HTML Abandoned Escort Dreams [v1.0.5] [Mindfuldirt & Sdwe]

[rb813]

I mainly focus on the pregnancy aspect too which a lot of people are not into.

Yeah, to be honest, that's not something I have any interest in at all. No shame or judgment, it just isn't something that I would be motivated to put effort into working on. Still, if you just want someone to bounce ideas off of or try to figure out why something isn't working, I'm no expert in Twine, but I'll try to help out as best I can (when I have the time).

I am interested to see the work you both have done for sure though.

To give a brief overview (so people can let me know if this is something they'd like me to make public, or whether I should just keep working on it for my own jollies), the main thing I'm focused on is what I call "coordination;" adding clips that feel like they belong together, instead of a random mishmash of whatever porn gifs someone found online. I'm doing this in two ways (mainly focused on the clips you see in the Street or Hotel sex interactions for now). First, I'm setting it up so that a sex event will have a blowjob, penetration and cumshot that are all from the same porn scene, instead of three gifs with three different girls. Second, I'm working on having a "main girl" for each cup size. So like, when you're cup size 1, your avatar (when you open up the Character tab on the side) will be Elsa Jean, and about half of the scenes will be Elsa Jean. When you're cup size 10, your avatar will be Peta Jensen, and about half of the scenes will be her as well. I'm not trying to make it too homogeneous, there will still always be a mix of random other girls at each size, but the idea is to give it a sense that the girl in the profile picture is the "true" appearance of the character, and all the others are just filler for the sake of variety.

If that interests anyone, I can't promise that I'll ever get it to a point where I'm ready to release it for public scrutiny (I'm pretty self-conscious about my creative endeavors), but I'll keep it in mind. And if anyone has any requests of girls they'd like to see as a main girl, I'll at least look them up and decide if I think they're pretty enough to be worth going through multiple scenes of them having sex to extract the clips.

 

[soz]

Sorry for the delay in reply

First of all thank you for the offer, I think I have a grasp on how to do things but not in best practice, please feel free to send me what you think is best if you try my edits out. When I post it I will also be self-conscious about the reply's as people can be pretty rude and thoughtless especially with their choice of wank bank material.
I like the idea of the same model and the same scene videos you mention, the only issue was finding models with all the variety needed for the games scenes. Elsa for example is great because she has so many types of scenes for her. I also stacked up quite alot of pov videos for a pov version but the amount of time it takes I end up not completing it. Would love to see what you have so far.

Soon I will put out the version I am making that edits the endings out and adds a bit of "worry about getting pregnant" flavour.

I have edited out the ending for the lack of payment to the clinic, when you get captured the police will fuck you until the debt for the week is paid off. Then you will dumped back in Karis on Monday morning with the next payment due the up coming Friday as normal. Condoms will NOT be used so pay your fees!....
I have changed the prices of the shop items to try and make protection more of a money sink. Birth control will only abort BEFORE you are showing and changed it to 10 days from 14 for showing. This way you will keep having to check to make sure you are not pregnant (money sink). I have NOT increased the rates of pregnancy or condom break chance as my aim is to not change the base game too much.
When you are about to give birth you will have the choice to end the game and keep the child or give it up for adoption. Maybe we could add to weekly fees as a punishment but I worry about a loop of failing due to spiralling costs.
Walking Illegally in Aspera will get your face fucked in a car by the police and some of your time wasted if caught. (debt will still send you to a cell)
Only about 10 new webm are going to be used.

If anyone wants to send me 3-4 paragraphs of writing for any scene from above please dm me as my writing sucks. I have written some stuff but I'm sure it could be done by someone better.

 

[rb813]

please feel free to send me what you think is best if you try my edits out.

Since I don't get turned on by the pregnancy stuff, I probably won't play this very much. But I am kinda interested in the police stuff you mentioned. I was thinking about doing something similar where the police ending just lands you in jail (allowing me to use "prison fuck" clips) for a short time, so if you've already written code for that I might want to incorporate that into my version. If you PM me the scripts for just those passages (or you can send me the whole Twine file if that's easier), and let me know where you're missing out on prose, I might be able to write something for you (no promises).

I like the idea of the same model and the same scene videos you mention, the only issue was finding models with all the variety needed for the games scenes.

That's exactly why I'm not trying to make it a 100% thing. I'm mainly focused on the basic vanilla sex of the street/hotel events, and programming it so the coordinated scenes of the main girls only happen about 50% of the time (the other 50% will be either coordinated scenes of random girls, or just the same old short looping gifs the game already had). That way, players won't spend a day picking up clients on the street and think, "okay I got it, every clip at this cup size is Elsa Jean," and then go to the strip club or glory hole and wonder why none of the clips are of the same girl. Setting it up that way allows me to focus on a particular girl for each size, without having to obsess about finding just the right clip for every possible situation (if I were gonna do that, I'd probably just have to take out the glory hole entirely, and change the strip club sex to a private room). Plus, I don't really want to limit every single clip in the game to just 11 girls, I like having more variety than that. Think of it like if a movie director has the color blue as a recurring visual motif, as opposed to the entire screen being covered in blue. There are some porn girls I really like who only had one or two good scenes in short-lived careers, and doing it this way allows me to put them in the game as well as pornstars with a ton of material.

Would love to see what you have so far.

So far, I don't even have a single coordinated scene for every main girl (truth be told, I'm not even positive who all the main girls will be), so as you can see, it's pretty slow going. I kinda want to use five porn scenes for each main girl (because you can make multiple clips of blowjob and fucking from each scene, but you're generally stuck with just one cumshot clip, so that part will inevitably be repetitive if there are fewer scenes), but I might stop at three so the game file won't be quite so bloated. It seems to generally be 100-200MB for all the clips from a single porn video, so three scenes for each of 11 main girls would be like 3-7GB, and that's not even counting the other new clips from the random girls, and anything else I might add like shower and incest clips (being as those are the easiest to find for mainstream pornstars).

Let me reiterate that it'd be best for people not to hold their breath for this too much. There's every possibility that I'll just reach a point where I decide the project is too costly (in terms of time and hard drive space, lol) before I get it to a place that I think is worth public consumption. If I ever do abandon it, I'll try to upload whatever half-finished shell of a game I have, but I can't promise I'll feel like it's even worth that much effort if I get to the point where I don't feel like working on the game anymore. So I definitely don't think anyone should be losing any sleep counting down the days until this is available.

 

[miki22]

i dont know why constantly get areested

 

[rb813]

Are you in Karis or the other city? Are you not paying off your debt?

 

[miki22]

i dont know i never payed debt and dont know where to do it and im in other city i guesse is debt and my bimbo is high maybe is that too rb813

 

[rb813]

i dont know i never payed debt and dont know where to do it and im in other city i guesse is debt and my bimbo is high maybe is that too rb813

Walking the streets is illegal in the other city. I can't remember if it's fine as long as you do it in hotels, or if there's something more specific, but you definitely can't do it on the street.

 

[miki22]

well how to pay debt rb813

 

[jessy89]

Perhaps an update with other working options would be possible, model to pornstar, if the developer felt like it?

 

[rb813]

You might enjoy A Photographer's Lies for that kind of thing.

 

[Terakahn]

You might enjoy A Photographer's Lies for that kind of thing.

Just be aware you might need to scour the thread for a walk through. The game isn't very good at telling you how to progress sometimes.

 

[desideuce]

I stopped working on it a while back... Sorry.

 

[Quickpawmaud]

I like this game but the forced game over kind of ruins it for me. Like I can reload the auto save but then if I ever go to the other city cops arrest me for no reason and it is game over. I even cheat to max out luck but still eventually I get stuck in game over and have to restart the whole game from the beginning.

 

[rb813]

I like this game but the forced game over kind of ruins it for me. Like I can reload the auto save but then if I ever go to the other city cops arrest me for no reason and it is game over. I even cheat to max out luck but still eventually I get stuck in game over and have to restart the whole game from the beginning.

It's been a while, but doesn't arrest only happen if you're working the street? You don't get arrested if you're taking clients in the hotel. Or does it have something to do with not paying off your debt fast enough?

 

[moominbradley]

It's been a while, but doesn't arrest only happen if you're working the street? You don't get arrested if you're taking clients in the hotel. Or does it have something to do with not paying off your debt fast enough?

Ah yeah if you don't pay your debt the police will just arrest you if you go there, I guess the key is, pay your debts, have plenty of showers, save often and don't push your luck.

 

[Deleted member 3264962]

Anyone dedicated their time to updating/changing this gem? I see (a few posts up) that rb813 and soz said that they might continue it or rebuild it.

 

[rb813]

Anyone dedicated their time to updating/changing this gem? I see (a few posts up) that rb813 and soz said that they might continue it or rebuild it.

I gave up the work I was doing on this game because ultimately at the end of the day all I really wanted it to be was a "random porn clip viewer," and I decided that Venus Club is a lot better for that. It's also a lot easier to modify (you can just drop clips into specific folders and they'll show up in the game; you don't need to modify scripts with specific file names). I didn't really care about the female protagonist bimbofication aspect, so I doubt my version of the game would've appealed to this genre's hardcore fans anyway.

But, on the bright side, the fact that I was able to mod this game without any previous knowledge of Twine means that the barrier to entry is pretty low, so if you have any ideas for how to make it your own, you should give it a try.

 

[soz]

Sorry I gave up with the idea of updating the end game. I got distracted with other things like X-Change. I didn't feel there was enough demand to release something that had a small change. Maybe I will revisit it since I still have the files but please don't hold me to it.

 

[Quickpawmaud]

It's been a while, but doesn't arrest only happen if you're working the street? You don't get arrested if you're taking clients in the hotel. Or does it have something to do with not paying off your debt fast enough?

You can get arrested just leaving your house instantly. It always happens to me eventually. Then you can't go back unless you have a previous save and there is no autosave. I think it has something to do with the luck stat or something. I never have debts or any such thing.

 

[Terakahn]

You can get arrested just leaving your house instantly. It always happens to me eventually. Then you can't go back unless you have a previous save and there is no autosave. I think it has something to do with the luck stat or something. I never have debts or any such thing.

You get arrested in two scenarios.

1. You owe fees at the clinic and didn't pay them.

2. You worked on the street at the other city.