I don't really mind the NTR as long as the MC is getting his d.i.c.k wet but he's aint getting any p.u.s.s.i.e.s except some HJ and stuffs where others are getting the full experience. I was hoping MC would join in to team on the sister when she was riding Carl.... Hopeless MC!
Wow. So this is an NTR story. Its great that we can consume something so different here. I haven't fapped once because of how fucked up it really it. I have always thought that I enjoy NTR and I have seen a lot of it, but all that was just laughable. The unrealistic nature of the stories I've come across so far along with the taboo, made those more palatable and fappable. This one is just crazy. I've only been hoping the cops get their comeuppance, but the way this is going, that's unlikely to happen.
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I'm a bit conflicted on routes A and B. I kinda want to continue working with the cops, but I also want Becky corruption the most (and sister making MC jealous with Carl too tbh). That photo shoot scene was insanely hot. So I guess have to go route B.
Not a huge fan of blackmail and pretty much anything against the will, but corruption (even super slow) of an angel like Becky is great.
Not a huge fan of blackmail and pretty much anything against the will, but corruption (even super slow) of an angel like Becky is great.
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Originally, I assumed the MC would hook up with his mom and sister but I'm not sure if that's gonna happen at this point. We'll see. Humiliation and blackmail seem to be the main theme here.
I define NTR as cheating on the MC so I'm not seeing much of that yet.
The best ntr story told. Congratulations to the creator. Very good.
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Is it really out of character and stupid to trust your precious high school girlfriend who is known to be kind, compassionate, and a little prude? I'd argue it's completely out of the left field of pretty lil girlfriend says to you "They came and asked some questions about blah blah blah", and for you to flip out and say "I don't believe you tell me what they really did to you".
How does it work in your real life? Your fall prey to your assumption without proof? You fail to listen to people you love and trust? That's OK but most normal people believe it when the people they love tell them something. They don't doubt them because of some preconceived notion they have on someone else.
You can argue that Parker could've been a bit more tactful and tell Becky "I wouldn't talk to them, they are corrupt" or "You should be careful around them, they're dangerous". But I think your criticism is incorrect to think that Parker needs doubt Becky's words over his image of the police.
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OK, this is porn game, so I don't really care and just enjoy it, but if we're nit-picking...
The only thing Parker should've said: "Hey, be super careful with them, they might try to blackmail you to get to me, don't trust a word they're saying, it will only end badly for you and me".
Because if I heard those cops are talking to Becky, that's literally the only thing I'd think about, and she would probably try to quietly protect me, even though it would be bad for her, because she's very compassionate person. Seems super obvious, especially because that's literally what happened to his mom already. At some point he should get a clue.
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If the MC who does the cucking, then this game wouldn't be tagged as ntr...
I have a feeling that route A will deal with the MC slowly losing faith in women in general. Be it his mom, sis, or even Becky. If this is the case, I can also see Becky corruption at the hands of the MC, but who knows heh.
At least, I feel like route A flows better with the plot that was being set up prior to that decision.
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Emily will be the only other student the MC knows at the ALC, so she's still got a chance to get some revenge on him - or seduce him away from Becky.
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Crawling out from under my rock for just a minute or three.
I wanted to take the opportunity to say that I really appreciate the reactions and the spirited discussion. Even if there are elements that you don't like, the fact that many of you have, well, "strong opinions" on what should have happened or should happen in the future is personally gratifying. With so many "I'm waiting for X to happen," I'm sure you understand that not everybody is going to get what they want. Still, I do pay attention to the feedback, and can definitely say that there are plot elements that have changed from "the original plan" as a result of all of you. Maybe once it's all done and over we'll discuss those, and some of the underlying "why things went the way they did." There are reasons for a lot of it. Not all of it - there's definitely a few "why the hell not's" scattered around, but still...
I did want to address one item - the distinction between "realistic" and "plausible." There are elements of this story that, frankly, push the bounds of "realistic." Or possibly push past them. (You know what they are as well as I do.) But "plausible" is a somewhat looser standard than "realistic," and, frankly, I've yet to run into an "adult" game or KN that really met the "realistic" standard. So, what I'm trying to do is to stay within "plausible" while still having some fun with the story. To have the characters all have their strengths and weaknesses, and acting the way that someone with those strengths and weaknesses might act, without any "that couldn't possibly happen" moments. (And for those that haven't been around since the beginning of this thread, I'll repeat that I spent a good chunk of my childhood in the South in the 1960's, when and where there were plenty of cops who did whatever the hell they damn well pleased with impunity. So please don't use "can't possibly" with respect to Bill and Paul.) (And, yes, if you do the math, you'll figure out that I'm a dinosaur. There's a reason for my avatar's tag line.)
Also, I regret that I can't bang out "update of the month" on this. This update, in particular, did take longer than I wanted - no question about it. But it was a combination of "life happened" and some last-minute extensions to the chapter. "Quality over speed" has been my motto. That isn't going to change. (And, per the terms of the OP, you're allowed to jump all over the next newbie who says "when's the next update. Which, given past history, I'm expecting within a couple of weeks. LOL)
Finally, to those of you who are supporting me on Patreon or SubscribeStar, or who have donated assets, or who have offered their assistance, or who have just tossed a few words of encouragement my way on Discord or here - THANK YOU! I've discovered that this is a much lonelier endeavor than I thought it would be when I embarked on it (particularly after JohnCBB left) and the temptation to just pack it in raises its ugly head now and again. It's the support, via whatever means, of all of you that keeps me going, and keeps me determined to finish what I started.
OK, 'nuff said. Back to Daz Studio and renders for Chapter 11...
I wanted to take the opportunity to say that I really appreciate the reactions and the spirited discussion. Even if there are elements that you don't like, the fact that many of you have, well, "strong opinions" on what should have happened or should happen in the future is personally gratifying. With so many "I'm waiting for X to happen," I'm sure you understand that not everybody is going to get what they want. Still, I do pay attention to the feedback, and can definitely say that there are plot elements that have changed from "the original plan" as a result of all of you. Maybe once it's all done and over we'll discuss those, and some of the underlying "why things went the way they did." There are reasons for a lot of it. Not all of it - there's definitely a few "why the hell not's" scattered around, but still...
I did want to address one item - the distinction between "realistic" and "plausible." There are elements of this story that, frankly, push the bounds of "realistic." Or possibly push past them. (You know what they are as well as I do.) But "plausible" is a somewhat looser standard than "realistic," and, frankly, I've yet to run into an "adult" game or KN that really met the "realistic" standard. So, what I'm trying to do is to stay within "plausible" while still having some fun with the story. To have the characters all have their strengths and weaknesses, and acting the way that someone with those strengths and weaknesses might act, without any "that couldn't possibly happen" moments. (And for those that haven't been around since the beginning of this thread, I'll repeat that I spent a good chunk of my childhood in the South in the 1960's, when and where there were plenty of cops who did whatever the hell they damn well pleased with impunity. So please don't use "can't possibly" with respect to Bill and Paul.) (And, yes, if you do the math, you'll figure out that I'm a dinosaur. There's a reason for my avatar's tag line.)
Also, I regret that I can't bang out "update of the month" on this. This update, in particular, did take longer than I wanted - no question about it. But it was a combination of "life happened" and some last-minute extensions to the chapter. "Quality over speed" has been my motto. That isn't going to change. (And, per the terms of the OP, you're allowed to jump all over the next newbie who says "when's the next update. Which, given past history, I'm expecting within a couple of weeks. LOL)
Finally, to those of you who are supporting me on Patreon or SubscribeStar, or who have donated assets, or who have offered their assistance, or who have just tossed a few words of encouragement my way on Discord or here - THANK YOU! I've discovered that this is a much lonelier endeavor than I thought it would be when I embarked on it (particularly after JohnCBB left) and the temptation to just pack it in raises its ugly head now and again. It's the support, via whatever means, of all of you that keeps me going, and keeps me determined to finish what I started.
OK, 'nuff said. Back to Daz Studio and renders for Chapter 11...
What the other guy said was spot on. No, I didn't expect Parker to call out his girlfriend for lying. My biggest issue is the inner thoughts he was having. He KNOWS his mother was blackmailed and taken advantage of by those cops. He KNOWS they've been blackmailing him to do their bidding. And he KNOWS they threatened to go after his girlfriend if he refused to work with them. With that being the case, how could he possibly believe the cops haven't roped her into the mix?
If after she said they just asked questions, and he said, "Oh, ok" but inside was thinking, "Oh crap, they're going after her. I need to do something", I wouldn't have been critical of him in the least. But the fact that he thought, "Thank god. The cops who have been blackmailing my mother and I, and who threatened to go after my girlfriend, just asked her question. Dodged that bullet!" That's just moronic.
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Again, I bet he had those thoughts in his mind. But how are you going to dismiss the words of your girlfriend who you believe is honest and loves you, over your own assumptions without proof. If Becky said they didn't ask her about anything else, they didn't ask her about anything else.
But we know what his thoughts are. We have the privilege of seeing his thoughts in real time. So we know he didn't have those thoughts. And yes, you're going to "dismiss" the words of your girlfriend because you have first hand knowledge that the people she interacted with are dangerous and have a history of taking advantage of women (especially women you know).
Also, for someone who believes his girlfriend is honest and loves him, he was sure quick to jump to the conclusion that his girl was cheating on him after getting an anonymous email with her naked pictures on them. If he truly had faith in his girlfriend, he would have given her the benefit of the doubt. And if he used his brain a little, it was the 2nd opportunity he could have put 2 and 2 together, and figured out the cops came after her. In fact, if he truly was weary of the cops coming after her after that first conversation, that should have been the first thing to cross his mind. But the fact that thought didn't even register confirms that he did in fact naively believe the cops didn't target his girlfriend (again, after they threatened to come after her).
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Firstly (in brief) Its right that parker's first thoughts are confused and will then realise probable truth of situation I think the question will be if cops now demand more intimate (porn shots) picture, or just rape her before Parker realises the truth (she could make a very good submissive sex puppet and his best friend could be the first benefactor under orders obviously.
Secondly WHENS THE NEXT UPDATE (joking) Really Rich it may not be the quickest update but it is always worth waiting for and I would be devastated if you gave up on the story, please please keep up the good work and good luck.
P.S. W.T.F. is with the sister Parker is blue balled and she puts on a show to strain his nuts even further, slut, bitch send her round here next time I have a spare bottle of wine to loosen her up then I wont need hand relief.
Firstly (in brief) Its right that parker's first thoughts are confused and will then realise probable truth of situation I think the question will be if cops now demand more intimate (porn shots) picture, or just rape her before Parker realises the truth (she could make a very good submissive sex puppet and his best friend could be the first benefactor under orders obviously.
Secondly WHENS THE NEXT UPDATE (joking) Really Rich it may not be the quickest update but it is always worth waiting for and I would be devastated if you gave up on the story, please please keep up the good work and good luck.
P.S. W.T.F. is with the sister Parker is blue balled and she puts on a show to strain his nuts even further, slut, bitch send her round here next time I have a spare bottle of wine to loosen her up then I wont need hand relief.