VN Ren'Py Eternum [v0.8.0] [Caribdis]

[Crepusculum]

So if i may ask a dumb question, how much content is there? as in, how far do you get with some of the girls? (feel free to answer with a spoiler tag)
i used to ignore incomplete games but after Pale Carnations and Being a DIK i stopped doing that, i just hate starting too soon.
I've gone as far as the pool 'empress' scene.

 

[GOD421]

So if i may ask a dumb question, how much content is there? as in, how far do you get with some of the girls? (feel free to answer with a spoiler tag)
i used to ignore incomplete games but after Pale Carnations and Being a DIK i stopped doing that, i just hate starting too soon.
I've gone as far as the pool 'empress' scene.

More than enough, especially if you take the time to enjoy the story. I think around 10 scene total atm

 

[Tremonia]

I'm pretty sure the others can tell you more or better games, but this 5 are my recommendations.

You gave him very good recommendations. But it's a shame you forgot Chasing Sunsets, Leap of Faith, University of Problems, _Artemis and the most underrated game here One Day at a Time. Eternum is clearly on his way in this league of the top AVN. Weird but good story, nice humor and the characters... hell... NOVA! Caribdis done a really good job so far and I have no doubts he continues this level of work. He did it with Once in a Lifetime and I'm sure he's doing it again.

 

[Crepusculum]

More than enough, especially if you take the time to enjoy the story. I think around 10 scene total atm

mmm i guess it depends on what scenes mean.
If the shower peeking scene counts it's not so much, but if so far its: Thigh sex, BJ, Pool - than it's a decent amount.
looks like the Dev has really good progress!

You gave him very good recommendations. But it's a shame you forgot Chasing Sunsets, Leap of Faith, University of Problems, _Artemis and the most underrated game here One Day at a Time. Eternum is clearly on his way in this league of the top AVN. Weird but good story, nice humor and the characters... hell... NOVA! Caribdis done a really good job so far and I have no doubts he continues this level of work. He did it with Once in a Lifetime and I'm sure he's doing it again.

God damn it Leap of Faith was depressing.

 

[Tremonia]

God damn it Leap of Faith was depressing.

It had a tough part but it was good. Cece and Lexi are legends, that's for sure. If you want to play a really depressing game you should play Acting Lessons from DrPinkCake. Hell, that really fucked me up. I'm happy there are games like Eternum which delivers more fun and Nova could reach the Olymp of Cece and Lexi one day. She's on the right way.

 

[ArDZer]

It had a tough part but it was good. Cece and Lexi are legends, that's for sure. If you want to play a really depressing game you should play Acting Lessons from DrPinkCake. Hell, that really fucked me up. I'm happy there are games like Eternum which delivers more fun and Nova could reach the Olymp of Cece and Lexi one day. She's on the right way.

About Acting Lessons, I've only played it when it was completed, but to those who did when it was a WIP, it was truly a shock for them when they reached a certain mind shattering event. Can't wait see what's in store for Nova in future updates, maybe someone will call her Mrs. Sharp IRL (reference to the heist in the New Vegas server).

 

[jocoyo]

mmm i guess it depends on what scenes mean.
If the shower peeking scene counts it's not so much, but if so far its: Thigh sex, BJ, Pool - than it's a decent amount.
looks like the Dev has really good progress!

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[BigBlob69]

Thinking of creating a blog to do a review of this...

 

[Zweihain]

Help, can't open it in windows when i click the Eternum.exe

 

[Elhemeer]

Help, can't open it in windows when i click the Eternum.exe

You have a 64-bit operating system, right?

 

[Deleted member 4058859]

It had a tough part but it was good. Cece and Lexi are legends, that's for sure. If you want to play a really depressing game you should play Acting Lessons from DrPinkCake. Hell, that really fucked me up. I'm happy there are games like Eternum which delivers more fun and Nova could reach the Olymp of Cece and Lexi one day. She's on the right way.

Acting lessons was cheap writing the whole house fire situation was stupid - I think it was badly written and poorly executed. If you want good emotional games many japanese nakiges are significantly better - go to vndb, add the nakige tag and sort by rating try the high rated ones they are really good.

 

[imadumb]

bro? akakaakakaaka this made my day aklakaakakaakaak

 

[i_succd_mia]

Wallpapers #21 to #24 still aren't leaked anywhere

 

[Crepusculum]

Did anyone else find the Dalia beach scene rushed? And the Nancy one as well but less so.
I think all other scenes are spot-on.

Dalia went from nothing to surprised she kissed MC to a BJ in an hour, it felt very rushed.

Nancy was rushed on the MC side, because we knew what was going on in Nancy's head, but for MC it was out of nower
I'm assuming there's some future reveal that Delilah had an insane crush on the Mc, but it just isn't revealed

 

[PervyParadox]

Did anyone else find the Delilah beach scene rushed? And the Nancy one as well but less so.
I think all other scenes are spot-on.

Delilah went from nothing to surprised she kissed MC to a BJ in an hour, it felt very rushed.

You mean Dalia, Delilah is Nova (boom, I remember now ! ).

To answer though, it didn't feel rush to me since they made the bet like days before it happened, like it didn't come out of nowhere. It did feel a little pushy when Orion started mentionning during such an emotionnal moment, but then he just give up easily and Dalia is the one who says "let's do it". I mean MC help her numbers of times and make her feel good and confident in herself, that plus the bet makes it believable in my opinion.

Nancy was rushed on the MC side, because we knew what was going on in Nancy's head, but for MC it was out of nower

I mean dude, find me a straight male that can say no to this :

She's flirting like crazy, they're alone together in a giant roman bathroom and adrenaline's pumping due to the fights that just happened. Plus it's probably illegal to say no to an Empress. And if it's not, it should be when she looks like this.

I'm assuming there's some future reveal that Dalia had an insane crush on the Mc, but it just isn't revealed

That's probably the case, like Annie. Very often there's one or two girls like this in this kinda VNs. If there's already attraction/love in the past, it makes it easier for MC to get close to them to begin with since something is already there. I mean if she didn't find him attractive, she wouldn't even have accepted the bet to begin with I presume.

 

[sageproduct]

You mean Dalia, Delilah is Nova (boom, I remember now ! ).

To answer though, it didn't feel rush to me since they made the bet like days before it happened, like it didn't come out of nowhere. It did feel a little pushy when Orion started mentionning during such an emotionnal moment, but then he just give up easily and Dalia is the one who says "let's do it". I mean MC help her numbers of times and make her feel good and confident in herself, that plus the bet makes it believable in my opinion.

I mean dude, find me a straight male that can say no to this :
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She's flirting like crazy, they're alone together in a giant roman bathroom and adrenaline's pumping due to the fights that just happened. Plus it's probably illegal to say no to an Empress. And if it's not, it should be when she looks like this.

That's probably the case, like Annie. Very often there's one or two girls like this in this kinda VNs. If there's already attraction/love in the past, it makes it easier for MC to get close to them to begin with since something is already there. I mean if she didn't find him attractive, she wouldn't even have accepted the bet to begin with I presume.

It's not that Orion decides to have sex with Nancy that's jarring, or that he will give in to such lust.

It's *how* he goes about it. In the dialogue he seems way too comfortable and familiar. You'd expect him to be far more surprised, awestruck, and reality checking to be breaching this barrier with his nanny. Given his feelings for both Dalia and Penelope, you'd also expect him to at least think about them and have at least a bit of a fear moment before proceeding.

It feels like too sharp a break away from his usual dynamic with Nancy. It's not THAT it happens, it's HOW it happens.

 

[PervyParadox]

It's not that Orion decides to have sex with Nancy that's jarring, or that he will give in to such lust.

It's *how* he goes about it. In the dialogue he seems way too comfortable and familiar. You'd expect him to be far more surprised, awestruck, and reality checking to be breaching this barrier with his nanny. Given his feelings for both Dalia and Penelope, you'd also expect him to at least think about them and have at least a bit of a fear moment before proceeding.

It feels like too sharp a break away from his usual dynamic with Nancy. It's not THAT it happens, it's HOW it happens.

Oh I see what you mean. I guess that could be excused by all the confidence he gains with all that happens to him in Eternum. It's also an usual trope, the hero that gain more and more confidence as the story progress, with all the fights, the dangers etc. That plus the fact that she's clearly and heavily flirting, practically telling him to go for it.

As for Dalia and Penelope, I believe he does check with Dalia during the beach scene when she says let's do it, that's when she justify wanting to do it with the "you make me feel more confident" and all that nice stuff. As for Penelope there's only one scene really and it's the photoshoot where he actually is uncomfortable and not familiar and she's the one who insists on taking the photos.

I get what you mean though, Nancy could have been more "in control" with a more surprised and less jarring Orion, even if he doesn't reject her. The photoshoot with Penelope is a good comparison for what you're saying. Yeah, maybe he could have been more like this in the Nancy scene too.

It didn't bother me much though, as long as it can be justified with how the characters feel I'm fine with it. All the "good girls" with Annie bothered me more but I basically replaced them in my script . Talking about it because it seems like the same "symptom" of Orion become more and more dominant in the last two updates, even when it's a little pushy or unecessary.

 

[jocoyo]

It's not that Orion decides to have sex with Nancy that's jarring, or that he will give in to such lust.

It's *how* he goes about it. In the dialogue he seems way too comfortable and familiar. You'd expect him to be far more surprised, awestruck, and reality checking to be breaching this barrier with his nanny. Given his feelings for both Dalia and Penelope, you'd also expect him to at least think about them and have at least a bit of a fear moment before proceeding.

It feels like too sharp a break away from his usual dynamic with Nancy. It's not THAT it happens, it's HOW it happens.

This is probably the only criticism I have about this game. The MC never really thinks about a girl unless they have a scene together. He's written as the most caring and understanding guy, but while he's eating out Nancy he doesn't think twice about the fact that he asked out Annie the previous day?

And with the BJ scene with Alex, he only thinks about another girl afterwards when he says "imagine if I could get Dalia and Alex to do this together". Like, you just went on a date with Annie, did you forget about her? It comes off as fuckboy-ish when he's shown as a super caring and thoughtful guy, especially in scenes with Annie and Luna.

 

[Deleted member 4058859]

Did anyone else find the Delilah beach scene rushed? And the Nancy one as well but less so.
I think all other scenes are spot-on.

Delilah went from nothing to surprised she kissed MC to a BJ in an hour, it felt very rushed.

Nancy was rushed on the MC side, because we knew what was going on in Nancy's head, but for MC it was out of nower
I'm assuming there's some future reveal that Delilah had an insane crush on the Mc, but it just isn't revealed

No it did not feel rushed at all. Not every game needs to progress at a snail's pace.

- If you feel like Nancy's part was rushed you can simply choose not to make a move on her - thats on you not on Nancy.
- Dalia's part also had sufficient build up to it - she is ok with you peeking in the shower, she did not mind the bj bet, you can see her blush when the MC does something nice for her etc

 

[dolfe67]

This is probably the only criticism I have about this game. The MC never really thinks about a girl unless they have a scene together. He's written as the most caring and understanding guy, but while he's eating out Nancy he doesn't think twice about the fact that he asked out Annie the previous day?

And with the BJ scene with Alex, he only thinks about another girl afterwards when he says "imagine if I could get Dalia and Alex to do this together". Like, you just went on a date with Annie, did you forget about her? It comes off as fuckboy-ish when he's shown as a super caring and thoughtful guy, especially in scenes with Annie and Luna.

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