What I miss in this VN are your sometimes snarky comments in the dialogues.
There's actually very little to actually change (now I've been right through it....it did used to be a little rough in the early days). Spelling etc is usually very good from the get go, but it's mostly grammar phrasing etc where a lot of non-native speakers have issues with.
As always though, if you spot anything please let me know here or by a pm and will look into it and change if required and advise perv. Thankfully since I went through it from the start I don't believe there has been a single comment here regarding the dialogue but hey, evben I still might miss something.
It's honestly a great VN, said that long before I ever got involved with him to help, it's only downside is it's very slow update pace, but it has always been like that...just something you have to accept if you get into it. It's very much a passion project that is worked on when perv has the time.