Ren'Py Fashion Business [Ep.4 v9.02 Extra] [DecentMonkey]

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Lycan73 said:
My two cents' worth:

I strongly dislike routes going down the, "She looks exactly like Monica, sounds exactly like Monica, knows everything that Monica does, and behaves exactly like Monica, but, for mysterious reasons, she isn't Monica," lane. Biff. Mrs. White. Amongst others. Now, Steve has headed down that lane. Ryan, the photographer, is headed in that direction, too. Wouldn't it have been better if everyone knew it was Monica, but, at the same time, had the knowledge that Monica was down on her luck, and, consequently, were eager to exploit Monica's situation to their advantage?

Take the example of the office guy. He gets to fuck Monica. Fuck his own boss. And, obviously, derives immense pleasure in doing so. "Man, I just got to fuck my own boss! My own arrogant, conceited boss! My desires, my fantasies came true!" Now, imagine if he had fucked Monica with the knowledge that it was not Monica, but a mere $300 hooker that looked like Monica. It wouldn't have had the same impact; it would've merely been a roleplay.

The photoshoots are another example. What got the staff gossip going was seeing their own boss with her tits out on her own magazine cover. However, imagine if they had the knowledge that it wasn't their boss, but simply a hooker that looked like her. It wouldn't have had the same impact on them.

I feel it would've been far more exciting if people had exploited Monica, not her look-alike from the slums. A down-on-her-luck Monica and Mrs. White, for example, where the latter is aware that things have gone south for Monica and is eager to exploit Monica's situation to her advantage would've translated into much more exciting and steamy scenarios.

Bottom line, the story should not only be about Monica's humiliation; the feelings and emotions Monica goes through, but also about the pleasure others take in humiliating and/or enjoying Monica, knowing it is her. Like Fred, the Fuck, for example. Note the sly look and grin on his face, how much he enjoys his former boss's downfall. Or Adrian. How much he enjoyed his encounter with Monica at the hotel, with the knowledge that it was Monica. Or Phillip.

Let everyone enjoy Monica, knowing it is Monica.
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I agree in the circumstances where Monica is dealing with someone who knew her before the downfall. In particular Mrs White and Ryan. Ryan is yet to be convinced and it might be a good scene with Monica having to convince him. The Mrs White scenario of believing Monica is a double is the hardest to buy. It was okay before Monica spoke in her presence but I too rolled my eyes a bit when Mrs White believed her story. Though I did get a little suspicious that Mrs White is on to Monica's lies from her conversations with the blonde model while Monica could be seen in the background with a dildo in her arse.

The body double lie works better with people who only know her from reputation. Who would believe "The Monica Buckfett" would be doing the lewd shoots or working as an escort? Even Adriano who could clearly tell that it was Monica ended believing it possible that she was a double just from the sexual acts she preformed on him.

Like you I find the scenes better when the character interacting with Monica knows very well who she is.
 
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Sure would love to see a scene/game where Monica has a normal relationship. Love her model but don't find any of her scenarios in this game erotic. As of now, she is being wasted.
 
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FullyAnimated said:
Sure would love to see a scene/game where Monica has a normal relationship. Love her model but don't find any of her scenarios in this game erotic. As of now, she is being wasted.
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How far did you get in the game before you gave up on that dream?:) Obviously I do not agree that Monica's model is wasted. Anna from "Anna Exciting Affection" in the second chapter is the epitome of a wasted model in my opinion. First chapter though is worth a playthrough.
 
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I do not understand why it is so hard to allow players to be able to switch angls by themselfs during the animations..not just to watch how camera switches every 5 seconds...In other aspects game is amazing.
 
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