- Thread starter Whisper_T
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- Nov 14, 2023
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Idk Maybe the Girls coming back from Melissia house early to surprise the dad but their the ones surprised instead.TM
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I guess Sage from "Being A Dik" isn't a indicter of my patients (for content)"huh"? The redhead at bottom of my last message.
- Jun 26, 2018
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Where I live the legal age of consent starts at 16 years old.
Damn, the quality of the writing took a nosedive after they arrived at Melissa's. Hope that gets fixed in the next update.
- Feb 23, 2022
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Some thoughts/criticism about this game:
1. My biggest complaint: fix the damn dialogue. There are too many grammatical mistakes that are downright disrespectful to both the players and the game itself. The most abhorrent one is obviously pronouns, which is closely related to the lack of difference between dialogues and inner thoughts. Please! Make them more distinguishable in your script!
2. The odd portrait of (ex-) wife. I only played the improved version and from what I could tell in previous comments the majority of LIs is drastically improved which is a good thing. But for a family-themed harem game, having your ex-wife that is both a gold-digger (might be a strong word to use) and fuck around using your money really makes MC look a bit incompetent in asserting his (supposedly dominant) position in this relationship and a bit NTR-ish (MC clearly still has some feelings toward her) to harem players.
3. The abrupt ending in v0.3. I seriously thought I had clicked something wrong here because 1. the sudden transition to the daughter offering her virginity is so out of nowhere, and then just right before the good stuff was happening the game just ended?? This is criminal blueballing we have here.
- Jan 26, 2018
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this rework was only for text/story or the renders aswell? Never played any version before
- Nov 13, 2021
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Just text, though some scenes were extended with additional dialogue, and one particular scene that received widespread distaste was removed entirely, since it no longer fit the new characterization of that character.
When I look at the oldest daughter and compare her to other daughters and apparent parents, I feel that MC got NTR'ed already. She has so tanned skin that I suspect her having some black ancestry.
- Oct 20, 2021
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I am just starting to play it but I see that the dialogues need to be improved, in short you have to hire a person to help you with that or maybe some subscriber who wants to do it in good faith, there are repetitions of dialogues, mistakes such as Mc asking where their mother is and then you get the option to choose that dialogue or how long they are going to stay... and there are blank dialogs if you are not going to say anything in that part don't put a dialog xd
P.D. from melissa's house onwards everything seems rushed, it's like they took it out without even checking the update and also they don't even explain how valery told him to give him her virginity. I see potential in the game but they have to take steps to improve the quality and perhaps modify past things in order to have a first class product.
P.D. from melissa's house onwards everything seems rushed, it's like they took it out without even checking the update and also they don't even explain how valery told him to give him her virginity. I see potential in the game but they have to take steps to improve the quality and perhaps modify past things in order to have a first class product.
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The writing in this game is simply awful, there's no good way of saying it.
And I don't even mean the many grammatical mistakes, you can tell those come from English not being author's native language (nor is mine), and as such they can easily get fixed (and they do need to be fixed). No, the problem here is the dialogue and writing itself, it would be equally bad in author's native language or any other, even with perfect grammar.
The writing in here is worse than amateur level, most people can write better than this. Situations happen in nonsensical ways, there's no progression, passage of time is confusing, and god the dialogue is beyond terrible. No human talks the way these characters do. Everything is a caricature of itself.
The best way to put it in simple words would be, feels like a bad porn movie plot played by really bad and underpaid first time actors, wrote by a 14 years old boy who just discovered porn by watching an Italian porn from the 80s.
I honestly think author hasn't read a single book in their whole life. Should start there before trying to write something themselves.
And I don't even mean the many grammatical mistakes, you can tell those come from English not being author's native language (nor is mine), and as such they can easily get fixed (and they do need to be fixed). No, the problem here is the dialogue and writing itself, it would be equally bad in author's native language or any other, even with perfect grammar.
The writing in here is worse than amateur level, most people can write better than this. Situations happen in nonsensical ways, there's no progression, passage of time is confusing, and god the dialogue is beyond terrible. No human talks the way these characters do. Everything is a caricature of itself.
The best way to put it in simple words would be, feels like a bad porn movie plot played by really bad and underpaid first time actors, wrote by a 14 years old boy who just discovered porn by watching an Italian porn from the 80s.
I honestly think author hasn't read a single book in their whole life. Should start there before trying to write something themselves.
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