Ren'Py Fallen Heirs [v0.1.5] [HoloFlux]

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onknight

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So I've just started the game, I get to the lawyer's office and I realised something
They're using the same player model for the lawyer that's used in Chasing Sunsets
After playing it for about 20 minutes I've decided it's not for me and won't be continuing
I'm just not a fan of click click click
 
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Forgotted

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I noticed in one scene, Evelyn is breathing doubly fast w her breasts rising and falling rapidly.
One of the next scenes, breakfast, she doesn't appear to be breathing at all. Her eyes are blinking though..not sure if they were in the first scene or not...I was distracted...lol
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The points system doesn't quite make sense yet. In order to hire someone I need 100 points. I had 30.
When I went to the skills menu, I needed 100 points for ..Dominance?... I clicked on it, and was told I went to level 1 and it only cost 30 points? Course now I have none...
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When clicking on a character that doesn't have any more content it still uses one of my time activity slots for the day.
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With that being said... This is so much better than the first release and maybe even almost a tiny bit too polished for a demo release. I mean, yes it's still extremely short but content will come. Most everything else has been fixed.

I like the points system though it needs some work and, again, will probably even take care of itself as more content is added.

The characters seem to be multifaceted so far which is great. So far I trust none. lol

Great graphics and colors other than a tiny bit ?? flat/grainy?? I don't know... Maybe just because of the small file size which was great as well.


Anywho....Fantastic job ..
Good job and Best of Luck!
 
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WuzzyFuzzy

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Any sex in 1.6 version?
Yes, forced sex which is always going to get the smackdown from me.

Other observations: the dude's penis looks like a Barbie appendage.
The "load" option has been removed from the quick menu and options page. Easy enough to enable, but still not a good decision. Many play Ren'Py games to tinker. Try this...try that. Forcing folks through a narrow lens will earn some negative feedback (like this post).
 

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allanl9020142

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Kinda crazy how I almost didn't look into this one a little further just because it had a low average rating. I actually like sandbox, it's just that the tag is pretty much attached to anything with a "free roam" so I almost missed this one. Looks like it even had an overhaul so definitely going to check this one out when I can.
 

Nemesiz691

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Yes, forced sex which is always going to get the smackdown from me.

Other observations: the dude's penis looks like a Barbie appendage.
The "load" option has been removed from the quick menu and options page. Easy enough to enable, but still not a good decision. Many play Ren'Py games to tinker. Try this...try that. Forcing folks through a narrow lens will earn some negative feedback (like this post).
Whos scene the force sex? The milf?
 

th3_fr4gil3

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So let me just say, I understand it's a VN and there's always a suspension of disbelief involved with any of these games, BUT, the MC gets a call from a lawyer while at work, the lawyer only says the MC is named as a beneficiary in the will. Nothing is ever mentioned in that phone call what the MC is listed as receiving, no mention of money, or property or anything, for all the MC knows it could just be a freakin' family photo album or something. So without any knowledge of what he's set to inherit, he FUCKING quits his job, in a manner that would not see him able to get it back saying he's rich now, how the fuck does he know that? Again I get it, suspension of disbelief and all but this just fucking cracked me up at how ridiculous it was, then he walks into the lawyer's office talking about how he's dumbfounded why he got everything in the will, again he has yet to be told what the will says. Either the MC is a fucking psychic or this is poor writing, I'm not sure yet which the correct answer is.
poor writing or lost in translation.
 

UnoriginalUserName

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Right...let's start at the beginning, I guess.

The MC is a fucking retard. He gets a call from a lawyer (supposedly) telling him he's the sole inheritor from some guy he never heard of and he quits his job flipping burgers on the spot, telling his boss to fuck off. No mention of WHAT he actually inherited. Sure is a good thing he fell ass-backwards into a fortune and not a used condom collection or something. I can't help feeling this shit was a self-insert by the dev that really, REALLY wants to be able to do this to his boss, possibly at a shitty burger joint.

The MC goes on being a fucking moron by letting the obvious gold-digging whore ex-wife of his great-uncle or whatever he is continue living at the mansion he just inherited, even after discovering that she and the housekeeper (she's actually a female head butler or something...she seems to be in charge of the household / staff) are conspiring against him intending to find some alternate will and then take everything for themselves. Good luck with that, even if you did it wouldn't annul the new will unless they can prove it was created under duress. Either way, the MC should just kick both of them out on their asses right away, but he doesn't because...I don't know, he's a spineless bitch?

The point system is...odd. You accumulate points by doing certain actions, some of them pervy, others by certain conversation choices, some by "investigating" rooms. You then have to use these points to either buy skills or perform sexual actions. For example, during "Sex Scene #1" with the maid if you don't use points the MC cums on himself before she even does anything to him, so he's basically a 13 year old virgin.

The sandbox is...eh, it's a sandbox, they all suck balls, but this one isn't absolute trash, so there's that. But every single action takes up a unit of time progressing from morning, to afternoon, to evening, etc. Certain actions or characters are only in certain areas at certain times. The time also advances even if you can't actually do anything at the moment. For example, visiting the housekeeper after the initial "Dis is da phone. Derp" conversation pops up with a "No further content with this character" message (which is an appreciated touch), but still uses up a unit of time.

There's a bit of Engrish going on, mostly in the form in incorrect capitalization. I've seen far, far worse. The dev is a native Spanish-speaker judging by the skill names in the variables but the translation into English is actually pretty good.

One infuriating part of the game is the system menu, or rather, the lack of a system menu. You can save just fine, but you can only load from the main menu, which you can't actually access once you've started the game. You have to tab out and close the game from windows or force-close the game, then start it again to be able to load unless you use the 1-slot quicksave / quickload from the game interface. You can usually get around this in games that fuck with this by going into preferences, but for some stupid reason the dev took that shit out. This also means you can't quit, since the option has been removed. Again, tabbing out or force closing are your only options if you're in fullscreen.

Overall the game's passable. The models are nice, so far, and the animations seem pretty good. There's no "cum here" option in the sex scenes yet. You either pop early, cum in the maid's mouth, or cum in her pussy if you invest in the points to keep going, but you aren't actually given a choice which is going to be a letdown for a lot of folks.

The story is...turn your brain off.

(copying this novel into a review because I wrote far too much not to)
 
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Tilur

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I was really happy when I heard there was a remake. The first version was all over the place, but I think the premise is very, very strong.

UnoriginalUserName points out a lot of flaws. The biggest is that there is no reason for MC to let Margaret stay in the mansion. With a possible second will, there is even less reason for MC to let her stay. So you need a clause like: "The will forbids Margaret to be removed from the property, she shall reside in the master bedroom" Then you need a win condition and a lose condition. If the MC does this or that for a year, he is the sole heir and can remove anyone from the property, but if he does this or that, everything belongs to Margaret and she is the sole heir. The obvious dilemma would be: If the MC has sex with Margaret or her daughters, he loses everything.

Some more hints: The scoring system is not explained. At the moment it seems that the best way is to lust after everything.

I do not like the sandbox system, the skill system or the recruitment system. At the moment I think it is far too complex. You need good characters and a compelling story to make it work. Take Evelyn, she throws herself at the MC and has sex with him on the first night. Where do you want to go with that character? The character is damaged. Finally, there is the murder of Phelipe. You put a hat on a hat. Either go for a murder mystery or a battle of wits between Margaret and MC.

I wish you good luck. Your story and characters need to be on point for this to work.
 
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Rockero_69

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Hi HOLOFLUX , I have important questions:
Will there be content and a harem ending? And is the content forced or can it be avoided?
By this I mean some fetishes or labels that sometimes appear in the game that aren't to everyone's liking, such as lesbian, NTR, femdom, etc.
 

JenMistress

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After this shot when there is a knock at the door, I keep getting this error message. Even tried starting over, but that doesn't fix it, and hitting Ignore only causes it to spam error messages with every click.

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