Never watched doctor who, however even if the story is 5 minutes long I did enjoy it, the content is lacking however, the stat raising was pointless as it involved just doing same thing over and over again, it requires some kind of filling in, not necessarily pictures, maybe just some story, for example giving serious lesson was wasting time so you will probably add something there, but giving relaxed lesson could give some story (take a list of maybe a 30 different things that could happen and make the game display a random part every time, later on you could make it so that certain items from the list activate a quest or an option or smth but just having that random bit of text would make it less repetitive, something like "a girl in the back slapped someone and ran away crying" or "a dude at the front is painting penises on his desk" just for the lulz) anyways loved the ship controls however you need to add basic explanation what everything does something like press that to move between local ares or press that and then that to go to another planet and so on. The Parlour could have random images displayed too, but knowing how hard it is to keep theme you could just make 1 and add some events there too. You probably already have smth in mind for it, just saying what I wanted to see there and there and maybe you might add at some point.