- Sep 27, 2017
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Great stuff. Just gone through chapter 5 & thought it was very entertainlng. Melissa makes a lovely MILF. Parker seems like a believable character, (& so does Carl), & the police are truly evil villains. Just one thing tho', if Melissa was in my power I would tell her to stop wearing sensible teacher shoes on her visits to me & get something stylish.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Looking forward to the next chapter.