Hey, I wanna say "a few" 
words about the characters and share my opinion and some ideas for the story of the game.
First, about what’s there already:
The progression of the MC and his sister is well done and already got me hooked after such a short prologue. Really well-made renders, not perfect, some were oversaturated and had too much light here and there, but nothing major. Overall, the character designs are awesome and insanely sexy. I absolutely loved how submissive Piper is in that one dream scene! More of that, please!!! Also, I honestly got surprised by the actually well-done and good-looking animations and the amount of them that the prologue already has. That’s really nice.
Now, some ideas and wishes I have for the story:
I hope the MC’s sister finds out about his secret dreams and kinks and helps him turn them into reality, like dominating other girls from the neighborhood to fulfill both his and her wildest secret fantasies. Maybe they even discover they share some really messed-up fetishes they’d like to try out together along the way, like enslaving Piper and her sister, maybe?
I can also see his sister trying to get the MC to build a harem, especially since she’s a rich girl with few boundaries and lots of money to spend. That alone opens up so many possibilities. Not really into crossdressing or trans stuff that much, tbh, so I hope that stays minimal and optional.
And about the dream scenes, yeah, they offer great creative freedom, but I always worry they won’t carry over into the MC’s reality or affect the story since they’re “just dreams.” Hope they actually become real in False Narrative.
And now to wrap things up:
I’m really not a person who likes writing long reviews or even commenting in forums at all, but this game has a lot of potential which made me create this wall of text, lol. I genuinely enjoyed the first part of the prologue a lot, with insanely nice-looking characters, superb render quality, plus a catchy story and character progression. I’m absolutely looking forward to more!
Keep up the nice work, Pixel Narrative!
I’m out,
Yelena
words about the characters and share my opinion and some ideas for the story of the game.First, about what’s there already:
The progression of the MC and his sister is well done and already got me hooked after such a short prologue. Really well-made renders, not perfect, some were oversaturated and had too much light here and there, but nothing major. Overall, the character designs are awesome and insanely sexy. I absolutely loved how submissive Piper is in that one dream scene! More of that, please!!! Also, I honestly got surprised by the actually well-done and good-looking animations and the amount of them that the prologue already has. That’s really nice.
Now, some ideas and wishes I have for the story:
I hope the MC’s sister finds out about his secret dreams and kinks and helps him turn them into reality, like dominating other girls from the neighborhood to fulfill both his and her wildest secret fantasies. Maybe they even discover they share some really messed-up fetishes they’d like to try out together along the way, like enslaving Piper and her sister, maybe?
I can also see his sister trying to get the MC to build a harem, especially since she’s a rich girl with few boundaries and lots of money to spend. That alone opens up so many possibilities. Not really into crossdressing or trans stuff that much, tbh, so I hope that stays minimal and optional.
And about the dream scenes, yeah, they offer great creative freedom, but I always worry they won’t carry over into the MC’s reality or affect the story since they’re “just dreams.” Hope they actually become real in False Narrative.
And now to wrap things up:
I’m really not a person who likes writing long reviews or even commenting in forums at all, but this game has a lot of potential which made me create this wall of text, lol. I genuinely enjoyed the first part of the prologue a lot, with insanely nice-looking characters, superb render quality, plus a catchy story and character progression. I’m absolutely looking forward to more!
Keep up the nice work, Pixel Narrative!
I’m out,
Yelena
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