VN Ren'Py Fallen: A Girl's Dark Tale [v0.3] [Galaxyoverride17]

BreadBox1221

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Jan 4, 2018
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To those having issues of game going straight to menu after dinner, go to the script file and remove the part where it goes to the endingscreen after dinner instead of bedroom.


scene bg_blackbackground
show snow1
show snow2
centered "{color=#fff}{font=Hell vintage.ttf}{size=+40}Everyone went upstairs.{/color}{/font}{/size}"
with dissolve
centered "{color=#fff}{font=Hell vintage.ttf}{size=+40}[kurumi] went to her bedroom.{/color}{/font}{/size}"
with dissolve

This is what the scene should end on and then procceed to next scene. Worked for me
 

Brdghh

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Mar 1, 2024
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To those having issues of game going straight to menu after dinner, go to the script file and remove the part where it goes to the endingscreen after dinner instead of bedroom.


scene bg_blackbackground
show snow1
show snow2
centered "{color=#fff}{font=Hell vintage.ttf}{size=+40}Everyone went upstairs.{/color}{/font}{/size}"
with dissolve
centered "{color=#fff}{font=Hell vintage.ttf}{size=+40}[kurumi] went to her bedroom.{/color}{/font}{/size}"
with dissolve

This is what the scene should end on and then procceed to next scene. Worked for me
this worked for me too, thank you!
 
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Tanzie

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Mar 10, 2019
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To those having issues of game going straight to menu after dinner, go to the script file and remove the part where it goes to the endingscreen after dinner instead of bedroom.


scene bg_blackbackground
show snow1
show snow2
centered "{color=#fff}{font=Hell vintage.ttf}{size=+40}Everyone went upstairs.{/color}{/font}{/size}"
with dissolve
centered "{color=#fff}{font=Hell vintage.ttf}{size=+40}[kurumi] went to her bedroom.{/color}{/font}{/size}"
with dissolve

This is what the scene should end on and then procceed to next scene. Worked for me
Skips the premature ending, but there's only one day of content anyway. It ends after the photoshoot. You can redirect to home but there's nothing to do there.

None of the things shown in screenshots can be achieved. I wonder if this is somehow an incomplete version of it.


Even the compressed version has some unnecessary files in the archive (e.g. a 450 MB 7z archive containing a sound lib etc).

over 4g game files , finished in 1 min..... "to be continued" ......
These days nobody seems to test their games even once before releasing.

This game goes into my ignore list at this point.
 
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gokikenya17

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Mar 24, 2021
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gokikenya17 Will the rape be preventable/optional? I do not like forced content, so just seeing if I should ignore or pay attention to this game.
I only did this in one scene for future blackmail option and for future update will be corruption based choices
Part one is only the introduction before she meets her boyfriend and move to another city.
 

gokikenya17

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Mar 24, 2021
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Easy to ignore, but probably even easier to fix:
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Not sure if "kurumi" is a term of affection, or (based on the OP sample pics) a typo for the player's chosen name:
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It isn't consistent about whether talking about you or your character, but this one line tries to do both:
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A lot of times *thoughts* are missing the last *
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There are also too many spelling/grammar errors to mention, but mostly the reader/player should be able to understand what you're trying to say anyway.
Thanks for your opinion this is my first visual novel I the future I will get better, please forgive me for the spelling error and grammar writing is not my strength.
 

Canariautara69

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Nov 21, 2023
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To those having issues of game going straight to menu after dinner, go to the script file and remove the part where it goes to the endingscreen after dinner instead of bedroom.


scene bg_blackbackground
show snow1
show snow2
centered "{color=#fff}{font=Hell vintage.ttf}{size=+40}Everyone went upstairs.{/color}{/font}{/size}"
with dissolve
centered "{color=#fff}{font=Hell vintage.ttf}{size=+40}[kurumi] went to her bedroom.{/color}{/font}{/size}"
with dissolve

This is what the scene should end on and then procceed to next scene. Worked for me
Can i have you scryp?
 
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Tanzie

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Mar 10, 2019
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Uhm. In the game/script_version.txt I only see "(8, 3, 3)". Do you mean log.txt? I dont understand how can I fix the premature ending after dinner scene.
I've already deleted the game, but what you should be modifying was game/scripts.rpy or was something similar. Open that file and search for "endingscreen". There are multiple instances of it in that file. That line and the code block underneath it should be deleted or commented out, do that for all instance if you wish. What BreadBox1221 posted above is how the code should look like after you've deleted that bit of code, but only to be able to continue after the dinner scene. In other words, there is a small block of code begins with "endingscreen" right after the code he posted, which should be deleted.
 

bamachine

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Thanks for your opinion I will make an adjustment I will put in an option.
Since this is your first game, I would not listen to every opinion out there and make changes, as you would never finish your game. I do think you should give choices for most non-vanilla content, to appeal to the widest audience. Just make them simple yes/no type choices, word them based on the content. Like for something forced give them the option to freeze up or to fight back/pepper spray/kick in the nuts and run away screaming fire/etc. Other stuff like watersports can be much more simple like yes/no.
 
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Brdghh

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Mar 1, 2024
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Uhm. In the game/script_version.txt I only see "(8, 3, 3)". Do you mean log.txt? I dont understand how can I fix the premature ending after dinner scene.
you should go to the game file then find a file called script.rpy and open it with notepad, and as Tanzie said, remove the endingscreen code in the dinner scene and your good go✓
 

Ginji

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I only did this in one scene for future blackmail option and for future update will be corruption based choices
Part one is only the introduction before she meets her boyfriend and move to another city.
as above,if you change your game on one comment you wont get far.quite simple you need a vision,a story.first part was good but all this switch lights on,oven on why when you can advance story just my thoughts ironic i know.just make your game your way ignore all non devs :)
 
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