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Guys, how to get Charlotte? Im stuck - cant find her for love of all thats unholy... got mafia line complete, michelle lingerie, maria, melody and one other girl, all the random events from all the stuff, but Charlotte is nowhere to be found.
 

MercuryDev

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Guys, how to get Charlotte? Im stuck - cant find her for love of all thats unholy... got mafia line complete, michelle lingerie, maria, melody and one other girl, all the random events from all the stuff, but Charlotte is nowhere to be found.
Jazz club Saturday evening iirc.
 

Ralgo

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So is there any hint where to find other girls or all of them are only at specific time, specific place - which i have to find by pure luck?
 
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I am not sure if you learned your lesson by the time you made reloaded or not, but if you didn't, don't keep breaking the fourth wall with silly remarks, it's a turn off, it takes the reader out of the story, it's a horrible writer mistake.
 

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I am not sure if you learned your lesson by the time you made reloaded or not, but if you didn't, don't keep breaking the fourth wall with silly remarks, it's a turn off, it takes the reader out of the story, it's a horrible writer mistake.
FFM:R almost never breaks the fourth wall and keeps a straight face most of the time, you should check it out if you're here for something more... conventional, should I say. As for FFM, I do agree that some 4th-wall jokes here are out of place, but please, "it takes the reader out of the story"? That's the whole point, there is no story to immerse yourself into, my goal is to provide players with fap material in as many variations and iterations as I can, in exchange for a few quick and goofy "reality checks" - it's a porn game, after all. Also, it's just way more fun to write your two-hundred-and-something-th sex scene if you allow yourself to fool around a bit. If I were to write a novel, that'd be a different story. Thanks anyways!
 
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FFM:R almost never breaks the fourth wall and keeps a straight face most of the time, you should check it out if you're here for something more... conventional, should I say. As for FFM, I do agree that some 4th-wall jokes here are out of place, but please, "it takes the reader out of the story"? That's the whole point, there is no story to immerse yourself into, my goal is to provide players with fap material in as many variations and iterations as I can, in exchange for a few quick and goofy "reality checks" - it's a porn game, after all. Also, it's just way more fun to write your two-hundred-and-something-th sex scene if you allow yourself to fool around a bit. If I were to write a novel, that'd be a different story. Thanks anyways!
It's cool for you to break the fourth wall, not for us, trust me I am a writer, I broke the fourth wall in my first chapter ever, and both editors and readers pointed it out multiple times till I edited it out and never did it again.
And my fourth wall breaki wasn't nearly as intrusive or as persistent as the ones you do.
I can't say it borders on silliness because it is silliness.
What you think is funny isn't necessarily funny for the reader, you can still joke around, but on the tongues of your characters, don't butt in into the story, at the very least not that much.
You might think that you lose nothing because it's just a porno game, but you do lose potential players that get turned off, and you are only left behind with either people who don't mind it because of whatever, or people like me who are sticking around for Shaden Rogue and because I need a new real porn game lol
Our goal as creators should never be "I'll settle for whoever sticks around."
I know you might like the goal of improving as a developer more, but you even have a patreon, if you weren't serious enough you wouldn't have one, and hence my advice for your new game, because this one you are too far in already there is no saving it.
I honestly can't believe that nobody already gave this advice long ago, because I am pretty much saying what I noticed after 12 scenes, but said to try and save the new game since I intend to play it too
Cheers anyway I am trying to give constructive criticism not annoy you, have a good day.
 
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MercuryDev

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It's cool for you to break the fourth wall, not for us, trust me I am a writer, I broke the fourth wall in my first chapter ever, and both editors and readers pointed it out multiple times till I edited it out and never did it again.
And my fourth wall breaki wasn't nearly as intrusive or as persistent as the ones you do.
I can't say it borders on silliness because it is silliness.
What you think is funny isn't necessarily funny for the reader, you can still joke around, but on the tongues of your characters, don't butt in into the story, at the very least not that much.
You might think that you lose nothing because it's just a porno game, but you do lose potential players that get turned off, and you are only left behind with either people who don't mind it because of whatever, or people like me who are sticking around for Shaden Rogue and because I need a new real porn game lol
Our goal as creators should never be "I'll settle for whoever sticks around."
I know you might like the goal of improving as a developer more, but you even have a patreon, if you weren't serious enough you wouldn't have one, and hence my advice for your new game, because this one you are too far in already there is no saving it.
I honestly can't believe that nobody already gave this advice long ago, because I am pretty much saying what I noticed after 12 scenes, but said to try and save the new game since I intend to play it too
Cheers anyway I am trying to give constructive criticism not annoy you, have a good day.
You know what? I agree with every point you make. But it just doesn’t land where you might think it’d land in my mind. This game’s writing (and everything else about it, honestly) isn’t really about the player. It’s about myself. And I think I’m being pretty honest and straightforward about it from the very first lines of text. I enjoy the privilege of staying myself while also appealing to a broader audience. If you don’t like it, it’s not your fault, but I also don’t consider it mine. You either take it and go with the flow or leave, both options equally as justified. I’m just gonna say one thing: the silliness I allow into my writing is one of the few things that keep you sane when you’re on your 200-something-th scene lol.
 
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