Started playing this some time back but my PC died shortly after. I've replaced it over six months ago but never got around to revisiting this game because I couldn't remember the title. Had a back up of my home folder (Linux user here) hence I went through the renpy folder and lo and behold, after crosschecking directories (some games use weird names as back up renpy folder) I finally landed on this. Downloaded the update here and played. My thoughts in random order:
- There are a few grammar and spelling errors. By the time I thought of capturing them, I couldn't remember everyone spot so I just started from when it occurred to me to use screenshots. I'll wrap them in spoiler tags.
- We have a choice with Aria or do we? No matter how much you AVOID Aria, you still end up having sex with her. Even if she's being used a s whatever word you'd use here, there's no FORCED tag in your tags so we should not be forced with a LI no matter how much we chose to avoid. I really do not know how you intend the story to roll out, but even if it's a Harem game, Harem members shouldn't be forced, at least, that's what I think. I could be wrong.
- The story paces nicely except for his interaction with his housemate (I'm guessing Nora's mom adopted him when he was abandoned.
That's about it for now. Good luck and hope you succeed as you labor on.
