Finished v. 02, and continued to enjoy the story. Ren'py works so much better. A few comments:
1. There are needless clicks in the game. Standing in the upstairs hall, I need to click "stairs," and then, when that image is loaded, click on "stairs down." Why not have the hall option lead directly downstairs? Why make the player click twice? Same thing in the bathroom. I click on shower, and then have to click on shower again after the shower image loads. Why cannot I take a shower from the bathroom, like I can the bath? The designer should look scrupulously for places to pare back clicks (and maybe get some help, since it is hard to edits one's own work).
2. The addition of choice continues to make the game much more fun and rewarding. The dialogues seemed a lot more natural in v.02 than v.01, and certainly more natural than in the 1.04 version.
3. Monica's really, really awkward way of entering her car is kinda hot, but it does kind of spoil the idea that she is graceful. You might want to reconsider that set of pictures. Having her skirt ride up when she has one foot inside the car and one out could be as hot, without making her look like such a klutz.
4. Images and animations continue to be excellent. These may be the best, most natural sex animations I've seen.
Keep up the good work.