OK just tried this for the first time (and read all 24 pages of comments).
Pros: I love the renders and character models. They are excellent, especially the mom. Parts of the story are extremely well-written. The interactions between the MC and the football player seemed very realistic and was a nice counter-balance to the bitchy cheerleader and perpetually horny best friend. The angst of the MC with his female friend is also very well-done.
Cons: I get the police blackmail concept but the implementation is very jarring when contrasted with the other parts of the story. I checked out the source material and it doesn't really ring consistent. In the source material the MC is somewhat of a sociopath who is given a chance to live a fantasy and has zero empathy for his parent. In the VN he seems like a much more together guy who may have some inappropriate thoughts about his mother but still cares for her. If the story evolves in the same direction as the source material it would likely invalidate most of the good character development done for the MC in the early chapters.
Overall I'm stumped by the VN. Like I said, parts of it are excellent. I don't usually have an issue with harder and darker games, but it's almost like the renders are TOO good. If I see someone in a game being coerced into something, I don't want to see their tear-streaked faces and feel that emotional burden. Porn games shouldn't bring up those negative emotions (even games like RAPEPLAY don't linger on the distress). While the MC is being presented as your typical unsure horny teen, I find it hard to believe that he wouldn't feel more empathy to his mother (who doesn't seem like she's a bitch to him), especially after he is clearly shaken up by the way she is being treated. All in all it seemed like it would be a good setup for a revenge-type story with him extracting vengeance from the corrupt cops and maybe getting with the hot mom (or others) through gratitude or some such. The way it stands now, I'm not sure how the MC CAN'T be thinking of making the cops pay (even while he rubs one out over the vision of his naked mom).
On one last note, please add a "rape" tag to the genre listing. While Clinton may have thought a blow-job wasn't "sex" I pretty certain in most countries what is being portrayed is definitely rape.
I'll be interested in seeing how the story develops and I hope that the previous consistent writing will continue.