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So. Has there been any new content in this and the last update? Cause the change log makes it seem like just a bunch of typo fixes, UI fiddling, and changes to earlier content.
 

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So. Has there been any new content in this and the last update? Cause the change log makes it seem like just a bunch of typo fixes, UI fiddling, and changes to earlier content.
Looks like Chapter II is finished also. I haven't played the update yet though.


Praise be Eris for getting off of her Shadowy arse and finally delivering update for me to Share. Chapter II is full and completed.

Not much else for me to say, changelog available within game files as always. Available for PC, Mac, Linux.

Till the next one then

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Oh man this seems super interesting didn't want to play the initial release but now that this has a 2nd chapter I think I'll try it.
Yet a hero can be turned into a villain, for all the right reasons when he fought for all the wrong reasons before.
SInce this isn't a kinetic novel I assume we get to choose. Man I'm so happy I found this I was thinking tha the latest updates were lacking these days in story heavy games with real choices. At least none of them interested me enough

Alsp do you think this could go in my shonen AVN list? are there any fights, Man I love AVns with epic fights lol

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ooooo you're String of fate's dev/s, does this mean the MC is also a "bad" guy in this one?
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huzzah, the wait for update was in the between stages, where somedays I forget the game exists, and other days I am wondering when there will be an update. compared to other games wait wasnt even that long, just for some time there they were coming more frequently and i got spoilt.
 

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pretty damn awesome story so far .. i thoroughly enjoy it ... :love:
only issue i have is some renders seem a little to dark ... i can see them ... just a little to dark is all .... sorry i don't mean to criticize this at all .... :)

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I just assumed the Dev was a non-native speaker, more often than not the dialog and language structure is just terrible, and the attempt at using what seems to be 'old english' is making it worse
Apparently the dev sends it to a proofreader. Idk I mentioned it before and he got mad for saying the english isn't very good.
 
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I just assumed the Dev was a non-native speaker, more often than not the dialog and language structure is just terrible, and the attempt at using what seems to be 'old english' is making it worse
kinda what i thought .. but spelling is pretty damn great if that was the case :unsure:
 

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kinda what i thought .. but spelling is pretty damn great if that was the case :unsure:
I actually know quite a lot of non native speakers with amazing vocabulary and perfect spelling, but their grammar and thus syntax is rather lacking, add that to the fact that most editors nowadays conveniently give you a red line beneath misspelled words (even here on this site). But yeah I winced a lot trying to trudge through the dialog and if he's paying that proofreader he should ask for a refund.
 

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That's the point, gotta catch up with others. I'm just not sure what, how, where and why. Things I have that require some thinking about.

But as I said, she's indeed still present. Both during council meetings or as war asset. Which is sufficient for the moment.

Yeah, about that, I wouldn't put much coin on that one. Not in her nature, also, isn't that blasphemy? :HideThePain:
Hey Mystic, since it is a harem game, Correct me if i'm wrong in assuming by harem you mean 1 man multiple wives who are in a relationship with that said man in this case "MC", who are consenting and know about each other, a sort of polygamy if you will?
 
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New update (y). I wasn't expecting this. Timing was perfect, as I was just pondering what to do this morning. I was about to select some new VN to play when I noticed this :)
 
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It has an interesting story. But the dialogues and pacing of story needs a little bit more polishing. Dialogues are stiff and monotic, like robot speaking with little emotional impact. Too many unnecessary words are spoken. Despite that I like and hope it prospers.
 
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:coffee: Have coffee mate.

So. Has there been any new content in this and the last update? Cause the change log makes it seem like just a bunch of typo fixes, UI fiddling, and changes to earlier content.
Yes. It is full 2nd Chapter finished at this point.

huzzah, the wait for update was in the between stages, where somedays I forget the game exists, and other days I am wondering when there will be an update. compared to other games wait wasnt even that long, just for some time there they were coming more frequently and i got spoilt.
Yeah, I was gone for two months and then I had COVID. So... that recovery took a while.

Is it just me or does the dialog feel super AI'ish now? Just the tone of the MC especially feels super robotic now for some reason
Hmm... I'm not sure what to say about that, as I have someone looking into these things but... I'll be sure to bring this notion up and see what can be done about it, if this is the actual case.

Oh man this seems super interesting didn't want to play the initial release but now that this has a 2nd chapter I think I'll try it.

SInce this isn't a kinetic novel I assume we get to choose. Man I'm so happy I found this I was thinking tha the latest updates were lacking these days in story heavy games with real choices. At least none of them interested me enough

Alsp do you think this could go in my shonen AVN list? are there any fights, Man I love AVns with epic fights lol

[EDIT]
ooooo you're String of fate's dev/s, does this mean the MC is also a "bad" guy in this one?
[EDITED]


THX
The whole war table system was made precisely for matter of choices. And yes, there will be fights, plenty of them for that matter as I know myself.

And yes, I am. As for the MC being a ''bad guy'' eh... mmh... yesn't. It is tad bit more complex, depends on your perspective but you could deem him among those lines.

I just assumed the Dev was a non-native speaker, more often than not the dialog and language structure is just terrible, and the attempt at using what seems to be 'old english' is making it worse
That would be correct. And I'm already on it, it just takes time to go through so much lines of text. But will be polished. So far I only have a 1st pass on prologue to exchange.

Hey Mystic, since it is a harem game, Correct me if i'm wrong in assuming by harem you mean 1 man multiple wives who are in a relationship with that said man in this case "MC", who are consenting and know about each other, a sort of polygamy if you will?
I suppose that would be pretty much accurate and on point.
New update (y). I wasn't expecting this. Timing was perfect, as I was just pondering what to do this morning. I was about to select some new VN to play when I noticed this :)
Have fun I hope.

Android port pls?
Can try to pester Jeevant about that.

It has an interesting story. But the dialogues and pacing of story needs a little bit more polishing. Dialogues are stiff and monotic, like robot speaking with little emotional impact. Too many unnecessary words are spoken. Despite that I like and hope it prospers.
I'll see what I can do about the whole dialogue polishing, it is already in process but this takes time. Especially if it isn't done by my directly, can't impact other people's time of the day I'm afraid.
 
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