VN Ren'Py Exogon [v0.1] [Rexile]

[lolwhatxd]

I'm gonna play this just because the premise seems interesting.
Let's see if the game delivers.

 

[Rexile]

Holy shit I just released the game yesterday and there's already a conversation here
Did you guys like it? Thanks for the compression tool! Didn't know about it, it's my first game.
Yes I tried to fix the volume hopefully it'll improve in the next update. If anybody knows how to do that, I'd love to get your help

 

[PSYlevi]

Holy shit I just released the game yesterday and there's already a conversation here
Did you guys like it? Thanks for the compression tool! Didn't know about it, it's my first game.
Yes I tried to fix the volume hopefully it'll improve in the next update. If anybody knows how to do that, I'd love to get your help

Hi. I saw your dialogue on itch about lesbian. You say there not gonna be lesbian/bi girls, and in the next sentence you already changed your mind, and telling there gonna be that.
So my question is simple, we players gonna see girlxgirl action in the game? If yes, can we tell girls don't touch each other, or it's gonna be forced on the players?

 

[Lerd0]

Holy shit I just released the game yesterday and there's already a conversation here
Did you guys like it? Thanks for the compression tool! Didn't know about it, it's my first game.
Yes I tried to fix the volume hopefully it'll improve in the next update. If anybody knows how to do that, I'd love to get your help

....sup......if u want the dev badge thing....do what the spoiler says....
....good luck with the game....

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[Rexile]

Hi. I saw your dialogue on itch about lesbian. You say there not gonna be lesbian/bi girls, and in the next sentence you already changed your mind, and telling there gonna be that.
So my question is simple, we players gonna see girlxgirl action in the game? If yes, can we tell girls don't touch each other, or it's gonna be forced on the players?

Thanks for your comment!
I really didn't realize so many players didn't like girl on girl action. Maybe it's more of my personal taste. I guess in future scenes I'll have it as optional and not mandatory, if at all, and even that is within harem context.

 

[Wzighack]

MMMM LOUD MUSIC FROM THE START! HOW I LOVE IT THANK YOU DEV! NO, I AM NOT SCREAMING, IT'S JUST I DIDN'T TURNED THIS SHIT OFF BEFORE WRITING HERE!

ALSO EPILOGUE INSTEAD OF PROLOGUE IS A NEAT THING! WHAT WE SHALL GET IN THE END OF THE STORY? HOWIT ALL ACTUALLY STARTED OR WHAT?

 

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Exogon [v0.1] [Rexile] [Compressed] [1.1GB]

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Thank you so much!!! The game is now updated on Itch with the compressed version. I'm still working to fix some issues you guys reported, and I'll release v1.1 asap.

 

[Rexile]

Is pregnancy planned?

Yes, towards the end of the game. I would suggest to think carefully when and where you nut when considering this question

 

[Amenotejikara12]

Very promising start, incredible looking characters and diverse pubic hairstyles, im definitely sold

 

[Raziel_8]

Yes, towards the end of the game. I would suggest to think carefully when and where you nut when considering this question

So, inside every time and with all...what is there to think about
Better question is, do we get actually preggo sex or is it just in the ending and one scene game ends ?

Beside that, nice start, good size for a first release.
The story is interesting so far, LI's are nice.
Thought i really wanna get the thiefing bitch(s) which stole my money and make sure to kill them slowly

Also, a bit less 4th wall breaking would be nice.
Curious why devs like these dumb flint-stone pistols in vn's, like yeah, backward shit hole i get it, but just get them a normal pistole or an AK...it ain't the 18th century.

 

[Malbolzcha]

please stop with the animated text. i couldn't read alot of it and my fucking eyes are bleeding from trying. after a while i just started skipping it. also needs text outline, badly. quick-time events are way too fucking fast

 

[Rexile]

please stop with the animated text. i couldn't read alot of it and my fucking eyes are bleeding from trying. after a while i just started skipping it. also needs text outline, badly. quick-time events are way too fucking fast

Thanks for your comment!
This isn't the first time I've heard that - keep in mind this was an experimental release. It will be fixed soon when I release v1.1 along with the rest of the issues many of you reported. Stay tuned!

 

[Rexile]

So, inside every time and with all...what is there to think about
Better question is, do we get actually preggo sex or is it just in the ending and one scene game ends ?

Beside that, nice start, good size for a first release.
The story is interesting so far, LI's are nice.
Thought i really wanna get the thiefing bitch(s) which stole my money and make sure to kill them slowly

Also, a bit less 4th wall breaking would be nice.
Curious why devs like these dumb flint-stone pistols in vn's, like yeah, backward shit hole i get it, but just get them a normal pistole or an AK...it ain't the 18th century.

If you enabled preg, it will come my friend, I like preg just as much as most people, worry not.
Thanks for the review! I designed Exogon to be over the top and not take itself too seriously, but I think I overdid many things just out of hype. Stay tuned for v0.1.1 where I fix issues and eventually v0.2 which will be much better now with all the feedback!

 

[Malbolzcha]

Thanks for your comment!
This isn't the first time I've heard that - keep in mind this was an experimental release. It will be fixed soon when I release v1.1 along with the rest of the issues many of you reported. Stay tuned!

i noticed some of it was supposed to be people yelling. why not just go with larger text instead? maybe increase it little by little as they yell louder and louder? looked like some was also because of different races. why not just go with different font instead, or maybe text color? just don't forget to outline the text cause alot of it was invisible cause it blended in with the background colors

 

[Rexile]

i noticed some of it was supposed to be people yelling. why not just go with larger text instead? maybe increase it little by little as they yell louder and louder? looked like some was also because of different races. why not just go with different font instead, or maybe text color? just don't forget to outline the text cause alot of it was invisible cause it blended in with the background colors

I hear you, my friend. The text will be overhauled soon along with many other issues you guys reported. You will notice that in the update. Hope you liked the game overall!

 

[Lord Balthazar]

I hear you, my friend. The text will be overhauled soon along with many other issues you guys reported. You will notice that in the update. Hope you liked the game overall!

I gave you a 5 star review, but there is really much work to be done for the game to deserve this 5 stars. As a fellow writer let me give you some points:
1. The way that your friend Jerome is talking to you and others its ok, that is his unique character, but it gets irritating if all of them have that teenage slang genaration z way of talking, there is no uniqueness in the characters any more
2. The 4th wall jokes at the beging are not bad, but too much salt taste bad. You have to know how much you must put and when not to lose the good flavour
3. Make more belivable the situations, that episode with the twins and the merchants is forced.
4. We maybe here for the h stuff, but we dont go to watch porn, but play the game so that we can see some engaging dialogues and meanigful interactions and bounds, otherwise why bother playing at all. If you want a quick fap to be your game its so so, but if you want to have a literature quality, gets some beta testers(friends or some people with free time) and ask them if they had fun playing your game

 

[Rexile]

Lord Balthazar
Thanks for the kind 5 star review!
I also read your points. As I said, Exogon is not a serious game and it was designed to be a bit crazy and make people laugh, but by now I also realize I overdid some things just out of hype and of my own sense of humor, (I enjoy parodies and surreal characters).
After reading so many reviews, I will tone some aspects down in the next Arc and try to bring it more down to earth, so to speak, without losing its original charm. I hope to earn a geniune 5 star review next time

 

[LinkBox88]

I like the chaos. Pretty interesting setting. Humor was ok but maybe a bit too much at times (especially with the fourth wall-breaking stuff).

Things I didn't like:

1. By far the biggest problem for me: let me click freely! I need the power to click at will and without any pause or delay. The pauses before transitions are infuriating. I can always rollback if I miss something so let me control the flow.
2. Whatever font effect you're going for isn't worth the trouble. It's just annoying and not even a little bit stylish.
3. Don't do things if you don't want us to care about them
   1. Example: Elsa and Amber rob you in the baths. You come across them later but the dev clearly wants you to be over it and not care about it. Which begs the question: Why have them rob me if you don't want me resenting it later? You could have just made the deal that they get all the money to begin with. I would have just given it to them. But this way, I have to be the loser that gets fooled rather than the generous guy who wanted to get laid. Which is fine, but at least give me the option of being mad about it! Don't police my emotions!

 

[Rodrigoofb]

Example: Elsa and Amber rob you in the baths. You come across them later but the dev clearly wants you to be over it and not care about it. Which begs the question: Why have them rob me if you don't want me resenting it later? You could have just made the deal that they get all the money to begin with. I would have just given it to them. But this way, I have to be the loser that gets fooled rather than the generous guy who wanted to get laid. Which is fine, but at least give me the option of being mad about it! Don't police my emotions!

I agree, it could have been better if the deal was the if he was to give all his prize money to them, they would show him a good time, but no. He agrees for 2/3 and they rob him of everything and we are just supposed to let it go? So he doesn't care if he got scammed/robbed just because he got his dick wet? That's kind of pathetic.

 

[Raziel_8]

I agree, it could have been better if the deal was the if he was to give all his prize money to them, they would show him a good time, but no. He agrees for 2/3 and they rob him of everything and we are just supposed to let it go? So he doesn't care if he got scammed/robbed just because he got his dick wet? That's kind of pathetic.

If you reject them you still get robbed...just by the other girl, forgot her name, the slave from trader you freed and apparently likes you...