agn25
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Yeah I think Monica jumping out of the pan and into the fire is what is the crux of the game. Mr Campbell will have more and more crude demands for Monica. Much more compromising to Monica than the idiot Biff would have come up with. Mr Campbell doesn't think Monica is a $20 whore like Biff did. And I suspect that Mr Campbell is well aware of Monica's situation and is using that info against Monica just like Steve and Phillip are.I think, the story development in general is very good, indeed. Monica is getting so close to her goal, so it seems plausible to go the last step and get ridd of Biff.
But I got the feeling that she will soon find out that she get out of the fire into the pan, and that Mr Campbell will have more power over her destiny as Biff ever has.
But - the progression in the photoshot is a bit repetetive. Her thinking goes in circles. There are allways the same lines about 1. Men are pigs, 2. i have to und will endure this to become boss again. 3. How this can happen to me, the famous Monica B.? 4. After this, never again. 5. I will crush them all.
And this lines popping up in different variations again and again. This is killing the dynamic of the scene imho.
But in general - i like the development of the plot.
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