of dialogue sections gated behind having 4 or 5 emily points, but there doesn't seem to be an opportunity to earn more than 2 points for her in total.

 

[Hildegardt]

Maybe there's something sneaky going on, but there's a couple of dialogue sections gated behind having 4 or 5 emily points, but there doesn't seem to be an opportunity to earn more than 2 points for her in total.

I noticed that, too, so I looked into the script, but I couldn't find anything. I don't think there are any missable scenes, yet.