As of writing this the game is in version 2.0.4 obviously not complete.
Art work is better than many if not most games I have currently played which is a lot.
The plot and story is better than most that's without a doubt. There are some issues with the plot nothing to big that can't be fixed. The initial excuse for her troubles is an example. It would make far more sense for the opponent to want her in his debt than the way they went. Having someone like her in your debt with the power of a fashion magazine would be much more valuable to any political opponent or party especially with the type of control it could have given them over her.
Easiest way to fix this is party member from opposition shows up at jail they and Marcus lay out the position she is in and offer her a fix and she will forever own them. They get the benefit of having the magazine as a political power house in issue they want to address and they get to screw her husband over by turning his wife against him.
Minor personality issue with Main Character. She is smart she has to be to get where she was. No idiot would achieve that level of success and maintain it. So Philip and Steve there is no way she would settle for that low of monetary compensation.
The benefit of going to Philip over Biff isn't large enough to make it worth while there is no real incentive. She is going to be forced into the same situation regardless who she goes with as we said she is smart so she will see that coming. It also isn't less humiliating to go with Philip if anything it is more for her. So that isn't a reason so it leaves money and that is far to low. So makes ZERO sense at all. If she got a full 5K from Philip and 4K from Biff then maybe.
As for Steve she has a full week to make 5K. She also knows a sure fire way to ensure her payment is made right then and there from dealing with Victoria and Biff. There is ZERO chance the moron Steve would pulled that over on her character type. Also if she was going to settle for doing it with some for money she probably would chose to do it first with people she didn't loath as much as she clearly does Steve.
The easiest way to resolve the Steve contradiction is increase the money a lot 50K or more. There are a hell of a lot of issues to over come his appearance vs her's and her dislike for him are two huge ones.
I think if money played a bigger part and had more uses in the game it could generally fix most of these issues. Clothing, housing, start her own business, electronics, computer, pay for a lawyer beside Dick to get her an Identity legal or illegal, She could pay for information, bribes... countless uses.
Also one huge issue. Her identity the government when it sheep dips does a lot of work to create similar identities for people they sheep dip. Truthfully she is pretty much in a perfect spot she could seek revenge without it coming back on her all she needs is a pair of gloves a wig an unbrella and look up how to make medical grade facial prosthetic. She could set these people up for all sorts of crap having it look like they kill each other off, commit crimes and a lot more. She could use the kids computer to access the internet clearly she is able to get access because the porn is up and available online on it. So can't say she is locked out. Even so how hard do you think it would be for her to bribe him, "you can touch my boobs"?
I gave it a 5 so far because I am not sure how apparent these issues are to others. I think they are apparent to me because of my background. Also they are easily fixable and I have to assume since a huge part of the story is about money and that money will have to become more important than it is which should force a number of these issues to be corrected.
Updating this as of ep2-0.6
Still mostly favorable. Few minor issues I assume will be patched out or the game can't proceed.
Art work is better than many if not most games I have currently played which is a lot.
The plot and story is better than most that's without a doubt. There are some issues with the plot nothing to big that can't be fixed. The initial excuse for her troubles is an example. It would make far more sense for the opponent to want her in his debt than the way they went. Having someone like her in your debt with the power of a fashion magazine would be much more valuable to any political opponent or party especially with the type of control it could have given them over her.
Easiest way to fix this is party member from opposition shows up at jail they and Marcus lay out the position she is in and offer her a fix and she will forever own them. They get the benefit of having the magazine as a political power house in issue they want to address and they get to screw her husband over by turning his wife against him.
Minor personality issue with Main Character. She is smart she has to be to get where she was. No idiot would achieve that level of success and maintain it. So Philip and Steve there is no way she would settle for that low of monetary compensation.
The benefit of going to Philip over Biff isn't large enough to make it worth while there is no real incentive. She is going to be forced into the same situation regardless who she goes with as we said she is smart so she will see that coming. It also isn't less humiliating to go with Philip if anything it is more for her. So that isn't a reason so it leaves money and that is far to low. So makes ZERO sense at all. If she got a full 5K from Philip and 4K from Biff then maybe.
As for Steve she has a full week to make 5K. She also knows a sure fire way to ensure her payment is made right then and there from dealing with Victoria and Biff. There is ZERO chance the moron Steve would pulled that over on her character type. Also if she was going to settle for doing it with some for money she probably would chose to do it first with people she didn't loath as much as she clearly does Steve.
The easiest way to resolve the Steve contradiction is increase the money a lot 50K or more. There are a hell of a lot of issues to over come his appearance vs her's and her dislike for him are two huge ones.
I think if money played a bigger part and had more uses in the game it could generally fix most of these issues. Clothing, housing, start her own business, electronics, computer, pay for a lawyer beside Dick to get her an Identity legal or illegal, She could pay for information, bribes... countless uses.
Also one huge issue. Her identity the government when it sheep dips does a lot of work to create similar identities for people they sheep dip. Truthfully she is pretty much in a perfect spot she could seek revenge without it coming back on her all she needs is a pair of gloves a wig an unbrella and look up how to make medical grade facial prosthetic. She could set these people up for all sorts of crap having it look like they kill each other off, commit crimes and a lot more. She could use the kids computer to access the internet clearly she is able to get access because the porn is up and available online on it. So can't say she is locked out. Even so how hard do you think it would be for her to bribe him, "you can touch my boobs"?
I gave it a 5 so far because I am not sure how apparent these issues are to others. I think they are apparent to me because of my background. Also they are easily fixable and I have to assume since a huge part of the story is about money and that money will have to become more important than it is which should force a number of these issues to be corrected.
Updating this as of ep2-0.6
Still mostly favorable. Few minor issues I assume will be patched out or the game can't proceed.