VN Ren'Py Fake Father [Second v0.2 P1] [Netero3009]

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HUNUTAN

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Well, the second part is certainly good. But it turns out that the decisions we made in the first part were absolutely meaningless and did not affect anything. This is disappointing...
 

heretic1

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what's with the "second", is the first one over? nothing in the dev's notes or changelog.. is it separate? is "second" part 2?
 
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NathanD7

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Definitely worth it now. Great update guys. Waiting for the daughter for so long has finally paid off.
 

MrBenny

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Hmm...back in 2022 the dev mentioned he was considering adding a harem path choice. But also mentioned he was considering adding NTR content as well (I hope not, or at least I hope it will be avoidable if added...).

Now it's 2024, so what relationship paths does this title have...? A forced single choice path, or MC can romance all females in the story...which can create a harem ending?

I'm also confused with the labelling of the new separate V0.1 release. Is that a stand alone full rework release (new game), or is that release a continuation from v0.11a...which would be a continuation of a second chapter? :unsure:
 

Sonico

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I'm also confused with the labelling of the new separate V0.1 release. Is that a stand alone full rework release (new game), or is that release a continuation from v0.11a...which would be a continuation of a second chapter? :unsure:
Very much a Second Chapter/Part indeed.
 
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V&M

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Man, why do the developers insist on making these scenes in the dark? I know there's a location, time, and lighting to justify it, but seeing a sex scene practically in the dark is shit, we can't see almost anything, we couldn't see the penetration itself. No offense, but if I had paid for this, I would be very disappointed now, having given money, and in the end seeing almost nothing.
 

Takkertje

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Keep getting errors from the start.
Selected English but text seems in Spanish?




Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <renpy.display.im.Image object (u'0.1/a/1_01.jpg') at 0x0000000007f74c10>:
  File "game/0_1.rpy", line 8, in script
    amelia"[prota], ¿Estas escuchandome?"
IOError: Couldn't find file '0.1/a/1_01.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/0_1.rpy", line 8, in script
    amelia"[prota], ¿Estas escuchandome?"
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 921, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/exports.py", line 1373, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/character.py", line 1266, in __call__
    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)
  File "renpy/character.py", line 930, in do_display
    **display_args)
  File "renpy/character.py", line 666, in display_say
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 299, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3377, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3912, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2605, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "render.pyx", line 495, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/transform.py", line 747, in render
    return transform_render(self, width, height, st, at)
  File "accelerator.pyx", line 187, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 627, in render
    return cache.get(self, render=True)
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 295, in get
    surf = image.load()
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 720, in load
    raise e
IOError: Couldn't find file '0.1/a/1_01.jpg'.

Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64
Ren'Py 7.5.3.22090809
Fake Father Second 0.1_beta
Sat Apr  6 15:17:12 2024
Looks like a directory thing.
 
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SonsOfLiberty

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Keep getting errors from the start.
Selected English but text seems in Spanish?




Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <renpy.display.im.Image object (u'0.1/a/1_01.jpg') at 0x0000000007f74c10>:
  File "game/0_1.rpy", line 8, in script
    amelia"[prota], ¿Estas escuchandome?"
IOError: Couldn't find file '0.1/a/1_01.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/0_1.rpy", line 8, in script
    amelia"[prota], ¿Estas escuchandome?"
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 921, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/exports.py", line 1373, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/character.py", line 1266, in __call__
    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)
  File "renpy/character.py", line 930, in do_display
    **display_args)
  File "renpy/character.py", line 666, in display_say
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 299, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3377, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3912, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2605, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "render.pyx", line 495, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 884, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/transform.py", line 747, in render
    return transform_render(self, width, height, st, at)
  File "accelerator.pyx", line 187, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render
  File "render.pyx", line 266, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 627, in render
    return cache.get(self, render=True)
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 295, in get
    surf = image.load()
  File "renpy/display/im.py", line 720, in load
    raise e
IOError: Couldn't find file '0.1/a/1_01.jpg'.

Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64
Ren'Py 7.5.3.22090809
Fake Father Second 0.1_beta
Sat Apr  6 15:17:12 2024
Looks like a directory thing.
IOError: Couldn't find file '0.1/a/1_01.jpg'.


Also, it says "Fake Father Second 0.1_beta" the beta isn't posted here, the non-beta is.

You sure you downloaded the updated version?
 
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Takkertje

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IOError: Couldn't find file '0.1/a/1_01.jpg'.


Also, it says "Fake Father Second 0.1_beta" the beta isn't posted here, the non-beta is.

You sure you downloaded the updated version?
my fault.
i installed Murray's mod 0.1b
this causes errors.
 

Larry2000

Dev/Head Writer of Unexpected Opportunity
Game Developer
May 9, 2017
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Hmm...back in 2022 the dev mentioned he was considering adding a harem path choice. But also mentioned he was considering adding NTR content as well (I hope not, or at least I hope it will be avoidable if added...).

Now it's 2024, so what relationship paths does this title have...? A forced single choice path, or MC can romance all females in the story...which can create a harem ending?

I'm also confused with the labelling of the new separate V0.1 release. Is that a stand alone full rework release (new game), or is that release a continuation from v0.11a...which would be a continuation of a second chapter? :unsure:
Well, the second part is certainly good. But it turns out that the decisions we made in the first part were absolutely meaningless and did not affect anything. This is disappointing...
I'm new to the game and I don't know everything that's going on in Netero's brain, but I know that it's the start of Fake Father Second, so some of those things can added in the future. The only thing I was working on is helping the writing, pacing and English translation get better :)

I will say, I only jumped on to help cause I loved the project. I hate NTR and I would never have joined the project if it was a possibilty, so that should be a good indicator that it's NOT happening :D
 

Larry2000

Dev/Head Writer of Unexpected Opportunity
Game Developer
May 9, 2017
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How is there incest if the father is fake? Later reveled that he's not fake but the twin is the fake? :unsure:
I can give you spoilers and non spoilers.

So, the game begins with the idea that you look exactly like another guy. You saved this guy's life and that same guy is a crime boss of sorts and decides to use you as a sort of scapegoat/tool. He goes away for business and you must pretend to be him in his family. He then talks to, and gets closer to his three daughters. Hence, he's the Fake Father.

The game has many twists and turns, but essentially that is the idea.

Spoilers below:

The MC looks like an identical twin to the crime boss, but that's because he IS. So essentially, he's the uncle of the girls. And now he's in too deep after something big happens.

So yeah, that's Fake Father in a nutshell. The first part is a little rough in some points owing to a lack of translator for parts of it. Update 11 is kinda fucked in places. However, there is an idea to do a bit of a rewrite to the first part to fix all those errors and some of the jarring character personality changes that are so common in this game haha. (I.E. MC goes from loving man, to manipulative asshole) stuff like that will be looked at.

Alright, that's all I'll talk about this topic :D
 
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fajiker145

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I can give you spoilers and non spoilers.

So, the game begins with the idea that you look exactly like another guy. You saved this guy's life and that same guy is a crime boss of sorts and decides to use you as a sort of scapegoat/tool. He goes away for business and you must pretend to be him in his family. He then talks to, and gets closer to his three daughters. Hence, he's the Fake Father.

The game has many twists and turns, but essentially that is the idea.

Spoilers below:

The MC looks like an identical twin to the crime boss, but that's because he IS. So essentially, he's the uncle of the girls. And now he's in too deep after something big happens.

So yeah, that's Fake Father in a nutshell. The first part is a little rough in some points owing to a lack of translator for parts of it. Update 11 is kinda fucked in places. However, there is an idea to do a bit of a rewrite to the first part to fix all those errors and some of the jarring character personality changes that are so common in this game haha. (I.E. MC goes from loving man, to manipulative asshole) stuff like that will be looked at.

Alright, that's all I'll talk about this topic :D
Its possible to fix relationship with wife? Last update bitch asked for divorce, not worth to keep playing if mc cant fuck her
 
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White Lamp

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As a person that helped write it, thanks so much :D

What do you think was rushed about it?
oh nice, you're amazingly talented and I hope you continue helping this Dev.

so for example:

BJ part - from the insertion to cum it was like 3 clicks and its over. I would have liked to see some different angles of the BJ, licking, stroking, and internal monologues of what the characters are thinking. Maybe different position like MC sitting, and he's caressing her face lovingly while holding her hand to reassure her while she gives the BJ.

Sex part - same with above. From insertion to cum, it was like 5-7 clicks if I recall right. To elevate this scene even further, I would like to see more angles and internal monologues that contrast what the characters are thinking and feeling. In particular, the monologues could have gone through some of the 5 senses like what each characters were tasting, hearing, seeing, smelling, and touching.

This was such a big moment for the MC and what he was working for the entire game, it would be interesting to see what hes thinking during the act.

Another way to elevate that scene would be conveying more passion. I think the use of squeezing is very underrated in VN games. For this scene maybe have Dora grabbing bed sheets, MC arms, back, biting on bed sheets. While for the MC, squeezing Dora's hands, thighs, breast, face...etc.


But yeah, this is just a small critique, overall all great job the dialogues and renders in between was just *chefs kiss*. Also, soundtrack was perfect and really adds to the overall scene.

P.S.
Scene was too dark at times and I know why it was set as that and you made the right decision. But I would have just added the option for there to be more light. It can be "non-canon" like a 4th wall break where the Dev was like "this isn't canon but if you want we can make the scene a bit more bright for you!" Kind of like when you asked if the players want to see blood.
 

JiraiyaSennin

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When I try to save...
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
Exception: To be persisted, <Character: u'Dora'> must support equality comparison.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 277, in bootstrap
    renpy.main.main()
  File "renpy/main.py", line 663, in main
    renpy.persistent.update(True)
  File "renpy/persistent.py", line 370, in update
    need_save = find_changes()
  File "renpy/persistent.py", line 182, in find_changes
    backup[f] = safe_deepcopy(new)
  File "renpy/persistent.py", line 140, in safe_deepcopy
    raise Exception("To be persisted, %r must support equality comparison." % o)
Exception: To be persisted, <Character: u'Dora'> must support equality comparison.

Windows-10-10.0.19041 AMD64
Ren'Py 7.5.3.22090809
Fake Father Second 0.1
 

Larry2000

Dev/Head Writer of Unexpected Opportunity
Game Developer
May 9, 2017
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oh nice, you're amazingly talented and I hope you continue helping this Dev.

so for example:

BJ part - from the insertion to cum it was like 3 clicks and its over. I would have liked to see some different angles of the BJ, licking, stroking, and internal monologues of what the characters are thinking. Maybe different position like MC sitting, and he's caressing her face lovingly while holding her hand to reassure her while she gives the BJ.

Sex part - same with above. From insertion to cum, it was like 5-7 clicks if I recall right. To elevate this scene even further, I would like to see more angles and internal monologues that contrast what the characters are thinking and feeling. In particular, the monologues could have gone through some of the 5 senses like what each characters were tasting, hearing, seeing, smelling, and touching.

This was such a big moment for the MC and what he was working for the entire game, it would be interesting to see what hes thinking during the act.

Another way to elevate that scene would be conveying more passion. I think the use of squeezing is very underrated in VN games. For this scene maybe have Dora grabbing bed sheets, MC arms, back, biting on bed sheets. While for the MC, squeezing Dora's hands, thighs, breast, face...etc.


But yeah, this is just a small critique, overall all great job the dialogues and renders in between was just *chefs kiss*. Also, soundtrack was perfect and really adds to the overall scene.

P.S.
Scene was too dark at times and I know why it was set as that and you made the right decision. But I would have just added the option for there to be more light. It can be "non-canon" like a 4th wall break where the Dev was like "this isn't canon but if you want we can make the scene a bit more bright for you!" Kind of like when you asked if the players want to see blood.
I don't represent this game as I'm only a guest, but I will just say that some of the decisions made were for different reasons. For example, the scene probably wasn't going to be as complex as it is now. I meant the update as a whole, not specifically the sex scene. But we talked a lot and I encouraged for more details is always better than less.

So what you got was more than was probably going to go forward in this update. I agree that those kinds of things are amazing, the gripping of the bed, the sheets, all these details are great, but it's also hard to pay attention to that when you have to think about everything else as well. That's not just talking about this update, or even game, but all of them.

I'm a developer of another game, but I help people doctor their games here and there. Mostly with pacing.
The best part of this update is that it gave me practice with sex scenes cause this is the first one I've worked on. And the next one I work on will be for my own. So yeah, great practice.

To Clarify, the initial sex scene was written by Netero, for that I don't take credit. But what I did was translate it and bring it to full life. Editing is where the magic happens is basically my motto, and I think it happened with this. I'm pretty proud of this update and I think Netero is too :D
 
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