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There was a whole rant session early in the thread about "is it NTR or is it not." A lot depends on your particular definition of NTR. I eventually caved and added the tag (and the warning in the OP) just because I got beat up by a number of strident people. If it doesn't fit your definition of NTR, and if you're here looking for it, then I apologize, but I finally decided to say it was just because it scared off the people who would bitch, moan and scream if there was even a hint of what they considered NTR. Basically, I got tired of people shitting all over me for "springing NTR on them without warning."Where? I see no NTR in this game at all.
No, it's OK. And sorry if my response put you off. I wasn't at my best when I wrote that.Im sorry for even giving opinion I was not aware of how touchy of a subject it was.
It's like going down the sidewalk and coming across a big old dog turd in your path. Do you step in it and get your shoes dirty, or do you walk around it and keep your shoes clean. Or do stand there and complain hoping that someone will come along and clean it up so you can go along your merry way. I find it funny that so much anxiety is created by something that is so easily remedied.No, it's OK. And sorry if my response put you off. I wasn't at my best when I wrote that.
But, yes, NTR is easily the most "touchy subject" in this entire site, not just this thread.
Oh man, I actually a bit disappointed you said that. I was hoping you'd develop Becky a bit more and slowly break her. If you're saying climax being close, I can only assume she gets dicked by the cops and Parker finding out. Which IMO is a bit too soon as I wanted different types of sexual favors / tension before that.That being said, I'm going to break one of my normal rules just a leetle bit, and let the world know that the "b" path is nearing its climax. ("Climax" in the "novel" sense! Get your mind out of the gutter!) The "a" path still has a ways to go, however.
Well, the "a" route was essentially the one that JohnCBB had laid out when we started things. I threw the "b" route in because there were parts of it I wanted to include, and they just didn't fit in the "a" part.Surprise you gravitated towards the "a" route, I guess everyone likes a happy ending.
Right but It would be even better if it was done by his friend...Oh man, I actually a bit disappointed you said that. I was hoping you'd develop Becky a bit more and slowly break her. If you're saying climax being close, I can only assume she gets dicked by the cops and Parker finding out. Which IMO is a bit too soon as I wanted different types of sexual favors / tension before that.
I feel like in most corruption, once you do that it's practically near the end. I wanted at least some blowjobs / mystery element, along with emotional neglect of Becky that eventually led to full on sex.
I can't imagine any other narrative "climax" other than Becky losing her virginity and Parker finding out and being devastated. Surprise you gravitated towards the "a" route, I guess everyone likes a happy ending.
Sounds great, actually. It helps with the greatest issue of this kind of novels-without-choices.Haven't committed to the idea, but it seems like that would be an opportunity to satisfy some of the "oh, if only X would Y..." sentiments that people have expressed that ran counter to the plot.
Added bonus points if the MC is watching and she realises he betrayed her.I've been waiting since 2017 for these damn cops to fuck Becky, please don't disappoint me. Love paths are boring to me.
I play the new update andI've been waiting since 2017 for these damn cops to fuck Becky, please don't disappoint me. Love paths are boring to me.