Some random thoughts upon completion of 2-07:
Anybody else think that the final photo shoot where Melanie takes the camera is really for the magazine put out to the patrons of the ranch? I thought that introducing that possibility was a nice touch.
For those calling for a depiction of the Ranch very soon, remember that
(1) the first horrific factor in the Ranch is that it is brutal and the slaves reduced to zero free will, meaning that there would be little opportunity to have any choice at all for Monica and thus the player. It would be a slide show, and
(2) the second horrific factor in the Ranch is that it heavily features bestiality and thus would violate Patreon's terms of service. Once included in the game, it would preclude further distribution of the game via Patreon and damage DecentMonkey's income potential (and thus his ability to continue developing the main game).
Far better to continue to use the Ranch as a motivation for Monica, and maybe have a separately-packaged "bad end" mini-game distributed through some other means, when the main story is done.
Is there actually a scene where Fred takes pictures of a bottomless Monica rubbing the stain? I never saw it, but Fred acts like he has them.
The Victoria-Melanie scene seemed very off to me. First, Victoria seemed to know far more about Melanie's position than she could credibly have known, and the photo she had seemed a very weak point on which to blackmail. Melanie is at this point a "talent scout" for the Ranch, and, it seems to me, would just add Victoria to the list. Second, the amount of blackmail money is ludicrous (as was the $5,000 dollars Monica was forced to pay). Victoria is just creating a situation where it is cheaper to pay someone to get rid of her than it is to pay her off. If she knows so much about Melanie's connections to bad people that Melanie is scared of, she knows that Melanie is in contact with people that can do those very bad things to
her.
The new police station stuff is good (Go To Marcus route). If the first jail scene ever gets re-done for any reason, I'd like to see Monica get the same prison uniform as in the second one. The pristine-white underwear after a week without bathing or washing clothing just didn't work for me.
All in all, I liked this update more than probably any other. Yes, it's far grindier than I'd like, but it really advanced the main story and added a number of very hot elements to a bunch of side stories. Anyone still playing at this point and not making at least a token payment to DM via Patreon (like I am) should reconsider. We need to reward these kinds of games and developers, so other devs are motivated to create stuff like this.