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I think i played this game a little bit in the past have to try it out again wouldn't be nice for the game some funny reference to certain games or movies i always liked fantasy games but this being a harem game it's a nice bonus but it would be funny if there was some references here and there.
 
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I think i played this game a little bit in the past have to try it out again wouldn't be nice for the game some funny reference to certain games or movies i always liked fantasy games but this being a harem game it's a nice bonus but it would be funny if there was some references here and there.
There are references? Such as me making a fun of "Hey, you're finally awake." aka Skyrim.

Or "I'm going to put some dirt in your eye." Spiderman 3 aka Bully Maguire.

And Guild Master when he says "When you stand before God, you cannot say, "But I was told by others to do thus." Or that, "Virtue was not convenient at the time." This will not suffice. "

This is a movie reference to Kingdom of Haven, quote by King Baldwin IV.
 

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it is so damn refreshing to have dev's refuse to put ntr into games. it's like ever since this website got bought out there has been a huge push in ntr content on here and its annoying as shit. to each their own but you got dev's trying to mix harem tag with ntr and that shit just does not fly. that's like trying to make a devout vegan eat medium rare meat/steak 3 times a day after hand carving it themselves and preparing it. some tags just should not co-exist at all. so much respect for the no ntr ^^b
 

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it is so damn refreshing to have dev's refuse to put ntr into games. it's like ever since this website got bought out there has been a huge push in ntr content on here and its annoying as shit. to each their own but you got dev's trying to mix harem tag with ntr and that shit just does not fly. that's like trying to make a devout vegan eat medium rare meat/steak 3 times a day after hand carving it themselves and preparing it. some tags just should not co-exist at all. so much respect for the no ntr ^^b
It is a bad cocktail in a bar I say.

I have nothing against people playing NTR games or devs making NTR. It isn't my kink or my stuff, I will not make it myself. But I hardly attack any NTR folks or whatnot.

I just wanna mind my own stuff and deal with what I want for myself. That's all. But I certainly have no intent on trying to play NTR people or Harem people into one crowd.

That's a receipt for a disaster.
 

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it is so damn refreshing to have dev's refuse to put ntr into games. it's like ever since this website got bought out there has been a huge push in ntr content on here and its annoying as shit. to each their own but you got dev's trying to mix harem tag with ntr and that shit just does not fly. that's like trying to make a devout vegan eat medium rare meat/steak 3 times a day after hand carving it themselves and preparing it. some tags just should not co-exist at all. so much respect for the no ntr ^^b
Website got bought out?
 
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Is it just me or does the dialog feel super AI'ish now? Just the tone of the MC especially feels super robotic now for some reason
I just assumed the Dev was a non-native speaker, more often than not the dialog and language structure is just terrible, and the attempt at using what seems to be 'old english' is making it worse
It has an interesting story. But the dialogues and pacing of story needs a little bit more polishing. Dialogues are stiff and monotic, like robot speaking with little emotional impact. Too many unnecessary words are spoken. Despite that I like and hope it prospers.
My comments previously...
Also unsure if you are specifically phrasing things differently or if it is a language issue, if the latter then that is also something that really needs fixing before it gets to Steam. Even for 'old English' as such, it's not natural and very much like a non-native speaker would write at times. However, as said, this may be intentional.
Ahh...it is quite jarring (example being start of Part 2, "I've decided to walk away". when talking in past tense...I find it difficult to believe that is intentional, and not the first example of such) but if such grammar is indeed intentional than all good. It's certainly unique for sure.
It's even worse in this update,....it is still jarring, still terrible and again, even for old English, is just completely unrealistic when every other sentence contains the world 'bit' (a very modern word to illustrate a little)...it's a complete hybrid....

However....

Not a mistake in terma of language.

It's a great VN, but this language/hybrid/ye olde English just isn't working. I'd be happy to help should you wish.
 
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My comments previously...


It's even worse in this update,....it is still jarring, still terrible and again, even for old English, is just completely unrealistic when every other sentence contains the world 'bit' (a very modern word to illustrate a little)...it's a complete hybrid....

However....




It's a great VN, but this language/hybrid/ye olde English just isn't working. I'd be happy to help should you wish.
Elleria has shit ton of writing, it is nearly impossible for me to find time to deal with this in short time span. I can't work on update and deal with this in same time, can only be one thing at a time.

And updating is heavily time consuming as it is, and that'd be an understatement.

That being said, if you wish to help you can always reach out on discord. I have a GitHub set up for these kinds of things, and it is something where I can see what was and what is, aka changes and all.

What I dislike about most people who try to "help" is they they completely change what is written. This is why I am very difficult on these matters, fixing something and completely changing what is there is a different cup of tea.
 
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wow, what a great AVN, Loved every minute of it played it through out the night till the end of chapter 2 , and I'm basking in the afterflow, concerning what Mavi brought up, (Im not native english speaker) It was hard sometimes, to get the conveyed message, can't say it is annoying, but it put me trough a good challenge to get the meaning of it sometimes.
Kudos Dev. Great Job I'd like to see this one beside other top titles fast.
 
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Apparently I had not one but two updates to play, as my saves came from 0.4, but for all that content there was not much to see. Story didn't advance anywhere. Slight contact with village and sea trip, neither of which gave much to see. I wish these would have been way more engaging. Instead of just reading reports I'd like to have visited village myself and got to know people there, hiring servants and other henchmen into the castle, making deals and trying get their loyalty somehow. I hope we can get rid of nearby bandits personally in the future updates, for example.

Island visit was also miss hit. Whole setting was left so much unused, that I pulled out half of my hair from frustration. I hope I won't be bald by the end of the next update. But with the things we got done there, I have small hope we'll see the place more often in the future. Also, we'd need to contact certain group from the mountains as soon as possible.

Whole time I was wondering about the groups logistics. How they fund setting up the castle? What are they eating and who cooks it? Who takes care of sentry service? They'd need plenty more people, for example woodcutters. Castles are cold places. They'd need plenty of storages for the next winter. Hire mercenaries? Extra people in the castle would also give plenty of opportunities for additional content, instead of just idle talk we had here.

Whole writing style was more suitable to the novel. VN needs much faster pace. Especially when there's seemingly endless opportunities with the content. Dealing with all the local power groups and building up power base of our own, before we can even start thinking about the main quests.

There's plenty of potential with the story, but this time it was mostly wasted.

I saw one typo btw. Wield was written as weild.
 
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