Ren'Py Evelyn's Story [v0.33.6] [Rabbit Haven]

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Evelyn's Story [v0.32.9] [Rabbit Haven] [Compressed] [330MB]

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[Arikania]

It is super-annoying having to go through the slums every time to go to the training center, finding my way and running into burglars. We really need a shortcut to that place.

And one professional advice for the dev; mazes are always a bad idea, unless there is an option to avoid or to bypass them. I left home at 8:14, and now the clock says 15:14, and I am still in that maze.

I can't think of any better way to ruin the fun of the game.

I reloaded the game 4 times in row, and each time, the thugs were already waiting for me. This really is too much!

 

[FookU2]

It is super-annoying having to go through the slums every time to go to the training center, finding my way and running into burglars. We really need a shortcut to that place.

I agree completely. I can't find the way again. It's ridiculous AF. I've tried probably 1000 paths. And I've been there plenty of times, but always just got lucky to guess my way through. It really can slow the game progress down.
But...
I think this is the path: forward, forward, left, forward, left, forward (somewhere around this point you actually go right, then forward, but I'm not sure. There may be another left then forward, before going right.)

Side note: nice update, nice change

 

[timephu]

It is super-annoying having to go through the slums every time to go to the training center, finding my way and running into burglars. We really need a shortcut to that place.

And one professional advice for the dev; mazes are always a bad idea, unless there is an option to avoid or to bypass them. I left home at 8:14, and now the clock says 15:14, and I am still in that maze.

I can't think of any better way to ruin the fun of the game.

I reloaded the game 4 times in row, and each time, the thugs were already waiting for me. This really is too much!

This is the map to the training ground; it might be useful to you. I’ve also added the ability to skip areas in the slum by purchasing it from this fortune teller. You just need to find her in the slum. And the most important thing is that if you’re blocked, you’ll remain in your current position. For example, if you’re in Slum 1 and move to Slum 2 but get blocked, you’ll still stay in Slum 1.

 

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EvelynsStory-0.32.9

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[fdt]

One of the worst UI in this game:
- Chaotic navigation through locations, with each location having its own type of navigation, sometimes mixed.
- No home button.
- No location pop-up tips
- Terrible wardrobe menu. It's unclear why the character display is there if selecting an option kicks you out of the menu. The menu itself is filled with empty choices (up to a certain point); why not hide unnecessary options until they become relevant?
- Over-complicated sleep menu. Why do you need to click 10 times just to get to the morning?
- In the gym locker room, the outfit worn before selecting workout clothes isn’t remembered. If it’s so hard to implement, then why restrict costume selection at all?
- Getting kicked out of the shop menu after purchasing a single item.
- Pop-up notifications block important interface elements.
- A whole separate story is the information menu. When opened, it shows nothing—you have to click (and clicking is a whole separate verse). Why display quest-related elements in the information menu when there’s already a quest menu?
- The quest menu is terrible on its own. Why design it this way, just to make people click endlessly? Why not provide a simple description of encountered characters there, move the actual quests to a separate menu, and create a proper tree structure, instead of this... whatever this is?
- And most importantly, it’s the endless clicks—clicks, clicks, clicks. Of course, most of them are tied to the absolutely atrocious navigation system, but other aspects aren’t far behind either.

 

[Arikania]

Well, I did find the fortune teller several times. But she asks: "Skip Layla?" and "Skip toy store?", which implies that I abandon those quests. Thus, I always reply "no".

Besides, we need to go through the maze to find the fortune teller, so it's not really a solution.

Perhaps it's a good idea to introduce a bus or taxi that, if we want, can take us to those places?

The sleeping strategy was better before: just pick an outfit before going to sleep, and not every time again when we add 2 or 4 hours of sleep.

There is mention of a new costume in the game. Where can I find it?

And finally, my exhibitionism is still stuck at 2, with no way to progress it. timephu mentioned that we had to do a photoshoot wearing the same costume 5 times in a row, but it doesn't work for me. Is there any specific costume that we need to wear?

 

[timephu]

Well, I did find the fortune teller several times. But she asks: "Skip Layla?" and "Skip toy store?", which implies that I abandon those quests. Thus, I always reply "no".

Besides, we need to go through the maze to find the fortune teller, so it's not really a solution.

Perhaps it's a good idea to introduce a bus or taxi that, if we want, can take us to those places?

The sleeping strategy was better before: just pick an outfit before going to sleep, and not every time again when we add 2 or 4 hours of sleep.

There is mention of a new costume in the game. Where can I find it?

And finally, my exhibitionism is still stuck at 2, with no way to progress it. timephu mentioned that we had to do a photoshoot wearing the same costume 5 times in a row, but it doesn't work for me. Is there any specific costume that we need to wear?

"Skip" means you are taken directly to your destination without entering the slum. If you'd like, you could add a taxi or bus function, but it would increase the amount of clicking in the game. That's why I've chosen the current method—purchasing a skip to go directly to where you need to go.

The fortune teller can't be moved out of the slum because she is tied to the "Gang Civil War" quest.

The current sleeping strategy is designed to reduce the number of clicks (based on feedback from players). I don’t want to be criticized because my sensitive spirit would slow down the work progress.

I may not fully understand your point, but the game won't include a fixed sleep function that wakes the player up at exactly 6 AM, as there will be events to unlock night travel.

The new outfit is the purple dress, which you obtain during the Michael quest when he invites you out. You can choose to go or skip, with different H-scenes depending on your choice. The quest line will split from there.

The current total "Exhibitionism" score is 7 or 8, mainly focusing on the Lucas quest and Lily quest at the moment.

 

[Ilya11111]

Found a strange bug with company. When I decide to wear dress - I get two choices in row: first choice clothes(I choose dress) and then I can choose only dress. After that I can't enter in company, because I getting wardrobe screen without any choice.

 

[Arikania]

So if I have the fortune teller give me the skips, they remain throughout the game? They're not 1 time-only?

 

[timephu]

Found a strange bug with company. When I decide to wear dress - I get two choices in row: first choice clothes(I choose dress) and then I can choose only dress. After that I can't enter in company, because I getting wardrobe screen without any choice.

I don't quite understand you, can I see your save?

So if I have the fortune teller give me the skips, they remain throughout the game? They're not 1 time-only?

it will not be lost.

 

[Ilya11111]

I don't quite understand you, can I see your save?

it will not be lost.

Here. Bug already active. Just enter in company(office).

 

[timephu]

Here. Bug already active. Just enter in company(office).

thanks for letting me know and i fixed it for you next update, now you skip time to exactly 12 o'clock to continue the mission, and the game will be normal again

 

[MWolf55]

Still having issues with the photographer. It still says "talk to me next week." I read through the form and thought I followed the suggestion but still not moving forward. I have tried all the outfits and as suggested tried the more lewd ones at least five times in a row and still not changing. What am I missing?

 

[timephu]

Still having issues with the photographer. It still says "talk to me next week." I read through the form and thought I followed the suggestion but still not moving forward. I have tried all the outfits and as suggested tried the more lewd ones at least five times in a row and still not changing. What am I missing?

You take 5 random pictures and he will come out like that and talk. and in your phone there will be an app

if the quest box is like that you just go to the beach and they are waiting here.you just need to wear normal clothes (6h->10h)

If it still doesn't work, let me save it so I can check.

 

[MWolf55]

You take 5 random pictures and he will come out like that and talk. and in your phone there will be an app
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if the quest box is like that you just go to the beach and they are waiting here.you just need to wear normal clothes (6h->10h)
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If it still doesn't work, let me save it so I can check.

Yeah, I have never seen this before. He only tells me I need something before or after I do the photo shoot. I have done all the outfits multiple times and the cop lewd costume (did it at least five times in a row) and still not getting this or the app on my phone. I have attached my save. Also I got the next apartment mission but when I go there, I can't access the appartment. That supposed to happen or should I be able to work on that project?

 

[timephu]

Yeah, I have never seen this before. He only tells me I need something before or after I do the photo shoot. I have done all the outfits multiple times and the cop lewd costume (did it at least five times in a row) and still not getting this or the app on my phone. I have attached my save. Also I got the next apartment mission but when I go there, I can't access the appartment. That supposed to happen or should I be able to work on that project?

because the old save file is corrupted. I have fixed it from your save file.

 

[MWolf55]

because the old save file is corrupted. I have fixed it from your save file.

Okay that fixed it, I can access that part now. What about the second project and not being able to access the apartment on the 7th floor, that supposed to happen in this version or that the next update?

Nevermind about the project, I figured out what I was doing wrong. I can access it.

 

[Arikania]

How must I progress the photoshoot quest? Whatever I do, it seems totally stuck for me. View attachment 1-1-LT1.save

 

[timephu]

How must I progress the photoshoot quest? Whatever I do, it seems totally stuck for me. View attachment 4304288

your save is from another game.