First, who said I played the free version?I wonder why you still spend so much time in writing posts here. As you said, you deleted the game, you skipped the text and just watched the CG's because it isn't worth reading it in your eyes. Well, that's ok, it's your opinion, you can have it.
But don't forget, you complain about nearly everything in the game, but play it for free. DecentMonkey spends nearly all of his time for this project, he works very hard all day long. Besides you, 1.1k patrons appreciate his work. Not only because of the high quality renders and the outstanding love for details (just one example, have a look at Monicas finger nails or the posters and plates in the Shiny Hole), but also because of the story. English is not native language of the dev, but native speakers help him now, as for me, I help him in doing the german translation. English also isn't my native language, but it may be ok for 6th grade in your educational system.
FB is an adult game, it's not a novel written to achieve the nobel price in literature. Me and most patrons (who pay for the game and have one or two more rights when it comes to complaining), would not play the game if it was like you described it has to be. A totally realistic game could be fun, but not in the FB universe. The dev plays with emotions, he loves exaggerations and creates an alternative world. That's why we play and love the game. Of course, not everybody does or will like it. But nobody forces you to enjoy or play it. But please realise that the game will not be written as you say here it should be written. You are absolutely free to create your own game. In it, you can do whatever you want, you can write it as you wish to. When you then have 1k patrons, we can talk again about this issue.
My profile here is strictly for this site. I don't use it any other place. That includes email and so on. Yea, I like my privacy.
His ability to speak or write English or the translation aren't the issue.
I don't remember complaining about his artistic ability in fact it is the one area I gave him credit on.
How about we just focus on the actual complain I have. Summarized.
That being that the method he use (to excess) doesn't fit the character or situation design of the story he introduced in EP1.
1. The character he built in EP1 isn't that likely to get their feathers ruffled easily.
2. He over uses Monica panicking to explain her going along with stuff. In fact don't think he uses anything else. at all. The only content I haven't seen is this release.
3. Monica is made more into a victim in EP2 than someone I want to hate or watch fall down.
4. That's compounded by being able to go from EP1 to EP2 only done one bad thing and still being shown as a "Decent Girl".
