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okay in 11a they also went after the teacher as well. I wonder how the paths will diverge in future updates. I also see as pathway in both routes where Parker is going to have to prove himself and as a final exam of sorts blackmail his mother especially after what he found out when he followed her. I just don't know if incest is something that the developer is comfortable with. But then again Parker did masturbate to the image of his mom being naked while she was searched. I wonder if the police are going to allow Parker to participate in the tuesday event that was referenced in the 12a update.
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After the nude photo shoot, Parker thought Becky was cheating on him. So, in chapter 11B when Parker met officer Paul, he offered Carl's mother as well as Becky. So I think in the next update (12b), Becky will be in the hands of the cops.
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Hello. I wanted to congratulate the developer of the novel. The plot is very beautiful and I am very passionate about it.
I was over a year behind (at chapter 8), so by downloading the latest version, I started all over again, following both paths after chapter 9, on two different slots.
I wanted to make some observations, and maybe make some suggestions, if I may:
In path A, we have a Parker who slowly corrupts and becomes unscrupulous, and who collaborating with the police begins to betray the trust of even his friends.
It would be interesting if already from the next interrogation (and in the following ones), the policemen allowed him to actively participate, perhaps with a mask or a hood to keep his identity secret anyway.
A path that however, over time, will lead him to remain alone.
Unlike in path B, which is also very interesting, there is something I don't like and it is not clear to me.
Why does Parker decide to cooperate after refusing to cooperate with the police and being framed?
From his point of view, he has now lost everything: reputation, school, scholarship, friends (Carl) and girlfriend, and he knew that in all likelihood he would go to jail (not knowing the story of the photos).
The way I see it, this was supposed to be a path where Parker had to use every means to try to thwart the police and somehow seek revenge, and not cooperate. On the other hand, the cops would "respond", picking on her family and friends (Becky, Melissa, Melanie....)
It was since Chapter 5 that I had been looking forward to seeing Becky in the hands of the police
, but the way she will get there, sold by Parker, is terribly heartbreaking, I didn't expect it: I knew that sooner or later the time would come, but never like that, and I'm really sorry for her.
okay, I said my opinion, going too far. I apologize for the long post and any spelling horrors (hopefully google translator did his job well)
having said that, a greeting to the author with a quote from the policeman Paul: "Nice work!"
I was over a year behind (at chapter 8), so by downloading the latest version, I started all over again, following both paths after chapter 9, on two different slots.
I wanted to make some observations, and maybe make some suggestions, if I may:
In path A, we have a Parker who slowly corrupts and becomes unscrupulous, and who collaborating with the police begins to betray the trust of even his friends.
It would be interesting if already from the next interrogation (and in the following ones), the policemen allowed him to actively participate, perhaps with a mask or a hood to keep his identity secret anyway.
A path that however, over time, will lead him to remain alone.
Unlike in path B, which is also very interesting, there is something I don't like and it is not clear to me.
Why does Parker decide to cooperate after refusing to cooperate with the police and being framed?
From his point of view, he has now lost everything: reputation, school, scholarship, friends (Carl) and girlfriend, and he knew that in all likelihood he would go to jail (not knowing the story of the photos).
The way I see it, this was supposed to be a path where Parker had to use every means to try to thwart the police and somehow seek revenge, and not cooperate. On the other hand, the cops would "respond", picking on her family and friends (Becky, Melissa, Melanie....)
It was since Chapter 5 that I had been looking forward to seeing Becky in the hands of the police
, but the way she will get there, sold by Parker, is terribly heartbreaking, I didn't expect it: I knew that sooner or later the time would come, but never like that, and I'm really sorry for her.okay, I said my opinion, going too far. I apologize for the long post and any spelling horrors (hopefully google translator did his job well)
having said that, a greeting to the author with a quote from the policeman Paul: "Nice work!"
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I wonder that too. You chose the "fuck you" route, but then still cooperate? That is not sensible. It seems like the choices were made just to have a slight changes in character path, but I think the story still remains the same. In both path, Parker will remain alone the way I see it. He will lose everything.Hello. I wanted to congratulate the developer of the novel. The plot is very beautiful and I am very passionate about it.
I was over a year behind (at chapter 8), so by downloading the latest version, I started all over again, following both paths after chapter 9, on two different slots.
I wanted to make some observations, and maybe make some suggestions, if I may:
In path A, we have a Parker who slowly corrupts and becomes unscrupulous, and who collaborating with the police begins to betray the trust of even his friends.
It would be interesting if already from the next interrogation (and in the following ones), the policemen allowed him to actively participate, perhaps with a mask or a hood to keep his identity secret anyway.
A path that however, over time, will lead him to remain alone.
Unlike in path B, which is also very interesting, there is something I don't like and it is not clear to me.
Why does Parker decide to cooperate after refusing to cooperate with the police and being framed?
From his point of view, he has now lost everything: reputation, school, scholarship, friends (Carl) and girlfriend, and he knew that in all likelihood he would go to jail (not knowing the story of the photos).
The way I see it, this was supposed to be a path where Parker had to use every means to try to thwart the police and somehow seek revenge, and not cooperate. On the other hand, the cops would "respond", picking on her family and friends (Becky, Melissa, Melanie....)
It was since Chapter 5 that I had been looking forward to seeing Becky in the hands of the police
okay, I said my opinion, going too far. I apologize for the long post and any spelling horrors (hopefully google translator did his job well)
having said that, a greeting to the author with a quote from the policeman Paul: "Nice work!"
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precisely, also because it risks becoming too repetitive with identical scenes on both sides.
For example in path B, when Parker proposes to Paul, Carl's mother, we have the exact same dialogue as when he proposes it in path A.
I think if there are 2 paths, it doesn't make much sense to have repetitive scenes of police victims:
or at least some women on one side and others on the other.
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Yeah you're right. In path A there are 3 people proposed by Parker; Carl's mother, the teacher and Hanni. In path B, only 2; Carl's mother and Becky.
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In fact, in my opinion it would have been more sensible to have:
route A:
Carl's mother
Mrs. Vandermeer
Hanni
route B:
Becky
Melissa
Melanie
Tolly
..... but all the women taken by the police without Parker's help, and taken precisely because he wants revenge.
route A:
Carl's mother
Mrs. Vandermeer
Hanni
route B:
Becky
Melissa
Melanie
Tolly
..... but all the women taken by the police without Parker's help, and taken precisely because he wants revenge.
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I like that. But what I'm hoping to see is a serious talk between Parker and Becky, in where she will explains about the photos. If Parker have to know the reason for Becky's photoshoot with Carl, it will awaken his inner anger and get revenge to the cops instead of cooperating with them.
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yes, it is something I thought should have happened on route B, but Parker already thought about it when he saw the photos the first time: he will not ask for explanations because he imagines that Carl and Becky will use police blackmail as an "excuse", so don't will believe them.
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Oh that makes sense. Now there is no chance for Parker and Becky to fix their relationship because of such thing.
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Also now (still on Route B), I suppose Parker will be "lynched" by his entire former school (as they did with Jenna) because of how he mistreated Becky by dating her with Emily.
I also think against Melissa, because she loved the girl.
So I suppose the GAME OVER of social life is close for poor Parker.
I also think against Melissa, because she loved the girl.
So I suppose the GAME OVER of social life is close for poor Parker.
I dont think there will be much of a difference between part a and b. I think the teacher will still be the target. I think they will go after Becky in path B for update 13 but remember it was the older cop that seemed to be more intrigued by that option. Im still wondering if they are going to let Parker be the one to screw the teacher for the Tuesday event. I still think there is still a high likelhood that Parker is going to blackmail his mom into something sexual. Im not sure if it will be him or someone else.
Well technically it already happened in a way. He mausterbated to her nude image in his mind from her search. I don't think he likes incest but if the game needs it to go along how he has story planned than it will occur. He uses sex as the mechanism to advance the story but not just for sex sake. I do believe that he is going to blackmail his mother into something sexual maybe not with him but it could be the female cop from the last update.