Wow! Sorry for creating such a bad game and waste your time by playing in it
Maybe I don't think by my brains (as you said), but... I have a question: What makes people as you suffer for hours playing the worst game in the world?
There are tons of bad games, and you just registered on this forum for post message about how this game is bad. And the funny thing is, many haters play every new version of this game
Maybe you admit to yourself that this game causes emotions. It's not like tasteless bubble-gum, and then perhaps you look at it in another light.
I'm sorry I was rude when I wrote that I didn't think you're thinking with your brain. It was rude putting like that and totally offensive and useless to translate what I think.
You can write a story from A to Z and fill some letters by something you think to know. That's up to you to create a world but your readers will always try to bring the story in a reality. If they don't succeed to believe in those letters you filled mechanically they may give up.
I didn't see/understand all connections you wanted to introduce us.
I stopped after saw Fred in front Dick's office. And I believe it's the real start of the story. And obviously I have question and my curiosity has been a little bit raised.
But the time to get there. Man it's insane.
I'm still thinking this all jail's story it is a non-sens.
She's famous, one second later she lost everything. Even her rights. Like she never exists. We get out from those 2 weeks of jail where we learned nothing except the farm the last day. No phone (why ?) no money.
It looks like there are an investigation in progress but her office and her house has been sold/taken by someone else in 2 weeks. But her bank accounts has been frozen. No offshore accounts ?
. She is no one, but she is able to get out of jail by a "mistake"/loophole with the law. So there is something higher than Marcus and he has to release someone who doesn't exist
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It's the first time I heard that you could loose your nationality from birth after 10 years. In my country there are small very small case where you can loose it.
No media, no one recognized her. She has been erased in only 2 weeks ?! From my point of view it'd be more interesting to replace her by a "clone" and pretend she's a liar. Or push a scandal more around her and use all the people you introduced us to bury her.
I may had some bad choices and at the end I was only friendly with Julia (I think). So obviously no help from Dick it's kind of the first things logic I read. (but why does he knows about the farm and help her to get out from jail and not helper at the end. ? If a woman acts like a bitch to me and i know what's waiting her ... I'll use it, like Fred is doing but still... maybe I'm on the wrong branch.)
For me. There are too many things you're trying to put in the introduction. And I don't think the way you did is relevant. By the time it takes or the game play. (When we don't play Monica and we can have some choices. I barely had the feeling that my choices with Monica had an impact on the story... so about steve, fred, gazoil store... ).
Go to the point and stop turn around on something obvious.
I.E. :If Julia has to suck Fred's cock. Show : fred grabbing her head pushing down on her knees and the moment later we saw Julia in the hall wiping the corner of mouth. Monica saw a subtle think with her but doesn't take care because she's still piss off at her. Like a really high jump cut. Okay you show less sex content but you keep the focus on Monica until she discovers the real face of her driver.
Don't see a hater when you read me. I'll never spend my time to tell you it's bad for my first post on this forum when I signed of 2 years ago. To be honest you're the first one for who I feel like I needed to say that it's pretty bad. If I didn't rage quit it 's just because there are a little something new that others didn't make.
I answered you from my phone, I'll try to read myself later on the computer to see if it's in the limit of understandable.