Translation reads like absolute garbage MTL, cause it probably is. And I feel like this "game" is not even finished, as this has the stank of abandonware. I stopped reading for the most part when the supposed "faithful" on/off girlfriend for the last 10 years, ran off to her "grandmother", which probably is code for some rich mans cock, judging by her sneaking to the club to party, just to "ejoy the music", and that it's always her "granma" she supposedly runs to, and she always came crawling back(read; got tired of useless oldman smegma cleaning duty), if I interpeted that horrible MTL correctly and the small bits and pieces after that initial "I'm leaving, cause you poor af" bitch spiel from the gf, not that working or quitting actually seemed to matter much anyways when it came to economics judging by the shambles described in the intro, when the MC actually was working.
The abrupt ending I got was just one of the hints that the game probably is abandonware, as that was the point things started to pick up the pace I felt like. And also the point where I started reading a bit more again too. As things seemed like they where getting interesting.
Art was good, for the most part. Writing probably sucked, even in Russian I'd wager. Abrupt ending, giving off ripe abandonware stank, makes this a "just for the CGs/art" download. If you like shit abrupt endings and unbearably bad translations(MTL) , go for it. Overall I can only recommend you read this if you like stuff that is so bad it's funny, or even worse, so bad it hurts to read.