I think concept and first version promising.
What i love:
The graphique the main girl is well draw
the concept is exellent (even if i don't understant all since i never watch the serie)
Long run corruption (i love coruption and even more long rune one)
what i dislike
the comande of the ship i don't want to be a pilot trainging i think if i choice take of to somehere i don't need to select destination, start engine , and start landing i think you sould make the dialogue doing and player only need to select the destination.
what can be improved
i think add a line of dialogue for say hello i ok to talk to you after class is absolutly need because i don't no why she want now and not beford for exemple " Today i notice she less stress so maybe a good time to try to talk" or "today she look at me " or somethink
For the gift message i think you need to have less for exemple i think only 3 are need : one for ask you to gift one for ask you why you are not come and finaly one to start the war. you can add a least one for say a other tink but 6 is too much.
What i hope
I think have other girl can be good of course.But i hate loli so don't add any.
i hope she will not traing for the balkur because i am not fan of train bitch for old man i prefferd use for myself