Alea iacta est

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I wanna Fred update in next update it'll be so much fun & intense and some romance between monica & fred
What is this non sense of romance.

For haven sake how can you wank on romance stuff?!?

It is like Saturday night checkbox sex activity with the wife.

I am afraid dear vanilla boy, you are in the wrong neighborhood, here you will find just drugs, prostitution, rape, gangbang, BDSM and all the other related hardcore shit.

And at the end of the story Monica she will be killed, her organs sold on black market and the rest of the body dumped in a landfill.

... All these words to say... No romance in this dirty neighborhood
 

Wagdy75

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There are no "5-minute videos" related to Marcus and the Farm in the game. As for content, FB has a Marcus storyline that started in episode 2 (Monica's visit to the police department) and was continued in episode 3 (Monica's training for Marcus and the Farm owners). That's all for now.
I didn't mean to say video, I mean to say scene or content. Is there enough content or just a very short story?
 

Stan5851

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I didn't mean to say video, I mean to say scene or content. Is there enough content or just a very short story?
Unfortunately, there is no separate storyline for The Farm. Unless you count the events of ep1 (the beginning of the whole story), we have 2 interesting events of Monica in prison in episode 2 (visiting Marcus), and only one event in ep3
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(extremely interesting and revealing many interesting details). Without revealing all the spoilers, I'll just say that Monica is still expected at the Farm, but when and in what capacity she will go there is an open question. Most likely (unfortunately), sending her to the Farm will only be one of the 8 promised endings of the entire game (in the finale of ep4). Thus, compared to the massive scope of the main story, the content of Marcus' plot can really only be called a short story.

However, in the latest Ep3 updates, the game has a massive BDSM quest (which will be released over the course of several Ep4 updates) related to Monica's ordeal in Philip's basement, but it's not the same as Marcus' content, despite some similar BDSM elements.
 
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I'll explain why the spoiler upset me. My favorite plot is the shiny hole. There should be a new private room, gloryhole, where you have to develop three character lines (Claire, Monica, Ashley). To make a great branch of this plot you need an update in every version. There are a lot of scenes to be done, and the author doesn't have time to do everything because of such minor updates. The line of Claire and Joe was rush, Claire is playing with that worthless and pathetic Joe, even without handjob and blowjob, then he is already fucking her in the next scene. The bitter irony is that there may be a shiny hole scene, but this one will be a masturbation in the toilet by another dancer from Shiny hole (I forget the name):confused:. And this is the last chapter of the game. I love this game and I'm afraid that due to too much storytelling, some plots will be rush like "story of love" between pathetic Joe and queen Claire:sneaky:
 
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podkop09

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For example, Claire's privates, she was reluctant to undress in them, only at the request of Monica. At the last private, she played with two losers, only touching the penis of one of them with the tip of her tongue. It was intriguing to watch Claire's sexuality unfold, a lot of potential in this story. But the game is "drowning" in a lot of plots. And there is a risk that either we won’t see Claire’s privates with these two clients at all, or we’ll just have DP and that’s it, end of Claire story
 

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I'll explain why the spoiler upset me. My favorite plot is the shiny hole. There should be a new private room, gloryhole, where you have to develop three character lines (Claire, Monica, Ashley). To make a great branch of this plot you need an update in every version. There are a lot of scenes to be done, and the author doesn't have time to do everything because of such minor updates. The line of Claire and Joe was rush, Claire is playing with that worthless and pathetic Joe, even without handjob and blowjob, then he is already fucking her in the next scene. The bitter irony is that there may be a shiny hole scene, but this one will be a masturbation in the toilet by another dancer from Shiny hole (I forget the name):confused:. And this is the last chapter of the game. I love this game and I'm afraid that due to too much storytelling, some plots will be rush like "story of love" between pathetic Joe and queen Claire:sneaky:
That's why I have doubts that the game is designed for 4 episodes and not 5.
 

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well, nothing to say, a great start to the game. I strongly advise the author to send the current translator to hell. the Russian translation that he did is just "hug and cry", shame and disgrace. use of inappropriate words. Or was it on his own initiative that he made such a stylistic move in order to increase the player’s rejection of the character he plays for, so that the player would more easily form the impression of MC as a stupid woman? this translator has a governess in the house!!! Secretly, cleaning the house is a job for a maid. in the English version, everything is correct - cleaning around the house is the job of a maid.
 
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Alea iacta est

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well, nothing to say, a great start to the game. I strongly advise the author to send the current translator to hell. the Russian translation that he did is just "hug and cry", shame and disgrace. use of inappropriate words. Or was it on his own initiative that he made such a stylistic move in order to increase the player’s rejection of the character he plays for, so that the player would more easily form the impression of MC as a stupid woman? this translator has a governess in the house!!! Secretly, cleaning the house is a job for a maid. in the English version, everything is correct - cleaning around the house is the job of a maid.
Did you wank on this game?
 

ramvivat

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Did you wank on this game?
frankly, I still ask myself the question "why the hell did I download this couple of ten gigabytes?" I'm trying to figure out who this game is made for? maybe or probably, this game will go to the shelf called "not my cup of tea".
because peaceful, mild-mannered sociopaths who corrupt their sisters and mothers in order to get into their panties and put a baby in their tummy are closer to my soul - they don’t try to work for the public, they just figure it out on their own with their object of adoration, albeit sometimes without paying much attention to the difficulties of his object of adoration, but on the contrary, he uses them to his advantage - after all, they are sociopaths and not psychopaths, like the MC of this VN - a girl spoiled from childhood with the manners of a bad princess. but it's not the trouble that she is a princess - the trouble is that I play for the princess. the trouble is that those men who try to get into the panties of the princess are just as disgusting, because they are stereotyped. the driver - looks like if not a deliverer of prostitutes to clients, then some kind of petty gangster, also stereotypical (see the movie "Knockin' on Heaven"). the lawyer is a fat hog, and I have a deep dislike for such a combination as "fat" + "boss" + "children's problems" - this combination is simply deadly - as soon as I understand that a fat person belongs to this category - I am no longer with such a person I communicate.
and in this game, I seem to be forced to communicate with him, and even being in the role of a woman - which is even more unacceptable...

this game pisses me off. however, I'm in no hurry to erase this game. because I need to understand myself - what exactly infuriates me here. I have yet to figure this out. although I feel that if there is a strong reaction, then apparently the game touched some kind of sore nerve in me. this is psychology, comrade ... all VN 18+ are about psychology. all without exception. because sex is the best hook to fish out all sorts of muddy and incomprehensible monsters from the dark pond of the subconscious. and you need to pull them out into the light of day in order to understand yourself. although I don't know, maybe later someday when I work through the problems - maybe I'll start to enjoy it.

in the meantime - while I have pain in one place from the birth of a large number of bricks. i need to calm down =)

did i wank you ask? oh man NO! for me this VN is not wank-material... for now.
for now this VN is a piss-material =))
 
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ramvivat

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You didn't specify what language the translation is bad in
ok i quote myself
>> the Russian translation that he did is just "hug and cry"
i mean not good translation, not correct words taken.

pronouns in the middle of the sentence - with a capital letter, as if this is an official document written using clerical turns, but not an artistic story - typical mistakes of a modern young man who did not learn Russian well.
Stationery and porn stories don't go well together, in my opinion, do they? =)
even worse when medical terms are used in porn - it generally breaks every mood = cock-down...

The Russian translation of episode 1 requires careful proofreading of the text and correction of errors, both stylistic and otherwise. the translator did his job poorly and should be fired (and take away the money paid to him for his low-quality work from this unfortunate translator - he did not deserve it) - I agree with the MC of this VN, which claims that the work should be done by professionals and the work should be made with high quality.
 
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