VN Ren'Py Elleria [v0.7 Ch. 3] [M.C Games]

[Mystic]

I am just starting to play it but I see that it has several problems if you change the name to Mc, in several moments they refer to him as Magnus even though you put another name

His name is Eliot Magnus. Magnus is his surname, you only change his first name ( Eliot ). From time to time, he is referred to by his surname. Most the times it is by his first name however.

 

[Tuatha Dé]

His name is Eliot Magnus. Magnus is his surname, you only change his first name ( Eliot ). From time to time, he is referred to by his surname. Most the times it is by his first name however.

I had forgotten about it until I met Aria.

 

[Mystic]

I had forgotten about it until I met Aria.

Fair point mate.

 

[Tuatha Dé]

Fair point mate.

another thing, it is going to be explained why the mc can't use tempest for as long as Elvira (who seems to have learned that enchantment from the mc), it would be good to explain the difference between magic, enchantment and innate abilities so that it is clear how they work, maybe in the codex.

 

[Mystic]

another thing, it is going to be explained why the mc can't use tempest for as long as Elvira (who seems to have learned that enchantment from the mc), it would be good to explain the difference between magic, enchantment and innate abilities so that it is clear how they work, maybe in the codex.

I think you can already find an entry on Innate Abilities within codex, the OTHER section of it.

But yeah, he mentions it some point later on. Specifically about it.

 

[BGRW2020]

Hope we all get to see Lyria again? she was a real good character

 

[Mystic]

Hope we all get to see Lyria again? she was a real good character

Yes.

 

[D4rkK1ng]

Hope we all get to see Lyria again? she was a real good character

Eris have a tragic story with MC from what we saw and she is goddess literaly
and most beautiful LI is Elvira ..(in my opionion)
Aria is very interesting and also beautiful too
but the Li i become attached the most is Lyria by far she my favorite LI ,
i dont mind if mc split up for a while with the other li but i really hope MC can reunite soon with Lyria.. their split up is a tragedy..

Probably though at the end of the game i will go for harem route with lyria, elvira,aria and eris (all 4 are mine)
the harem route is very compatible and good in this game.

 

[D4rkK1ng]

Yes.

i want to say thank you for your work
i wrote a review already, but i want to congratulate here too..
im new in VN world but i have play few dozens VN (too much free time lol) already
and with very few VN i become so engrossed while playing.
You have created something beautiful in my opinion.
all the 4 Li are fantastic and each one unique and beautiful on their one way.. this a of the few VN which harem route is the only choice.
i liked how you introduced the goddess eris and how u teased us about their old history while givings us info that mc lost a part of his memory and probably had romance with the goddess (what a chad)
elvira too is beautiful and probably a martial genius?
aris is a wizard genius and it will teach mc magic. (i liked her personality too and of course she is beautiful)
Lyria is one of most sweet/wholesome li i a have seen in Vn ... and my favorite LI by far.
the guild master is very good charachter too (and yea i loved the reference to the kingdoms of heaven)

the only thing im curious is why mc seems so weak?
while he is living for centuries (almost 1000+ years ?) probably because he have lost some of his memories? in comparison to the elvira and aris or even that small dragon.

one last thing about MC ... i hope he will more assertive with his feeling with the LI in the feature .. but i completely understand why he is like this until now (paladin oaths/ im playing dnd so im familiar with them) , after lyria i hope we see a improvement about his mentality on this subject.


ps the split up of MC with lyria is tragedy i hope u will reunite them soon ^^

 

[Punto]

Wait for an update

 

[Mystic]

Eris have a tragic story with MC from what we saw and she is goddess literaly
and most beautiful LI is Elvira ..(in my opionion)
Aria is very interesting and also beautiful too
but the Li i become attached the most is Lyria by far she my favorite LI ,
i dont mind if mc split up for a while with the other li but i really hope MC can reunite soon with Lyria.. their split up is a tragedy..

Probably though at the end of the game i will go for harem route with lyria, elvira,aria and eris (all 4 are mine)
the harem route is very compatible and good in this game.

I'd say it can be considered such from her perspective at least. Second part, taste is not to be discussed so... I won't.

Yes. Just yes.

Apparently that seems to be a case for most.

Yes, once again. Yes.

Yep, think it is.

i want to say thank you for your work
i wrote a review already, but i want to congratulate here too..
im new in VN world but i have play few dozens VN (too much free time lol) already
and with very few VN i become so engrossed while playing.
You have created something beautiful in my opinion.
all the 4 Li are fantastic and each one unique and beautiful on their one way.. this a of the few VN which harem route is the only choice.
i liked how you introduced the goddess eris and how u teased us about their old history while givings us info that mc lost a part of his memory and probably had romance with the goddess (what a chad)
elvira too is beautiful and probably a martial genius?
aris is a wizard genius and it will teach mc magic. (i liked her personality too and of course she is beautiful)
Lyria is one of most sweet/wholesome li i a have seen in Vn ... and my favorite LI by far.
the guild master is very good charachter too (and yea i loved the reference to the kingdoms of heaven)

the only thing im curious is why mc seems so weak?
while he is living for centuries (almost 1000+ years ?) probably because he have lost some of his memories? in comparison to the elvira and aris or even that small dragon.

one last thing about MC ... i hope he will more assertive with his feeling with the LI in the feature .. but i completely understand why he is like this until now (paladin oaths/ im playing dnd so im familiar with them) , after lyria i hope we see a improvement about his mentality on this subject.


ps the split up of MC with lyria is tragedy i hope u will reunite them soon ^^

Yeah well, thank you for the said words. Though no need to thank, as long as there are people who enjoy it, I'll enjoy working on it. Motivation enough for me. Nonetheless appreciate the kind words honestly, a rarity these days.

Uh... as for your question... he isn't weak per se honestly. Just... not up to par with others at the given moment. World is a big place. And no, he didn't live for over 1k +. He was dead, then born again and grew up in normal fashion. So it wasn't continuous there was a gap between it all.

Also that dragon was kinda like half a bloody mountain size, not exactly small.

Other question... yes, eventually. Eventually is key word here. Not too quick, not too slow either.

Wait for an update

Mmh. Soon enough. Was away for some rest for a week, though I'd suggest joining and keeping track on my discord. You won't find me here anymore as before, especially after this upcoming wrap up update. Not sure I'll be sticking around here anymore, or anywhere else except my discord.

 

[Gorse]

Eventually, here are some Fan Sigs for "ELLERIA":

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ELVIRA - Fan Signature
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ERIS - Fan Signature
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ARIA - Fan Signature
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[DevinHesi]

Been a while, time to get back into this. So, not the most cheerful one to start of with. Still... if you can't control em, put em in a cage.

 

[Irad]

I've been skipping through this for two reasons. 1) It's overly verbose, and in strange places. The blackmailing sequence with strange-eye-mage-person went on and on, would have gained from shaving the text pretty heavily. Same with the scene where Li-something tells the MC to not ignore the white haired chick. Several clicks too long. 2) This is a technical thing, and I've never looked into what causes it, but the thing where you have to click twice to go from "text 1" to "text 2", like there's an intermission picture in between? I find it insanely annoying from because my reading speed keeps being interrupted. It's reads better if I skip ahead and use the roll-back function.

I also really didn't like the lack of real options. Esp. the laying of the elf sequence I found unpleasant, I'd've chosen pass on that one if able. I found no combination of earlier choices that let me avoid it. Same in the presence of the self-proclaimed god, a choice to deny her (even if that would've led to a game over) would've been nice.

Edited to add: Wrote this after having dropped it during the follow-up chat with the mage with the shiny eyes. Couldn't recall the names days later, thus the dumb nicknames above.

 

[motseer]

I've been skipping through this for two reasons. 1) It's overly verbose, and in strange places. The blackmailing sequence with strange-eye-mage-person went on and on, would have gained from shaving the text pretty heavily. Same with the scene where Li-something tells the MC to not ignore the white haired chick. Several clicks too long. 2) This is a technical thing, and I've never looked into what causes it, but the thing where you have to click twice to go from "text 1" to "text 2", like there's an intermission picture in between? I find it insanely annoying from because my reading speed keeps being interrupted. It's reads better if I skip ahead and use the roll-back function.

I also really didn't like the lack of real options. Esp. the laying of the elf sequence I found unpleasant, I'd've chosen pass on that one if able. I found no combination of earlier choices that let me avoid it. Same in the presence of the self-proclaimed god, a choice to deny her (even if that would've led to a game over) would've been nice.

Edited to add: Wrote this after having dropped it during the follow-up chat with the mage with the shiny eyes. Couldn't recall the names days later, thus the dumb nicknames above.

 

[Irad]

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ok

 

[Mystic]

I've been skipping through this for two reasons. 1) It's overly verbose, and in strange places. The blackmailing sequence with strange-eye-mage-person went on and on, would have gained from shaving the text pretty heavily. Same with the scene where Li-something tells the MC to not ignore the white haired chick. Several clicks too long. 2) This is a technical thing, and I've never looked into what causes it, but the thing where you have to click twice to go from "text 1" to "text 2", like there's an intermission picture in between? I find it insanely annoying from because my reading speed keeps being interrupted. It's reads better if I skip ahead and use the roll-back function.

I also really didn't like the lack of real options. Esp. the laying of the elf sequence I found unpleasant, I'd've chosen pass on that one if able. I found no combination of earlier choices that let me avoid it. Same in the presence of the self-proclaimed god, a choice to deny her (even if that would've led to a game over) would've been nice.

Edited to add: Wrote this after having dropped it during the follow-up chat with the mage with the shiny eyes. Couldn't recall the names days later, thus the dumb nicknames above.

Well... no clue what to say.

Sorry to hear it? I think? Don't have much of a comment... I like story... so story I do. Not much else I can add here, though hope you find something else that fits your taste? That's... about it.

 

[Old Grumpy Wolf]

Well... no clue what to say.

Sorry to hear it? I think? Don't have much of a comment... I like story... so story I do. Not much else I can add here, though hope you find something else that fits your taste? That's... about it.

Don't mind people like that. They're just here for the porn. Any words at all in a VN, even if all you wrote was: "Ohhh tight pussy." Would be too verbose. So,

 

[Mystic]

Don't mind people like that. They're just here for the porn. Any words at all in a VN, even if all you wrote was: "Ohhh tight pussy." Would be too verbose. So,
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Oh nah, I hardly mind it anymore.

 

[Lucky_Spices]

How can I turn off the delay between the sentences?

I'm a slow reader because english is not my main language and if I have to wait for each sentence to appear I will never reach the end.