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Premis looks interesting. English needs major work. over all I give it a 6 out of 10 with a potential of 8 our of 10 with proper English.
Yes, it really does, you need someone to help you thereEnglish needs major work.
I hope they remembered to poke holes in the box and included copious amounts of energy drinks and pop tarts!Thanks! ! A team of specially trained ninjas have already kidnapped one native speaker and sent him to us via UPS
No offence, but your Russian is terrible also. And I'm not talking about typos: "с коридора", "скучает за тобой" etc. Really?Thanks for the comment. English is not my native language (as you may have noticed), translation is mainly by Google ... But I will work on myself!
The English is pretty bad. That's a bad thing. It is also going really fast. Some of us like stories to go a little slower.This has good potential.. Need to work on the English translation though, that is really bad.
I agree it needs to be filled out some more story and character depth wise, however that would just make it even harder to read English wise i guess.. so maybe it needs two things, at least to turn it's potential into something good, better Dialogue/story and better translation. This of course may take time though. If it is a single person developer, then it is very rare to find one who can do the"Holy Porn trinity". As in "Render, Program and Write". So they may need time to gather funds and help. I wish them good luck though and will be watching this as it progressesThe English is pretty bad. That's a bad thing. It is also going really fast. Some of us like stories to go a little slower.
The good parts is that the women all have a different look and they are all pretty in their own way. I like having a few older women in the story.
Thanks for your feedback! I also do not like those monsters with disproportionate bodies, which for some reason are now in vogue.Hello.
Much has already been said.
Personally, I'm glad that the characters are not so over-proportionally populated. ( not these oversized breasts or oversized cock of the MC )
I'm curious to see how the whole thing turns out.
What I would personally like to see are outfits for special occasions and - even if they are a bit tricky - outfits with pantyhose instead of stockings.
But that is only my estimation and wishes.
Good luck and fun with the (further) development.
Ok, I accepted about Google)) The second day will be released soon, there will be a lot of changesdon`t use google translator it is shit !!! make incest patch ! we can rename mom but who call mom by name ? in toilet girl who suck is principal Johnson and we have real principal with cyrilic !
Thank you, but it all depends on the support of people...Capcom in business Cool game, please don't give up
that's exactly what i was thinking when i read the premise. xDUmm, a "college student" is well beyond puberty...