The writing goes from awful to decent, but it is so bad, and plot convenient that makes me cringe too hard. The whole plot revolves around an event where everyone becomes 10000% stupid that don't even see obvious things. Everybody becomes so stupid that only 1 person being avergae smart could bring down the whole plot down.
If you see any video of police misconduct you know that the people around are not saying half phrases from time to time, they are shouting and confronting those officers for their behavior.
So when I read the girl protesting and only speaking half phrases like "you cannt..." "she has to be searched by.." Who speaks like that?
Why is the car being searched? I dont know about law, but there are common sense guidelines. Nobosy had any suspicious behavior, she didnt take an alcohol test, they didnt check her eyes, I mean there were no grounds for search. I get that those 2 policeman aer corrupt, but it seems that a lot of women visited the sation. Didnt the higher commands think that maybe there should be women officers since at some point any of those women would have to be searched?
This plot and the excuses for this thing to prosper are "somehow Palpatine returned" levels of cringe.
The ending b kind of fixes it, and tries to wrap it up, but the writer didnt watch enough police and court dramas and missed a lot of stuff like witnesses and. Also it made it like the rest of the game, A "tell, dont show" super shallow kind of closing statement thing.
All this to say that the dev claims it is a kinetic novel, but actually it is not a novel, more like kinetic fanfic.
And the worst part is that the scenes are not that good either, average. The best thing about it is the mothers face and expressions.
If you can ignore how stupid is the plot and enjoy the situations, good for you, in my case with all the vague police drama and the 2 officers teleporting everywhere at the right momments, I coulndt enjoy this much
If you see any video of police misconduct you know that the people around are not saying half phrases from time to time, they are shouting and confronting those officers for their behavior.
So when I read the girl protesting and only speaking half phrases like "you cannt..." "she has to be searched by.." Who speaks like that?
Why is the car being searched? I dont know about law, but there are common sense guidelines. Nobosy had any suspicious behavior, she didnt take an alcohol test, they didnt check her eyes, I mean there were no grounds for search. I get that those 2 policeman aer corrupt, but it seems that a lot of women visited the sation. Didnt the higher commands think that maybe there should be women officers since at some point any of those women would have to be searched?
This plot and the excuses for this thing to prosper are "somehow Palpatine returned" levels of cringe.
The ending b kind of fixes it, and tries to wrap it up, but the writer didnt watch enough police and court dramas and missed a lot of stuff like witnesses and. Also it made it like the rest of the game, A "tell, dont show" super shallow kind of closing statement thing.
All this to say that the dev claims it is a kinetic novel, but actually it is not a novel, more like kinetic fanfic.
And the worst part is that the scenes are not that good either, average. The best thing about it is the mothers face and expressions.
If you can ignore how stupid is the plot and enjoy the situations, good for you, in my case with all the vague police drama and the 2 officers teleporting everywhere at the right momments, I coulndt enjoy this much