Ren'Py Abandoned Escape to the Suburbs [v0.03B] [Zovikh]

[jerry03]

Le Hommard Bleu, restaurant francaise ????
you should make a little change and put "restaurant français" or "restauration française"
If you want it to be in a good writing,
and also add an "s" at the and of viennoiserie =>viennoiseries cause it's plural

Indeed the game look good good realistic aging, and original story, would worth a try :-D

 

[irrelevantname]

Any sex scenes or am I already wasting my time with this money-grabbing scheme? Especially interested in the mom.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

The beginning narration is a terrible design choice. It proceeds automatically and you can't roll back. Is this an animation? That is a HUGE no-no! People read at different speeds and if the screen progresses before you can finish reading it, you have no choice but to start the game over. The font is stylized too, which means it will take most people longer than normal to read the text and make it more likely they will not finish before the next screen. This is 100% the wrong way to do this. It would be advisable to change this in the next release and allow the user to click through the scenes.

 

[Zovikh]

The beginning narration is a terrible design choice. It proceeds automatically and you can't roll back. Is this an animation? That is a HUGE no-no! People read at different speeds and if the screen progresses before you can finish reading it, you have no choice but to start the game over. The font is stylized too, which means it will take most people longer than normal to read the text and make it more likely they will not finish before the next screen. This is 100% the wrong way to do this. It would be advisable to change this in the next release and allow the user to click through the scenes.

I'll take that into account, and font and animation

Any sex scenes or am I already wasting my time with this money-grabbing scheme? Especially interested in the mom.

All my games are free!

 

[irrelevantname]

Your support is very important to me now. The fate of the project will depend on it!

Guess this was just my imagination.

 

[Raerngaming]

Well when you get to the house and it releases you so you can look around that was it there was no game play at this time, In fact everyone disappeared could not find one person anywhere I know I looked everywhere and even changed days . So will be looking to see the game play next round

 

[Sural Argonus]

Just started...and so far I have one comment. Not so much a complaint...just a...comment.

The text color used...is kinda dark. Can't really read speaker names very well. Some people might not be able to see them at all depending on their monitor.

 

[Zovikh]

Guess this was just my imagination.

support like endorsement, do not sponsor

 

[Zovikh]

Just started...and so far I have one comment. Not so much a complaint...just a...comment.

The text color used...is kinda dark. Can't really read speaker names very well. Some people might not be able to see them at all depending on their monitor.

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Fix in next release

 

[HammerU89]

The Engrish isn't a complete debacle that I get a headache trying to decipher it but still needs work. I would assume some of it is a cultural difference. The awful white font used at the beginning was the bringer on of headaches.

The plot is flimsy at best and comical but whatever gets your knob wet.

The models aren't great, the two "roommates" are somewhat meh. Give me a big booty aunt er neighbor coming to visit and that'll be good.

Nitpicking some cause I'm in the mood. Why is our Detective Hudson i.e police station in a private eye office?

 

[Sural Argonus]

I wasn't going to mention the English...I've seen WAY worse. at least you can figure it out.

Don't hesitate to ask for help on the translation. (I know I am when I am ready to release other languages)


Other than that...SO far it looks pretty good for a prologue. Hope to see more.

The models are ok, but could stand a bit of tweaking in my opinion.

Otherwise...good work so far.

Definitely following.

 

[botc76]

Okay, I get it, dev wants/needs money, don't we all?
Also, other game by her is "The Forest?"
*checks game, remembers what a shipwreck it was.
Hm.... hm.... sandbox?

Vaya con dios!

 

[ThunderRob]

support like endorsement, do not sponsor

trust us when we say..if we enjoy the game..alot of us have followers that will try the game also..some even go to the patreon of those we enjoy and support financially..this is a nicely connected community where "hype" about a game spreads fast...the dev should not ask for that hype...just..let it happen..if you put out something we like..you'll get all the support you asked for..

 

[Sural Argonus]

Also...saw that the Dev is one of the rare species of female. Not that it matters...Devs could be Intelligent Chimpanzees for all I care. (shifty eyes) As long as the work being done is good, it shouldn't matter...and so far...We have good and a LOT of promise. Hope it continues.

 

[ThunderRob]

more female devs than you think out there..its not a man's kinky world anymore my friends!!!

 

[Sural Argonus]

@ThunderRob I honestly don't think the gender (or species *looks around*) should matter anyway.

I never really cared to find out which Devs are female. I know there are some out there, but meh. I am not here to pick up chicks...well...real ones anyway.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

@Zovikh You might want to be careful with posting the sister/roommate models on your Patreon page. Any images that look like they are borderline underage seem to be attracting the Dementors at Patreon. You might even want to consider changing the model on your tiers, too. I'd hate to see your page get whacked before you acquire a following.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

why do panties cause dick to fill with blood...LOL..is this 1897 when panties were OMG NAUGHTY!!! quick... @TiffanyMonroe show me your panties..for science...can safely say..that unless they say "BACON" on them..most guys just go "meh"...NOW..if her skirt flew up and she wasnt wearing panties...there ya go..now yer talking...plus could lead to "not-mom" catching her and giving her a spanking

It's 2019 and unless it's wintertime who still wears panties? lol

To paraphrase an old movie, "if you build it, they will come/cum."

I see what you did there.

 

[ThunderRob]

It's 2019 and unless it's wintertime who still wears panties? lol

I see what you did there.

trying to usurp @Avaron1974 as my #1 with that tease?..saucy mynx!!!

 

[BobJenkins]

"The game has erotic content, and is intended for persons under 21 years!"

Might wanna fix that