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my thoughts too. but it has to be AFTER ranch 218. not that i'm fan of bestiality or humiliation of monica (heck, i can't wait revenge on victoria), but that is logical path. hit the bottom of humiliation to go up from there.I would venture to suggest that Monica would simply shoot him, than that Marcus would actually be arrested, being one of the important figures of this corrupt country.. (imho)
also we're on same page about ending3 you mentioned as one of your ideas for ending. after revenge it is possible that she get back same life, but she is not same person anymore. therefor ending3 is most logical. i see her as a kind of sex addict who got her money and power over men back, but fashion business is now boring to her, so she turned it into porn and escort industry where she has active role. i wish there is progress in text that shows how she started to enjoy debaucheries and perversions more and more (there are some shy indications, but it should be more explicit).
that way you can include parts of your endings 2 & 4 (revenge/getting back power) into end3.
i don't see redemption itself as a path. why? meeting all these lowlife people around her (from slums to high class villas) and suffering can only increase her bad opinion about other people, strengthen her opinion that they are not worth her and that she is superior. so redemption won't work.