DecentMonkey
I guess something is a bit broken by now. At least with version 2.07.
The mistakes in the text are no problem ^^
But I experience some errors in the game flow, even after deleting the renpy folder in AppData completely and start a new game.
Maybe starting a new game makes it replicable.
I started a new game, choosing the option "Monica tried to be as polite as she could".
Afterwards I tried to prevent any action that raises her corruption or bitchness level. Avoiding contact to all side characters. I just tried to do the main story as fast as possible ...
Speak with Ralph.
Wait til evening.
Got to the office and meet Biff.
Lending 5 bucks from the secretary.
Go to bed hungry.
Let Fred send me to Dick next morning.
Talk to Dick and Victoria.
Sleep 2 times a day until Friday evening
--> "Go to bed hungry". But now it's not necessary anymore to actually eat after 3 days. Maybe dev changes this on purpose (so you don't have to raise corruption for eating), maybe it's a bug in 2.07.
Go to Biff Friday evening, agree to the 1st photoshoot, do the shooting in the pink dress (all in all, 30 inevitable corruption points ;_; ) and go to the "charity event".
Talk and drink with Philip.
Get your 4k from Biff.
Refuse Philip's generous offer.
Walk to Dick's office and then home, sleep a night and then immediately back to Dick's office (no sex for Fred ^^ ).
Have to speak with Victoria. Dick is not there.
Sleep again and meet Dick next morning.
Refuse to kiss Victorie's boots.
Dick prevents that Monica gets arrested.
Force conversation ( charming greedy angel needs a little more money) ... next would be a conversation with Melanie about Dick.
Agree to Melanie to do the photoshooting.
I ask Biff for the next shooting in the evening and do this shooting (Lady Noir) using the green arrows.
I don't take the money from Biff
---> still, the task to earn 5k$ for Victoria vanishes
Skip until Friday, sleep until Saturday.
A short stop at Victoria ... anything's fine, she's looking forward for the next shopping tour next Friday. But she doesn't mention the 5k$ that she expected to get until yesterday!
---> But no new task to earn another 5k$ appears! That must be a bug.
Waiting for evening to do next photoshooting (mandatory to get the shooting with Melanie).
Visit Biff ... secretary is broken now (I thought that happens later last time I played. /shrug)
Next costume available (last time I tried, I stuck at the 2nd costume and couldn't progress to the next one /shrug)
For a change, I answer "I'm a good girl" (if I answer "leave without money" it happens the same as before)
Now Biff actually transfers the money to Victoria
Next morning, the events about Victoria trigger now. She spends the money and the quest reappears.
I continues until the shooting with Melanie and did the shooting with her.
Then, I skip until Friday and visit the photo studio again at daytime to talk to Melanie.
--> She tells me that the shooting with her will be the next shooting (AGAIN!)
On Saturday evening I visit the office again, talking to Biff, getting the next photo shooting. I can choose the shooting with Melanie again (and the shootings before). I guess that's a major bug.
I remember that I repeated this several times last time I tried the speed run for this path. No change at all.
This time (after the 2nd shooting with Melanie) I answered "I'm a good girl". And I visited Melanie the next day (Sunday), not several days later. Still, Melanie tells Monica that their shooting will be the next one ...
So, this is where the game breaks ^^