HTML Abandoned Far Away from Home [v0.0.2 Alpha] [Krcag]

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itsyeboii

itsyeboii

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Rutonat said:
Nah the argument is bad. But there is some right about people shitting on a game instead of having any constructive criticism at all.

If you look at the first page, you can easily find two examples. hotmike's post is trash, as it is just gratuitous shitting on a project for the sake of being an asshole, while Tau_Iota's one is constructive, respectfull, even if there's negative points. That's the difference. You can say you don't like something, whitout saying it like an attack on the game of dev and adding insults on top.
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Yeah I forgot to mention that you shouldn't be a dick either.
 
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Krcag

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Terakahn said:
I do like the premise. Real porn html game. Female protagonist. Starting a new life in a new place.

Though it's always a mixed bag with a new game. I'll have to at least give it a fair shake and see how it is.

Any specific plans/goals for development?
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Thannk you for giving attention to my game, I really do appreciate it! Of course, there's a list of goals I want to achieve and hopefully by the next update there is going to be slower route for Father and Mother saga and probably Gym content I am really excited to see how you guys like it. But before all I really need to compress these images/videos...1.5GB is a lot... I don't want to spoil a lot of stuff, but there are going to be relationships with the club owner if you meet him, he is rich and thirsty for you, yacht travels, island vacations, private plane flight, you name it, there are going to be couple possible routes you can go with him. College, you can either choose to drop out after meeting Michael and going for that bag or either try hard to make your own bag, though as in every single game, females don't really do well in college so Principal is going to give you some private tutoring. If you work at a Cafe you get the angry boss route that is going to dom you. Though, that's a short recap of future development and I hope you guys stay tuned for this :) (Also I accept suggestions in Discord)


Rutonat said:
FFS people are never happy about anything. Not all devs start out with the knowledge and experience to make a super long and expansive game that weights less than 300Mo. You clearly didn't discover the other big HTML games of that type until the devs changed from gifs to webm. This dev just started their project, and you're already being insulting.
Lay off the soup.

On another note.
Though I'd agree with an earlier statment that basing a game out of the current events in Ukraine is a little bit cringy (using the term in it's actual, original meaning, not the meme "you kinda cringe bro"), I'm a sucker for simple HTML corruption base games like that. Even more with a female protag.
I'm gonna try this one at some point.

As for other comments that already came in a lot...
Well, Kcrag, don't pay too much attention to people bashing you about using "the same actress again". Even if you did, they'd complain, and if you went the other route of using multiple people who just vaguely look alike like other game (like, I dunno, just using various random blond girls to find stuff that fits your need depending on the scenes), people would still complain that you use different girls anyway.
There's no winning this, so don't get too much into those comments. There's no right answer to that issue unless you somehow have a bunch of actresses ready to shoot for you that never appeared on the internet before.

Just keep going, learn at your own pace, and ignore people who can't make actual sensible criticism and just come to order you around and talk shit. You'll improve over time, learn how to make new stuff and how to consolidate what's already there.
Also, I doubt other HTML devs would say no to a few advices if you try to contact them, especially about stuff like how to tone down the game's weight.

Good luck. Looking forward to how your project is gonna unfold.
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Hey, Rutonat, thank you so much for stopping by and checking out my project. This is my first ever project and I don't really know how others do it, but I will definitely try to contact other developers for tips. Honestly I agree, I don't think I will ever be able to satisfy everyone when it comes to using MC looks or content because everyone has their own opinions and kinks, I will try my best tho and seeing someone support me like this really makes me want to continue working hard on this project. I started this project purely out of passion I don't really care about money or anything like that, I just want to see people enjoy something that I've created :)
 
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WulfgarD

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I have to say first, that I just had a little look into the game, so maybe some things I will mention are already there, but I did not see them. I like the idea, that there is not the quickstartslut, starting the game and *bang* the mc is the whore of Babylon. But the grind should be kond of fun. The most games raise corruption or depravity by repeating the same stuff again and again. It is easy to write, but boring as hell. If I got it right, you raise corruption in this game by cleaning the living room. Despite the lack of reason, why the character becomes more corrupted by cleaning the window in her underwear, the first question is, why is she doing it that way at all. I would built the corruption a little bit different, which is sadly combined with more effort. Let her witness some sexual stuff, like people making out in the park, having sex etc. First the mc might be embarrassed, but then she might become more curious. In the cafe add a second waitress, who is already the plaything of the boss. Depending on how you want to have the story told, the mc gets corrupted by witnessing some stuff and makes her move, maybe with some financial interests. Or the the boss makes the move for whatever reason. Then give the possibilites of bad turns. For example it might be a stupid idea to get drunk as a skunk at the club. You might get robbed, abused or anything like this. The important point is, that actions have consequences. For the technical part, make sure that there is always an exit. Maybe I just did not see it, but I think it is missing in the relation-window.
 
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Black Xoul

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Will there be a game where a man/woman/an object goes to war-torn area and fought along side the defenders... then fuck his/her/they/them way through invading country? Count me in if there's some thing like that
 
Krcag

Krcag

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Black Xoul said:
Will there be a game where a man/woman/an object goes to war-torn area and fought along side the defenders... then fuck his/her/they/them way through invading country? Count me in if there's some thing like that
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Planned to do as end game content :)
 
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GUS_tabin

GUS_tabin

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Good concept!
I saw that you are new developing with Twine, If you have any questions feel free to ask and I'll be glad to help you!
Good Luck :cool:
 
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dingo4life

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Alright, so when it comes to conversion of gifs, you can just search on google for a gif to webm converter and from what I remember you don't even need to download anything, just upload it, I can't link you the best one as it's been so long since I tried my hand at a game.

There are plenty of YouTube video series going through the basics of making a game, a lot of them tend to be a bit dry but if you are just working from the wiki, having tried to make a simple game first to get all the basics down may be a good idea to save you trouble in the long run. I'm not trying to discourage you but coding is fickle and you seem to be making some nooby mistakes (understandable but I'll still mention it).

Places to find webms/mp4s I would usually suggest are Realbooru, 4chan /gif/ and /r/ (where you can ask for what you need) and imagefap. There are probably others but these I've found are the easiest ways to find what I've wanted when it comes to webms/mp4s and on Realbooru that is also one of the search terms.

Last but not least, don't rely too heavily on polls for content, make what you want to make and set some specific goals for updates, then go ask when your split on something, otherwise you will end up with like 50 different half finished routes and pieces of content.
 
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