I haven't yet re-built the game distribution with the patch included in it for posting here. I didn't expect the game to show up here as quickly as it did. (I normally give our $10 and $20 patrons a number of days as the "only recipients" before opening it up to other people - was surprised to see the links get here that quickly.)
Slightly longer answer: The Literotica story that JohnCBB posted serves as a conceptual basis for this Kinetic Novel, but we're not slavishly following it. So, you could probably say "Based on a story by...", just the way that many Hollywood productions are "based on" certain novels, but take (sometimes considerable) liberties with them. JohnCBB and I are collaborating on the script. I'll have to confess that (so far) the Melanie and Becky arcs are primarily mine, while the Melissa arc is primarily his. We're trying to weave the two together, of course. But don't assume that just because the Literotica piece goes in a particular direction that that means this will...
Great stuff. Just gone through chapter 5 & thought it was very entertainlng. Melissa makes a lovely MILF. Parker seems like a believable character, (& so does Carl), & the police are truly evil villains. Just one thing tho', if Melissa was in my power I would tell her to stop wearing sensible teacher shoes on her visits to me & get something stylish.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm typically not much of a fan of Kinetic Novels as I prefer to have various choices on what to do. That being said this is probably the best Kinetic Novel on here. The renders are nice, the story is great, characters believable and realistic. Perhaps at some point, it will move into a multiple endings sort of deal, one end where the corrupt cops win, one where the family wins. Good job developers, keep up the good work.
Slightly longer answer: The Literotica story that JohnCBB posted serves as a conceptual basis for this Kinetic Novel, but we're not slavishly following it. So, you could probably say "Based on a story by...", just the way that many Hollywood productions are "based on" certain novels, but take (sometimes considerable) liberties with them. JohnCBB and I are collaborating on the script. I'll have to confess that (so far) the Melanie and Becky arcs are primarily mine, while the Melissa arc is primarily his. We're trying to weave the two together, of course. But don't assume that just because the Literotica piece goes in a particular direction that that means this will...
Thanks for answering. I just didn't like that particular scenario hope you guys could tweak the story leading to that if you can't just scrap that scene.
Will the story of the game go further than the novel in the Melissa story?
Love the story so far and hope you could get more patreon since it has great renders and decent story for NTR can't wait for the next update.
per request, here is my unofficial android port of Family, Friends and Strangers v5.0. (you can enable/disable the censored content in the preferences screen)
from now on my android ports of Ren'Py games have a 2nd, persistent save location like windows. if you uninstall an app, the save files and persistent data remain intact.
therefore the app needs the permission to access the public external storage, because it has to read and write outside its own external storage directories.
you have to grant the permission or the app is shut down.
have fun and please report problems (you can reach me
This kinetic novel would probably be better if the cop's initial encounter wasn't so laughably unbelievable. How the flying F*** would it be even remotely believable that doing such a thing to a regular citizen(in public), especially if she's such an upstanding citizen as we are led to believe , would not have repercussions for those dim-witted cops? Do we have to expect that the citizens of this town live in such fear of a couple of cops that would be sacked (or jailed) in a heartbeat for their less than savory methods? Reporters would have a field day with that scoop.
Well looking as to cops can do more and more i would not be surpriced then sometime in the future something like this would happen in RL. They can spy, tab our phones etc.. then can even shoot us dead in broad daylight or even in our homes the only thing they say they thought we grabbed a gun and the court will dismiss them..
The girls look hot, but the main character is just so cringey and unlikeable that the fun died already during the prologue. The MCs attitude, his haircut, his awful looking shirts... he looks like one of these sweaty Russian dudes from some random Russian porn video from the early 2000s. At times, he seems like he's somewhat mentally retarded without being either funny or entertaining. Just mean-spirited, vile and boring.
Render quality is good and I hope the dev will someday make a game that's enjoyable and not just having to play some angry stupid kid while his mom gets fucked by the police over and over. I didn't enjoy it so far.