The base story is an obvious rip off of "ready player one", i have no problem with that as there are plenty of movies i would love to play as a AVN but the way its done here is pretty bad with a lot of the story being solved by hacking instead of actual game-play.
The writing at the start was interesting even if a bit dry but after a while you realize how little of the writing is actually important for anything and it becomes a chore to keep reading.
Sex is ok although the scenes focus too much on the MC and the girl is kinda left to the side, the lack of kinks is a huge disappointment as given the setting practically anything could have been done(kink paradise server) but instead its boring normal sex all the way.
The character choices are pretty terrible, at the start its a standard do obvious good thing and get reward or pick anything else and don't point builder but regardless of what you pick or how many points you have the MC will still want them, as for story choices well they don't do anything(seriously nothing unless you count skipping scenes as something).
As for the main characters the LI's are the biggest problem, most are just horrible stuck-up rich girls, rude, unstable or just plain creepy and you are given almost no time to change that first impression before you are given a final "choice" to want them or not which locks them out of the rest of the game regardless of any of the point builder "choices", but even with the couple of normal women its hard to want to be with them as doing so feels like you are forcing them to do stuff they don't want to do,
this wouldn't be a problem if you could choose to play the MC as a bad guy but there is no option for that, he's a white knight simp all the way.
Which brings us to the MC who simps way too hard and his personality takes wild turns like suddenly becoming a tough guy, paranoid conspiracy theorist, scaredy cat or even rarely a playboy, through his biggest problem is he is unnecessary, it occurred to me about half way through that the MC isn't and hasn't been needed for anything so far, the whole story could have been done without him and with the exception of his
he still doesn't do anything the rest of the game.
Story 2/5 (good start but doesn't last)
Sex 2/5 (average at best)
Characters 1/5 (unlikable)
Art 3/5 (better background than characters)
Choices 1/5 (skip stuff)
Kinks 0/5 (none)