Thanks for the reply. I left out that I meant the yet to be seen mother when I was talking about the application, and yep, I thought they are roughly the same age. It's fine not to overexplain everything in the very first chapter and make info dumps, but this is kinda the other end, where a bunch of missing information creates inconsistency. The reason of why MC was excluded being told in pt2 as part of the plot progression is perfectly fine, it's just felt that some basic information was missing and we kinda began in medias res.
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So, yeah, that sentence is correct. Spoiler alert, elect = choose (or more specifically elected = chose, as choose would be incorrect in that sentence).
Dear Dev, in future, please have all plot points and questions resolved in your initial demo release. We are not barbarians, no? lol
RevisedStrategy Nice intro and beautiful renders! Looking forward to future updates.
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so this is basically a simp simulator? Because the girls are still Lis or can we drop them like the hot garbage they are?
- Jun 28, 2018
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I love me some comeback/underdog stories, this could turn out great.
"our main character seeks the college experience without the stress of studying. " - can you clarify on this?
College typically involves drinking, getting laid, and, on occasion, studying.
Is MC going to start his own business, where he'll meet girls from intro? ( like a nightclub or something?)
Visually, it looks very good, but, one odd thing is some characters look quite a bit older than story implies ( MC, Ellie and Celeste). And kind of the other way around for Olivia and Melissa.
"our main character seeks the college experience without the stress of studying. " - can you clarify on this?
College typically involves drinking, getting laid, and, on occasion, studying.
Is MC going to start his own business, where he'll meet girls from intro? ( like a nightclub or something?)
Visually, it looks very good, but, one odd thing is some characters look quite a bit older than story implies ( MC, Ellie and Celeste). And kind of the other way around for Olivia and Melissa.
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Nice and solid start.
Some posed and expression look a bit weird and others are really great.
But it is VERY short - maybe more of an intro than an Episode 1. I hope that a 2nd episode is at least twice as long - better even longer.
Some posed and expression look a bit weird and others are really great.
But it is VERY short - maybe more of an intro than an Episode 1. I hope that a 2nd episode is at least twice as long - better even longer.
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Ah, I see you are also a man of culture...
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I honestly not sure about this. All this Episode 1 did is make me angry. Not at the VN, or the shortness, but make me angry as the MC. It was just a lot of getting kicked in the teeth. No happy thoughts to it at all. I might give another update or so to see, I am not sure though.
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nice game i enjoy to play . future tags cheating or ntr would be nice. Good luck with ur game.
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You should probably take a look at the developers notes.
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It was really short. But it does grab my interest with the story. The fact that we don't have all the elements now was the key. Now I want to know how he will react and what is really going on.
A lot of people are already talking about Ellie and yeah she looks great.
But that Charlotte girl is amazing as well.
Renders are pretty good. I will definitely put this one on my watching list.
A lot of people are already talking about Ellie and yeah she looks great.
But that Charlotte girl is amazing as well.
Renders are pretty good. I will definitely put this one on my watching list.
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yes i already read it but if developer mind to update future plans.
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If the dev wants to add any more fetishes they need to decide now not later. Be upfront with what you want to put in your game/vn from the beginning.
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Well all I see in people's comments so far is good game and then some babies crying about Milf, Incest, NTR, and more. So far so good Dev. I'm going to wait to do a play through till you get another update out but the images are top notch.
Hopefully, the next episode will be about the main character finding an entirely new group of friends after he drops the current batch.
