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So, some good news. The replacement hardware has arrived. Thus, once I can get all my software re-installed, maybe I can start rendering again...
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Yea, I assumed something like that happened. Just to be clear, I have no regrets having donated money to your SS in the past. That initial Melissa content made it worth every penny, and your graphics (poses and expressions) were a big part of that.
BTW - If Parker were to catch Melissa with one her students in STDH, I wouldn't complain.
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Interesting idea. Thanks for the suggestion.BTW - If Parker were to catch Melissa with one her students in STDH, I wouldn't complain.
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If you're looking for suggestions, at the top of my list would be Becky walking in on Melissa getting fucked on her teacher's desk by Carl with a couple other students ready and waiting their turn. Instead of Becky, it could be her daughter, her husband, or her boyfriend.
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And maybe you could add something like this in your game “favorite son” where Mrs Chance gets caught with student in class by her daughter
**Lowers flamethrower**
**Slips lighter back in pocket**
As I see it, there are a couple things I need to do here. 1. Explain my careless one line comment, and, 2. Apologize.
Shit.
So, I'm a writer. I have had a fair amount of experience with both getting and giving reviews. I have also had my fair share of having my work rejected, ridiculed, and malinged, only to then have the same piece of work given major writing awards and kudos from tons of readers. It comes with the territory. I can't write to suit everybody's tastes and I know that. I tell the best story I can and understand that, when it's in the hands of my readers it becomes their story.
As such, I'm completely comfortable with hearing and giving comments like, "This part of the story feels clunky, you need more dialogue and less narrative." Or, "I hate this character, he doesn't fit and has no buiness being in this story at all." Or, even, "If X doesn't happen later in the story I'm going to be pissed." Again, it comes with the territory. If you are a creative type, you need to be prepared for critique. The good ones know that, if approached right, it can be your best tool for getting better.
So, in my one line my response, I commented briefly about plotline, character arc and my personal feelings about both. I did not address concept, writing skills, CG skills, or any other attribute of the game developer, personal or professional.
That said... I could have, and should have, been more thoughtful in making my comment. It was far too brief and did not provide any of the context that I just provided above. That's my mistake and I sincerely apologize for making it.
Before this flared up, I shared some DMs with Rich (about a completely different part of the story) and was very impressed with his openess to review and his willingess to consider other people's ideas. He is a great guy. (Actually, one of the most friendly and personable developers I've had the pleasure of visiting with here.)
If you haven't seen it yet, click on his other page, Scenes That Didn't Happen, It's the first time I've seen a developer open himself (and his story) up to allow his fans to suggest other possibilities for the story that they are all excited about.
So, tldr; I truly meant no personal disparagement with my comment and I regret that it caused any discontent and/or hubub. (Though hubub is really not all that bad it tiddies and tushies are involved. I will stand on that truth.)
Great VN Rich, as I mentioned in my more developed review on the other page, you kept me awake all one night feeling Parker's angst, Melissa's guilt, and Bill's perversion. You're talent shines throughout this effort. I'd appreciate talking with you more about your approach to scene and/or story development.
Peace
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VERY gracious of you. And thanks for the compliments. I also need to apologize, because I have an unfortunate tendency to let stress in my personal life bleed over into my reactions here, which is unwarranted.
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So, all, I've gotten most of the various software packages I need installed on the new machine. Cranked out 15 FF&S images, which I'm waiting for the batch renderer to deal with.
Feels good to be back at it again...
Feels good to be back at it again...
Hell NO! He's an okay guy but now you're heading to a totally different fetish
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Posted on SubscribeStar on Friday:
Chapter 13a Teaser Images
So, now that I'm back to banging out renders again, I thought I'd drop a few teaser images on you. I'm including Fans and Supporters in this set of teasers as a special "thank you" for your patience with regard to the delays on this chapter.
As always, thanks for your support!
Rich
Chapter 13a Teaser Images
So, now that I'm back to banging out renders again, I thought I'd drop a few teaser images on you. I'm including Fans and Supporters in this set of teasers as a special "thank you" for your patience with regard to the delays on this chapter.
As always, thanks for your support!
Rich
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With mc no, with the cop yes and also with teacher
Mc does bang his girlfriends mom though
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New update is out and it's a really really good chapter
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I hope to have more opportunities with her this milf is very hot
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If you read back through this thread, you'll find someone asking for just about every possible combination of "who does who."