- Sep 25, 2020
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I think, the story development in general is very good, indeed. Monica is getting so close to her goal, so it seems plausible to go the last step and get ridd of Biff.Interesting take. I think you are missing the point that Monica is doing that photoshoot because Mr Campbell is the only option she sees that gets rid of Biff from her company. She needs to keep Mr Campbell convinced that the new direction of her magazine was her idea not Biff's. That he is not blackmailing her (which is exactly what is or was happening) so Mr Campbell will enable Monica to remove Biff from his position. Monica believes that Biff's removal will solve many of her problems. We playing the game know very well that it will only lead to more problems for her.
I ask you. What other option has Monica had to get Biff out of her company? Mr Campbell said on the yacht that he would recommend to the other investors that Biff should be removed from his position, so Monica could implement "her true vision" if he believed Monica wasn't being pressured into all the increasingly lewd photoshoots throughout the game and that they were all her idea. If she backed out of that shoot Campbell would not support her and Biff would remain in control of her magazine.
I think the latest developments of the Mr Campbell and investor plot ( along with the Vip - Steve storyline) are some of the strongest elements of the game recently. The home storyline has been the real weakness lately. Fred's magic cock is just so dumb. Monica cleaning her neighbours house because she can't resist Fred's cock belongs as a storyline in Anna Exciting Affection not Fashion Business.
But I got the feeling that she will soon find out that she get out of the fire into the pan, and that Mr Campbell will have more power over her destiny as Biff ever has.
But - the progression in the photoshot is a bit repetetive. Her thinking goes in circles. There are allways the same lines about 1. Men are pigs, 2. i have to und will endure this to become boss again. 3. How this can happen to me, the famous Monica B.? 4. After this, never again. 5. I will crush them all.
And this lines popping up in different variations again and again. This is killing the dynamic of the scene imho.
But in general - i like the development of the plot.