The conversation bubbles are pretty hard to read the way you have them set up. I would suggest making the boxes 70% translucent and then the words in white for they pop out or the conversation bubbles being a solid colour. Here's a quick edit just to give an idea;View attachment 1655938
one of the scenes of MsAnna sister visiting asking for help.
Any tips suggestions. likes and dislikes..
big thank you.. my friend.. what about the storyline??The conversation bubbles are pretty hard to read the way you have them set up. I would suggest making the boxes 70% translucent and then the words in white for they pop out or the conversation bubbles being a solid colour. Here's a quick edit just to give an idea;
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Most welcome. The story line is your own art, I appreciate your efforts. I like to help where I canbig thank you.. my friend.. what about the storyline??
thank you..Most welcome. The story line is your own art, I appreciate your efforts. I like to help where I can
thank you. i was going to try and make each a chapter/ comic by themselves.. the game is great but don't want not any problems. I'm trying o make it the way i believe players would have wanted the story line to gone. I have introduce different characters to expand the story.Hey ivan are you starting over again with the story or are you continuing the one all of your render in this thread? I think you should just start over im not saying you're gonna re do all the renders just add some more in the old renders that you make because i think you should give bobby a monologue in the first chapter and introduce all the girls to the readers just saying though because i have a feeling that you can make it a long story.
Nicely done.View attachment 1668881 my try at this beautiful young lady.. View attachment 1668882 she fell asleep reading magazines View attachment 1668883