- Nov 22, 2018
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My first thought when starting this game was, "Oh wow, they're crediting a translator/proofreader. So this must be written in immaculate English." Next thing I see: "Choose lenguage." Oh dear...
Initial disappointment aside, there is indeed a relatively low number of mistakes to be found, though some common mistakes are still there, such as your/you're, dying/dyeing, its/it's, their/they're. Also what I refer to as the "have went" problem. I think I saw something like "have never came" in Chapter 1 somewhere, and a similar mistake as well.
There seems to be an issue where sometimes, the rollback function can cause the game to freeze up, and a right-click then brings you back to the title screen. Never seen this before, so I thought I'd mention it.
Some people have already mentioned they don't like unskippable scenes, and I agree. On repeated playthroughs where you just want to skip from choice to choice to see different outcomes, this will be extremely annoying. The karaoke scenes especially.
Speaking of choices, there seem to be quite a few of those where the player's decision is just ignored. This kind of thing is fine maybe once for comedic effect, but if you don't want us to have input on what the MC does, why ask?
I find it a bit weird that literally every girl is just in love at first sight with the MC, and in the words of some of the older ones, "acting like a schoolgirl", which is really odd. I mean, I would've expected this from some of them, but all seems a bit much... Maybe that's just me. I just didn't expect everyone to have the same reaction to him, especially the adults.
And while I don't like to spoil people's fun by questioning this kind of thing, I gotta ask: What's with the gender ratio? Unless I'm mistaken, we're given the explanation that so many men died in the war, and that's why there's like five women for each man. Okay... But the war ended 400 years ago. So that doesn't explain anything. For this to be the case, you'd need the birth rate in the last lifetime or so to be skewed, not some imbalance that lies 5 lifetimes in the past...
Anyway, fun game so far. Looking forward to more.
Initial disappointment aside, there is indeed a relatively low number of mistakes to be found, though some common mistakes are still there, such as your/you're, dying/dyeing, its/it's, their/they're. Also what I refer to as the "have went" problem. I think I saw something like "have never came" in Chapter 1 somewhere, and a similar mistake as well.
There seems to be an issue where sometimes, the rollback function can cause the game to freeze up, and a right-click then brings you back to the title screen. Never seen this before, so I thought I'd mention it.
Some people have already mentioned they don't like unskippable scenes, and I agree. On repeated playthroughs where you just want to skip from choice to choice to see different outcomes, this will be extremely annoying. The karaoke scenes especially.
Speaking of choices, there seem to be quite a few of those where the player's decision is just ignored. This kind of thing is fine maybe once for comedic effect, but if you don't want us to have input on what the MC does, why ask?
I find it a bit weird that literally every girl is just in love at first sight with the MC, and in the words of some of the older ones, "acting like a schoolgirl", which is really odd. I mean, I would've expected this from some of them, but all seems a bit much... Maybe that's just me. I just didn't expect everyone to have the same reaction to him, especially the adults.
And while I don't like to spoil people's fun by questioning this kind of thing, I gotta ask: What's with the gender ratio? Unless I'm mistaken, we're given the explanation that so many men died in the war, and that's why there's like five women for each man. Okay... But the war ended 400 years ago. So that doesn't explain anything. For this to be the case, you'd need the birth rate in the last lifetime or so to be skewed, not some imbalance that lies 5 lifetimes in the past...
Anyway, fun game so far. Looking forward to more.
