Maybe spellcheck and use fewer speech bubbles per panel as it's confusing and has no real flow.Here are 4 pgs from my try at BBS the graphic novel.
Please let me know if the story line is flowing right. Any tips and Suggestions. Thank you F95 Artist for the use of some of their models. View attachment 2053587 View attachment 2053589 View attachment 2053590 View attachment 2053591
thank youMaybe spellcheck and use fewer speech bubbles per panel as it's confusing and has no real flow.
You really need to have the text corrected by someone who knows English. And I would also suggest using standart rules of comic speech bubbles. Like if a bubble has a shape of cloud - it means that those are just characters' thoughts.Here are 4 pgs from my try at BBS the graphic novel.
Please let me know if the story line is flowing right. Any tips and Suggestions. Thank you F95 Artist for the use of some of their models. View attachment 2053587 View attachment 2053589 View attachment 2053590 View attachment 2053591
Guys, this scene is not in the game anymore, right?View attachment 965295 View attachment 965296 View attachment 965295 View attachment 965297 can you make some more renders to continue this part of the game
whats the room assets?