Ren'Py Evelyn [Revive Ep.1] [torkenstiem]

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heretic1

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This should be the only link to your game atm. There's absolutely no point in separating such short stories and even the "revived" one is pointless because it's only half-way "revived" - just list it as "reviving in progress" if you insist to have it. This way you'll not need to explain in 67 pages what you "meant to do" with 3-4 under a minutes "stories". K.I.S.S.

EDIT: And btw, your Daz keeps crashing because it refuses to render 99% darkness all the time. Turn a damn candle for f^ck sake - it's VISUAL novel, not a resume..
 
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Deadmanvs1

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Actually, as I recall, she only fucks one other guy. Sure, she fools around a bit here and there, but not like she's going out looking for it. But, I get your point....and DAMN, she's so cute. Why not let her fool around a bit :p?
Fooling around all depends on how you do it. Fooling around a bit and public as so many end up doing are two different things. Yes also still have the beast thing to explore. Just does her fun stay a secret or is it turn everyone but fiancé knows about her fun. The future will tell and I will keep an eye on this hoping for a bright future.
 
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Dingus33

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I do like the new model more, #FlatJustice! But it is a little dated feeling, and hopefully not split into 2 minute stories like the original.
 

mikoko67

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I gave it a try hoping for something different, the new start has great graphics and a good story. I played the original to see what may be coming and then fell into the same old story again. Cute girl turns into the town slut. If this is going to follow the past of the old version, I'll have to pass. Instead letting every guy use her, find a different path. Please go better than having her just another dumb cum dump for every guy in town. Make the new better please.
+1 to this.
Do something else than the usual nympho girl. Indeed, try to do smthing real. A girl that wont jump whenever someone with a D is nearby. A girl that wont say "omg he's touching my nipple, this is strongest orgasm of my life" , "at first it hurts but my body start to like it (believe me, no girl will ever tell u this...)"
Anyway, good luck!
 

AJveganese

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for some reason this game is unplayable on my PC. it runs great at first but then starts to slow down and then it crashes to desktop and if I try to save I get an error.
 
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