PipPoad, that was a really good update!
Thanks for your work and efforts to build up on an interesting plot, terrific (but also horrific) atmosphere from renders of an intriguing apocalyptic world, compelling characters and some nice spice of mystery. Very solid so far!
Thanks a lot!
There are a few spelling mistakes here and there (my "favorite" so far was 'coppupted by Nox'), one sentence is doubled and even some words are missing sometimes, so you might need to proofread your text and dialogues again. It's not a huge issue, cause your writing feels fine, but you may want to check these again.
Yeah, grammar is huge problem for me. No matter how much I check the text, there will always be some typos and stuff.
I'll try to fix them for the next version.
As mentioned by
maroder before, there is indeed
the flaw of calling Elina the "sister" instead of "childhood friend" (after the choice in v0.01) at two times in the MCs' thoughts - but unfortunately I can't pinpoint you to the exact textline (even I tried to find these after my playthrough again). But maybe other players can support you to find these more easily?!
Looks like I fucked up some code lines, or just forgot to use flag for sis-check. Good that it doesn't affect the storyline for now, because it would be a disaster

I'll check it again and ask other guys about this problem, thanks!
Most of the renders in the Nox 'dream world' are a little too dark and could need a bit more brightness, contrast and 'spatial effect' for a deeper dimension (in particular when showing the tentactles or sketelons). For my eyes a bit too hard to see, spot the details. Otherwise your renders are stunning!
You may only consider to unify all of them into one image format (instead of using a mix of .jpg and .png), probably converting them even into HQ .webp format for reducing the file size significantly?!
Hm, it might for sure.

Didn't resived any reports with this problem, but I'll look for it.
'spatial effect'?
But what about the quality of the .webp picture format?
Apropos renders: as stunning as they are, the original textbox.png unfortunately hides quite a lot of them.
So to just avoid having to press 'H' or the middle mouse button very often...
Ah yes, some games even get rid of it entirely. Thanks a lot for the textbox and feedback, really appreciate it!