skybarbie - I played through both events and WOW!
I'm very impressed! Your writing is top notch and the way you deliver the story and event are near perfect! The babysitter event was hilarious and full of great sex. I like how your deception and actions ended up backfiring on you at the end. It was an awesome plot twist at the end. I really like the chemistry between the MC and the babysitter during this event. It was extremely well done!
I really liked the realism in both the story and the event. You went out of your way to make it feel real and engage the player in what was happening. This is hard to do and you pulled it off successfully!
The 'Pool Girl' story was just as good and even better in some ways (since it is longer and has multiple parts to it). I agree with the comments
darkpoenplace made about it. I loved how everything escalated to the point it did (don't want to add spoilers here). It was a fun and exciting ride! I didn't see the plot twist at the end coming. That was a huge surprise but really showed what the Evil 2 world is like. It fit in perfectly to the rest of the game.
The MC does have to have his fun! I showed this side of the MC in my story and you continued it in yours. You also continued the realism with anal sex that I started in my story. Thank you for keeping your story and event consistent with the rest of the game!
The entire presentation is excellent! Your choices of scenes, videos, pictures, and music are top notch! The videos are all excellent quality which is a huge plus. Your excellent humor really made both the story and event shine!
Thank you for three fun hours of entertainment! I took my time going through your story and event which I highly recommend to other players. On many pages I read through the dialog twice and sometimes even three times. With some games, I can't wait to skip to the next screen and I had the opposite problem here. No filler/boring/pointless dialog, just interesting, fun, and engaging content!